[UNPUBLISHED] [NU] Cetitan

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Cetitan @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Slush Rush
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

The long cries of Cetitan are being heard around the whole NU tier! Slush Rush combined with Belly Drum turns Cetitan into a beast that can sweep whole teams. Ice Shard takes care of Cetitan's mediocre Speed stat and allows it to chip faster foes such as Flygon, Kilowattrel, and Scyther or OHKO them after Belly Drum. Earthquake thrashes down foes like Registeel and Klefki. Knock Off removes annoying items such as Leftovers and Heavy-Duty Boots while also taking care of foes like Bronzong, Brambleghast, and Basculegion. Alolan Ninetales is a natural partner of Cetitan, as it sets Aurora Veil and activates Slush Rush, allowing Cetitan to set up easily and outspeed foes such as Munkidori and Toxicroak. Kilowattrel and Incineroar are great allies that provide Cetitan with a switch in on a weakened foe, allowing it to set up. Cetitan is easily worn down by entry hazards such as Stealth Rock, so it appreciates Rapid Spin support from allies such as Tentacruel and Brambleghast.

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Cetitan @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Slush Rush
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

A monstrous HP stat, an overpowered Attack stat combined with a Slush Rush and access to Belly Drum turns Cetitan into a beast that can sweep whole teams on it's own this is mor attributed to Belly Drum + Slush Rush than anything else, reword it as such. Ice Shard provides priority taking care of Cetitan's mediocre ? allowing it to chip and after a Belly Drum OHKO faster foes such as Flygon, Kilowattrel and Scyther mention that this lets Cetitan take KOs even when Snow ends. Earthquake thrashes down foes like Alolan Muk and Klefki just mention steel types, muk is not living any attack anyway. Knock Off removes annoying items such as Leftovers and Heavy-Duty-Boots while also taking care of foes for example Bronzong, Brambleghast and Basculegion. Alolan Ninetales is a natural partner of Cetitan as it sets Aurora Veil and activates Slush Rush by setting Snow allowing Cetitan to set up easily while also outspeeding foes for instance Munkidori and Toxicroak. Kilowattrel and Incineroar are great allies that provides Cetitan a pivot-in on a weakened foe allowing it to set up. Cetitan is easily worned down by hazards such as Stealth Rocks so it appreciates Rapid Spin support from allies such as Tentacruel and Brambleghast. mention avalugg as a counter to cetitan; it gets a defense boost in snow and can 2hko with body press. other than that there's a few grammatical errors that you may want to fix

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Stories said:
Cetitan @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Slush Rush
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

A monstrous HP stat, an overpowered Attack stat combined with a Slush Rush and access to Belly Drum turns Cetitan into a beast that can sweep whole teams on it's own this is mor attributed to Belly Drum + Slush Rush than anything else, reword it as such. Ice Shard provides priority taking care of Cetitan's mediocre ? allowing it to chip and after a Belly Drum OHKO faster foes such as Flygon, Kilowattrel and Scyther mention that this lets Cetitan take KOs even when Snow ends. Earthquake thrashes down foes like Alolan Muk and Klefki just mention steel types, muk is not living any attack anyway. Knock Off removes annoying items such as Leftovers and Heavy-Duty-Boots while also taking care of foes for example Bronzong, Brambleghast and Basculegion. Alolan Ninetales is a natural partner of Cetitan as it sets Aurora Veil and activates Slush Rush by setting Snow allowing Cetitan to set up easily while also outspeeding foes for instance Munkidori and Toxicroak. Kilowattrel and Incineroar are great allies that provides Cetitan a pivot-in on a weakened foe allowing it to set up. Cetitan is easily worned down by hazards such as Stealth Rocks so it appreciates Rapid Spin support from allies such as Tentacruel and Brambleghast. mention avalugg as a counter to cetitan; it gets a defense boost in snow and can 2hko with body press. other than that there's a few grammatical errors that you may want to fix

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Implemented, is QC 1/1 now?
 
first sentence: when i said reword i didnt mean keep the original wording and add onto it

remove the chandelure mention you added at the end, can move onto gp after that
 
Cetitan @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Slush Rush
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

you could add one of those quirky intro lines here to beef up the character count a bit Slush Rush combined with Belly Drum turns Cetitan into a beast that can sweep whole teams. Ice Shard provides priority taking takes care of Cetitan's mediocre Speed speed stat allowing and allows it to chip and after a Belly Drum OHKO faster foes such as Flygon, Kilowattrel, (AC) and Scyther even when Snow ends this snow looks irrelevant or OHKO them after Belly Drum. Earthquake thrashes down foes like Registeel and Klefki. Knock Off removes annoying items such as Leftovers and Heavy-Duty-Boots Heavy-Duty Boots while also taking care of foes for example like Bronzong, Brambleghast, (AC) and Basculegion. Alolan Ninetales is a natural partner of Cetitan, (AC) as it sets Aurora Veil and activates Slush Rush, (AC) by setting Snow allowing Cetitan to set up easily while also outspeeding and outspeed foes for instance such as Munkidori and Toxicroak. Kilowattrel and Incineroar are great allies that provides provide Cetitan with a pivot-in switch in on a weakened foe, (AC) allowing it to set up. Cetitan is easily worned worn down by entry hazards such as Stealth Rocks Rock, (AC) so it appreciates Rapid Spin support from allies such as Tentacruel and Brambleghast.
GP Team done
 
adorluigi said:
Cetitan @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Slush Rush
Tera Type: Ground
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Knock Off

you could add one of those quirky intro lines here to beef up the character count a bit Slush Rush combined with Belly Drum turns Cetitan into a beast that can sweep whole teams. Ice Shard provides priority taking takes care of Cetitan's mediocre Speed speed stat allowing and allows it to chip and after a Belly Drum OHKO faster foes such as Flygon, Kilowattrel, (AC) and Scyther even when Snow ends this snow looks irrelevant or OHKO them after Belly Drum. Earthquake thrashes down foes like Registeel and Klefki. Knock Off removes annoying items such as Leftovers and Heavy-Duty-Boots Heavy-Duty Boots while also taking care of foes for example like Bronzong, Brambleghast, (AC) and Basculegion. Alolan Ninetales is a natural partner of Cetitan, (AC) as it sets Aurora Veil and activates Slush Rush, (AC) by setting Snow allowing Cetitan to set up easily while also outspeeding and outspeed foes for instance such as Munkidori and Toxicroak. Kilowattrel and Incineroar are great allies that provides provide Cetitan with a pivot-in switch in on a weakened foe, (AC) allowing it to set up. Cetitan is easily worned worn down by entry hazards such as Stealth Rocks Rock, (AC) so it appreciates Rapid Spin support from allies such as Tentacruel and Brambleghast.
GP Team done
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Implemented
 
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