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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Stone Edge
move 4: Synthesis / Leaf Blade
item: Lum Berry
ability: Justified
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Rock

[SET COMMENTS]
Virizion is a niche setup sweeper that finds windows to sweep largely thanks to its unique defensive profile and high Speed relative to other Fighting-types, outpacing foes such as Scyther and Delphox. It is able to set up on physical walls like Bellibolt, Wo-Chien, and Gligar. Stone Edge is its best option to nail Poison- and Flying-types like Galarian Slowbro and Altaria. Synthesis is necessary for Virizon to have the longevity to set up Swords Dance multiple times, which can be better than Leaf Blade even against walls like Milotic and Gastrodon. However, Leaf Blade is better for revenge killing and ensures that Virizon is not walled by Golurk and Palossand. Lum Berry is essential, as it is the only way Virizon can reliably set up against status spreaders like Bellibolt and Gligar. Tera Rock doubles as the best way to buff Virizon's coverage against foes like Florges, Venusaur, and Decidueye, getting the OHKO at +2 against the latter, and as a means to get the jump on revenge killers like Kilowattrel, Salazzle, and Choice Scarf Staraptor.

Most teams utilize Virizon as an answer to more passive foes in the early-game, sponging weaker hits until it can transition into a late-game sweeper, making it a pick for balance teams that enjoy this role compression. It will need help from offensive teammates like Skuntank and Golurk to get past physical walls like Galarian Slowbro and Florges. In return, Virizon can switch into, set up against, and potentially break through physical walls it has more favorable matchups against, such as Milotic, Bellibolt, and Wo-Chien. Defensive switch-ins to Fairy- and Psychic-types like Scream Tail and Melotta are a necessity, so try using Assault Vest Pokemon like Copperajah and Galarian Slowbro. These walls also work for pivoting around the coverage from bulky offensive threats like Venusaur and opposing Assault Vest Galarian Slowbro that Virizion struggles to break through on its own. As for physically offensive revenge killers like Triple Axel Ambipom and Choice Scarf Flamigo, they can be punished with walls like Static Bellibolt, Rocky Helmet Mudsdale, and Flame Body Coalossal. When opting for Synthesis, it is imperative to have teammates like Staraptor and Bombirdier to deter free switch-ins from the likes of Golurk and Palossand, and Water-types like Paldean Tauros-W and Milotic also help to alleviate the pressure against these Ground-types; Virizon returns the favor by being a solid answer to Electric-types like Belibolt and Rotom-C.

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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Stone Edge
move 4: Synthesis / Leaf Blade
item: Lum Berry
ability: Justified
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Rock

[SET COMMENTS]
Virizion is a niche setup sweeper that finds windows to sweep largely thanks to its unique defensive profile and high Speed relative to other Fighting-types. It is able to setup versus physical walls like Bellibolt, Wo-Chein, and Gligar, which deter most other Swords Dance sweepers, and sweep past fast Flying-types like Scyther and Choice Band Staraptor. Stone Edge is its best option to nail Poison- and Flying-types like Galarian Slowbro and Altaria. Synthesis is necessary for Virizon to have the longevity to setup Swords Dance multiple times, which can be better than Leaf Blade even against walls like Milotic and Gastrodon (If the oppo is leaving in their milo or gastro against viriz they are playing the game wrong lol.). However, Leaf Blade is better for revenge killing, and so that Virizon is not walled by Golurk and Palossand. Lum Berry is essential, as it is the only way Virizon can reliably setup against status spreaders like Bellibolt and Gligar. Tera Rock doubles as the best way to buff Virizon’s coverage against foes like Florges and Decidueye and as a means to get the jump on revenge killers like Scyther, Delphox, and Choice Scarf Staraptor. (any rolls Stone Edge hits w Tera Rock? Ie OHKO on Deci w Tera Rock at +2.)

Most teams utilize Virizon as an answer to more passive foes in the early-game, sponging weaker hits until it can transition into a late-game sweeper. (So, what types of teams does it primarily fit on?) It will need the help from offensive teammates like Skuntank and Golurk to get past physical walls like Galarian Slowbro and Florges. In return, Virizon can switch into and setup against other physical walls it has more favorable matchups against, such as Milotic, Belibolt, and Wo-Chien (and break through them so the teammates can be more potent attackers.). Defensive switch-ins to Fairy- and Psychic-types like Scream Tail and Melotta are a necessity, so try using Assault Vest Pokemon like Galarian Slowbro and Copperajah. As for physically offensive revenge killers like Triple Axel Ambipom and Choice Scarf Flamigo, they can be punished with walls like Static Bellibolt, Rocky Helmet Mudsdale, and Flame Body Coalossal. (swap the placements of coal and muds so it does not sound like you are using muds vs ambipom.) When opting for Synthesis, it is imperative to have teammates like Staraptor and Bombirdier to deter free switch-ins from the likes of Golurk and Palossand, and Water-types like Paldean Tauros-W and Milotic also help to alleviate the pressure against these Ground-types; Virizon returns the favor by being a solid answer to Electric-types like Belibolt and Rotom-M.


[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Grammar checked by:
1/2, nice work :)
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Stone Edge
move 4: Synthesis / Leaf Blade
item: Lum Berry
ability: Justified
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Rock

[SET COMMENTS]
Virizion is a niche setup sweeper that finds windows to sweep largely thanks to its unique defensive profile and high Speed relative to other Fighting-types (mention some stuff like scyther that it outruns.). It is able to setup versus physical walls like Bellibolt, Wo-Chein, and Gligar. Stone Edge is its best option to nail Poison- and Flying-types like Galarian Slowbro and Altaria. Synthesis is necessary for Virizon to have the longevity to setup Swords Dance multiple times, which can be better than Leaf Blade even against walls like Milotic and Gastrodon. However, Leaf Blade is better for revenge killing, and so that Virizon is not walled by Golurk and Palossand. Lum Berry is essential, as it is the only way Virizon can reliably setup against status spreaders like Bellibolt and Gligar. Tera Rock doubles as the best way to buff Virizon’s coverage against foes like Florges and Decidueye (throw offensive venu in here too, wasn't around when this first written but feels relevant to mention.), getting the OHKO at +2 against the latter, and as a means to get the jump on revenge killers like Scyther, Delphox, and Choice Scarf Staraptor.

Most teams utilize Virizon as an answer to more passive foes in the early-game, sponging weaker hits until it can transition into a late-game sweeper, making it a pick for balance teams that enjoy this roll compression. It will need the help from offensive teammates like Skuntank and Golurk to get past physical walls like Galarian Slowbro and Florges. In return, Virizon can switch into, setup against, and potentially break-through other physical walls it has more favorable matchups against, such as Milotic, Belibolt, and Wo-Chien. Defensive switch-ins to Fairy- and Psychic-types like Scream Tail and Melotta are a necessity, so try using Assault Vest Pokemon like Copperajah and Galarian Slowbro (these also help you pivot around venu's coverage if you're unable to go for the KO.). As for physically offensive revenge killers like Triple Axel Ambipom and Choice Scarf Flamigo, they can be punished with walls like Static Bellibolt, Rocky Helmet Mudsdale, and Flame Body Coalossal. When opting for Synthesis, it is imperative to have teammates like Staraptor and Bombirdier to deter free switch-ins from the likes of Golurk and Palossand, and Water-types like Paldean Tauros-W and Milotic also help to alleviate the pressure against these Ground-types; Virizon returns the favor by being a solid answer to Electric-types like Belibolt and Rotom-M Rotom-C.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s1nn0hc0nfirm3d.231074/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
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Grammar checked by:
qc 2/2
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Stone Edge
move 4: Synthesis / Leaf Blade
item: Lum Berry
ability: Justified
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Rock

[SET COMMENTS]
Virizion is a niche setup sweeper that finds windows to sweep largely thanks to its unique defensive profile and high Speed relative to other Fighting-types, outpacing foes such as Scyther and Delphox. It is able to setup versus set up on physical walls like Bellibolt, Wo-Chein Wo-Chien, and Gligar. Stone Edge is its best option to nail Poison- and Flying-types like Galarian Slowbro and Altaria. Synthesis is necessary for Virizon to have the longevity to setup set up Swords Dance multiple times, which can be better than Leaf Blade even against walls like Milotic and Gastrodon. However, Leaf Blade is better for revenge killing (RC) and so ensures that Virizon is not walled by Golurk and Palossand. Lum Berry is essential, as it is the only way Virizon can reliably setup set up against status spreaders like Bellibolt and Gligar. Tera Rock doubles as the best way to buff Virizon’s Virizon's (Fix apostrophe) coverage against foes like Florges, Venusaur, and Decidueye, getting the OHKO at +2 against the latter, and as a means to get the jump on revenge killers like Kilowattrel, Salazzle, and Choice Scarf Staraptor.

Most teams utilize Virizon as an answer to more passive foes in the early-game, sponging weaker hits until it can transition into a late-game sweeper, making it a pick for balance teams that enjoy this roll role compression. It will need the help from offensive teammates like Skuntank and Golurk to get past physical walls like Galarian Slowbro and Florges. In return, Virizon can switch into, setup set up against, and potentially break-through other break through physical walls it has more favorable matchups against, such as Milotic, Belibolt Bellibolt, and Wo-Chien. Defensive switch-ins to Fairy- and Psychic-types like Scream Tail and Melotta are a necessity, so try using Assault Vest Pokemon like Copperajah and Galarian Slowbro. These walls also work for pivoting around the coverage from bulky offensive threats like Venusaur and the opposing Assault Vest Galarian Slowbro (RC) which that Virizion struggles to break through on its own. As for physically offensive revenge killers like Triple Axel Ambipom and Choice Scarf Flamigo, they can be punished with walls like Static Bellibolt, Rocky Helmet Mudsdale, and Flame Body Coalossal. When opting for Synthesis, it is imperative to have teammates like Staraptor and Bombirdier to deter free switch-ins from the likes of Golurk and Palossand, and Water-types like Paldean Tauros-W and Milotic also help to alleviate the pressure against these Ground-types; Virizon returns the favor by being a solid answer to Electric-types like Belibolt and Rotom-C.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s1nn0hc0nfirm3d.231074/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/asa.400292/

Grammar checked by:
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GP Team done
 
Hello, ik the GP check has already been posted, but with the changes in the meta we want you to put this back in WIP. Don't need to start over from scratch, but it will have to go through QCs again. You can also drop it if you want (just tell us if so ofc).
 
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