AAA WBB Iron Treads [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
Iron Treads @ Leftovers
Ability: Well-Baked Body
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Knock Off
- Volt Switch / Stealth Rock / Heavy Slam / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Well-Baked Body Iron Treads is a spinner with a great defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity and ability to compress several roles such as item and entry hazard removal into one Pokemon. It is notably able to threaten the tier's premier spinblocker in Skeledirge, allowing it to remove hazards freely. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Hisuian Arcanine. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciate Iron Treads removing items from shared switch-ins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. Iron Treads's Rapid Spin also supports the hazard stacking effort from partners like Garchomp and Ting-Lu. Certain Fire-types like Cinderace and Ceruledge can still threaten Iron Treads with their coverage moves, so it appreciates a secondary check to them like Primordial Sea Zapdos.

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Well-Baked Body Iron Treads has a great Defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity and compresses several roles into one Pokemon. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, then Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check threaten Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or use Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Hisuian Arcanine Hisui before it can use Close Combat. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge ceru is kinda sketch cos if it CCs on the switch treads becomes dangerously low, maybe mention how it also absorbs electric moves. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciates Iron Treads removes items from shared switchins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so Defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. i'd also mention that stail can pass wishes to treads since treads has no reliable recovery. treads is also relatively frail specially so maybe add that h/koodra pairs well with it + absorb water moves (koodra since stacking steels becomes worrywhirl)
 
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[SET]
Iron Treads @ Leftovers
Ability: Well-Baked Body
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Knock Off
- Stealth Rock / Heavy Slam / Rock Slide / Volt Switch

[SET COMMENTS]
Well-Baked Body Iron Treads has a great Defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity and compresses several roles into one Pokemon I would emphesize Knock + Spin in the first sentence, since that's a huge part of its utility. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, then Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or use Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Arcanine Hisui before it can use Close Combat Hisuian Arcanine. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciates Iron Treads removes items from shared switchins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so Defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. mention that it pairs well with hazard stack teammates like Chomp, and probably shout out Corv as a ground immunity + backup removal if things get dire

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[SET]
Iron Treads @ Leftovers
Ability: Well-Baked Body
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Knock Off
- Stealth Rock / Heavy Slam / Rock Slide / Volt Switch

[SET COMMENTS]
Well-Baked Body Iron Treads has a great Defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity and compresses several roles such as item and entry hazard removal into one Pokemon I'd mention somewhere how it can spin easily on Skeledirge. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, then Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or use Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Hisuian Arcanine. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciates Iron Treads removes items from shared switchins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so Defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. Iron Treads also supports the hazard stacking effort along with partners like Garchomp and Ting-Lu with Rapid Spin support. Mention how some fire-types like Cinderace can give treads trouble so having a secondary check like Zapdos is appreciated.

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[SET]
Well-Baked Body (Iron Treads) @ Leftovers or "Fire Immunity", set just needs a name
Ability: Well-Baked Body
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Knock Off
- Stealth Rock / Heavy Slam / Rock Slide / Volt Switch

[SET COMMENTS]
Well-Baked Body Iron Treads is a spinner with a great Defensive defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity, and it compresses several roles such as item and entry hazard removal into one Pokemon. It is notably able to threaten the tier's premier spinblocker in Skeledirge, allowing it to Rapid Spin freely. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, then Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or use Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Hisuian Arcanine. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciates appreciate Iron Treads removes removing items from shared switchins switch-ins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so Defensive defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. Iron Treads also supports the hazard stacking effort along with partners like Garchomp and Ting-Lu with Rapid Spin support this reads a bit weird since, the way it currently sounds, it's implied that spin is contributing to the stacking effort. maybe changing it to "...Garchomp and Ting-Lu, and it's (one of the few / the only) Pokemon to do so while providing Rapid Spin support." would be better. Certain Fire-types like Cinderace and Ceruledge can still threaten Iron Treads with their coverage moves, so it appreciates a secondary check to them like Primordial Sea Zapdos. (add period)

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[SET]
Iron Treads @ Leftovers
Ability: Well-Baked Body
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Rapid Spin
- Knock Off
- Volt Switch / Stealth Rock / Heavy Slam / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Well-Baked Body Iron Treads is a spinner with a great defensive typing in addition to a Fire immunity and ability to compresses several roles such as item and entry hazard removal into one Pokemon. It is notably able to threaten the tier's premier spinblocker in Skeledirge, allowing it to Rapid Spin remove hazards freely. If there is already a Stealth Rock user on the team, then Iron Treads can instead use Heavy Slam to check Calm Mind Scream Tail and Enamorus-T, Rock Slide to OHKO Talonflame and Volcarona, or use Volt Switch to bring in teammates safely. 236 Speed EVs are used to outspeed and threaten an OHKO on Jolly Hisuian Arcanine. Pixilate Scream Tail and Primordial Sea users like Inteleon, Greninja, and Quaquaval all appreciate Iron Treads switching into their checks in Desolate Land Fire-types like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. Physical wallbreakers like Chien-Pao and Hisuian Arcanine appreciates appreciate Iron Treads removes items from shared switchins switch-ins like Corviknight and Quaquaval. Fighting- and Ground- types like Galarian Zapdos, Slither Wing, and Garchomp threaten Iron Treads, so defensive partners like Scream Tail, Quaquaval, and Corviknight are recommended. Iron Treads's Rapid Spin also supports the hazard stacking effort along with from partners like Garchomp and Ting-Lu with Rapid Spin support. (not sure if i understood this properly) Certain Fire-types like Cinderace and Ceruledge can still threaten Iron Treads with their coverage moves, so it appreciates a secondary check to them like Primordial Sea Zapdos. (AP)

[SET CREDITS]
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Quality checked by:
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