OU Screens Grimmsnarl (QC 2/2) [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Dual Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, creating opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra defense it provides—eight turns of defense thanks to Light Clay. Light Screen and Reflect also give Grimmsnarl some protection due to Prankster immediately getting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily. Taunt blocks other leads such as Glimmora and Garchomp from setting up entry hazards. Parting Shot with Prankster acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which help teammates attack or set up. Spirit Break can be run to give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks of damage to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. Grimmsnarl can utilize Tera Steel in emergency scenarios, allowing itself to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block Rapid Spin attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper offense teams, where its dual screens are essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra defense can be incredibly important on offensive setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, and Bulk Up Great Tusk. Orthworm can also use dual screens to pass a Substitute to a sweeper threat with Shed Tail. Suicide leads like Glimmora and Meowscarada support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through entry hazards and other utility, like Glimmora's hazard removal or Meowscarda's Taunt and Knock Off.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [BT89, 487308]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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Implemented this and let me know when it's done and I'll take another look. Click Reply to this post to get an editable version of this check, make your edits, and then edit ti back itno the OP of your post so you don't miss anything.

Screens Grimmsnarl
Grimmsnarl (M) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Parting Shot/Thunder Wave
- Spirit Break

[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

make this the set because pranker taunt is really valuable. sets for all these pokemon are on site

[SET COMMENTS]
Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up. (I think make it clear that the extra bulk can ensure that Grimmsnarl gets both screens up). Add Taunt here. Due to being Prankster boosted as well, Parting Shot essentially acts as a better switch (i wouldn't really say "better" i'd just say it's a fast pivot), lowering the opponent’s attack (you don't really need to explain what moves do, that's more dex info), either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or setup for a teammate. Finally, Spirit Break is chosen as its stab option due to it doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk, while lowering Special Attack, once again crucial for bolstering its team’s survivability. (It doesn't really run it to lower Special Attack, it just makes it less passive with an attacking move + Fairy has good coverage) While Grimmsnarl should not be your tera, as increasing the power or tankiness of one of the sweepers it facilitates is incredibly helpful, if need be, Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel to live more hits (specify how it flips its weaknesses and allows it to set up screens vs stuff like Kingambit. Add Tera Ghost to help spinblock too), set up more screens, and overall be a nuisance. However, once again, this is not recommended, as without reliable recovery, it tends to only get in at a couple of opportune moments. (You've already said this, and this reads really casually too)

Pretty much any setup sweeper enjoys Grimmsnarl’s screens. (This reads kinda casually and vague, I think it would be better to say how Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper offense teams that can facilitate setup sweepers) That extra bulk can be incredibly important on sweepers and wallbreakers, on hyper offense, bulky offense, or balance. (Screens is a HO playstyle only) Setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, or Belly Drum Azumarill love having 6-8 turns to set up and get going with all attacks being halved against them. (This is dex info, you don't need to explain that screens offers 8 turns, but instead say what the extra bulk allows these sweepers to set up on) Choice attackers such as Specs Walking Wake or Scarf Gholdengo also love more opportunities to throw out attacks with much less threat of being killed. (With Screens, you really just wanna stack setup mons. Choice mons can be a huge momentum sink when they switch into something that walls the 1 move) Bulky attackers take “immovable objects” to a whole new level. You know the meme of Senator Armstrong from Metal Gear getting punched over and over and not getting hurt? Yeah, Bulk Up Great Tusk behind screens. Grimmsnarl, son. No, analyses should be factual, useful meta-relevant information. It would help to read some of the onsite analyses.

(this should be 2 paragraphs, not 3) Grimmsnarl itself is not usually something you try to support and get rid of it’s counters. Instead, you would most likely want other support Pokemon to make sure Grimmsnarl’s screened sweeper is making it’s mark. For example, if you want your setup sweeper to sweep, but are having trouble with an Unaware Clodsire, you can use a strong non-setup wall breaker to break it, then set up and sweep. However, one thing to remember is that Dark types like Meowscarada, Greninja, and Hydreigon are immune to Parting Shot, but Spirit Break is great to counter those. This isn't really true - with these teams you kinda just want Grimm and really strong Pokemon, not support mons or anything.

For this teammates section, I would add
- General hyper offensive teammates - you want strong Pokemon that don't give up momentum. Your Roaring Moon/Kingambit/Azumarill mentions were good, so just expand more on that point
- You can keep the Tusk mention in, just change the wording to be more informative,
- Potential hazard leads like Glimmora
Some general tips for analysis writing:
- The goal is to be clear, factual, and meta-relevant. You want to explain the set and what teammates fit well with ti as clearly as possible because it's a resource for new players. Sentences should be direct in explaining what the Pokemon does and how it fits into the metagame.
- When writing teammates, think "would I be able to build this as a team and make it work?" Suggesting a screens balance team goes agaisnt that because your bulkier Pokemon just waste screens turns.
- There's no need to explain what the moves do - that's dex info. Dex info is information you can find by just clicking on the mvoe name or doing !dt on PS. What people want to know is "how is this relevant in OU?" For example, dex info is saying screens last 8 turns. Meta-relevant info is saying screens allow Grimmsnarl's teammates to set up against big threats in the meta.
 
autumn said:
Implemented this and let me know when it's done and I'll take another look. Click Reply to this post to get an editable version of this check, make your edits, and then edit ti back itno the OP of your post so you don't miss anything.

Screens Grimmsnarl
Grimmsnarl (M) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 SpD
Careful Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Parting Shot/Thunder Wave
- Spirit Break

[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

make this the set because pranker taunt is really valuable. sets for all these pokemon are on site

[SET COMMENTS]
Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up. (I think make it clear that the extra bulk can ensure that Grimmsnarl gets both screens up). Add Taunt here. Due to being Prankster boosted as well, Parting Shot essentially acts as a better switch (i wouldn't really say "better" i'd just say it's a fast pivot), lowering the opponent’s attack (you don't really need to explain what moves do, that's more dex info), either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or setup for a teammate. Finally, Spirit Break is chosen as its stab option due to it doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk, while lowering Special Attack, once again crucial for bolstering its team’s survivability. (It doesn't really run it to lower Special Attack, it just makes it less passive with an attacking move + Fairy has good coverage) While Grimmsnarl should not be your tera, as increasing the power or tankiness of one of the sweepers it facilitates is incredibly helpful, if need be, Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel to live more hits (specify how it flips its weaknesses and allows it to set up screens vs stuff like Kingambit. Add Tera Ghost to help spinblock too), set up more screens, and overall be a nuisance. However, once again, this is not recommended, as without reliable recovery, it tends to only get in at a couple of opportune moments. (You've already said this, and this reads really casually too)

Pretty much any setup sweeper enjoys Grimmsnarl’s screens. (This reads kinda casually and vague, I think it would be better to say how Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper offense teams that can facilitate setup sweepers) That extra bulk can be incredibly important on sweepers and wallbreakers, on hyper offense, bulky offense, or balance. (Screens is a HO playstyle only) Setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, or Belly Drum Azumarill love having 6-8 turns to set up and get going with all attacks being halved against them. (This is dex info, you don't need to explain that screens offers 8 turns, but instead say what the extra bulk allows these sweepers to set up on) Choice attackers such as Specs Walking Wake or Scarf Gholdengo also love more opportunities to throw out attacks with much less threat of being killed. (With Screens, you really just wanna stack setup mons. Choice mons can be a huge momentum sink when they switch into something that walls the 1 move) Bulky attackers take “immovable objects” to a whole new level. You know the meme of Senator Armstrong from Metal Gear getting punched over and over and not getting hurt? Yeah, Bulk Up Great Tusk behind screens. Grimmsnarl, son. No, analyses should be factual, useful meta-relevant information. It would help to read some of the onsite analyses.

(this should be 2 paragraphs, not 3) Grimmsnarl itself is not usually something you try to support and get rid of it’s counters. Instead, you would most likely want other support Pokemon to make sure Grimmsnarl’s screened sweeper is making it’s mark. For example, if you want your setup sweeper to sweep, but are having trouble with an Unaware Clodsire, you can use a strong non-setup wall breaker to break it, then set up and sweep. However, one thing to remember is that Dark types like Meowscarada, Greninja, and Hydreigon are immune to Parting Shot, but Spirit Break is great to counter those. This isn't really true - with these teams you kinda just want Grimm and really strong Pokemon, not support mons or anything.

For this teammates section, I would add
- General hyper offensive teammates - you want strong Pokemon that don't give up momentum. Your Roaring Moon/Kingambit/Azumarill mentions were good, so just expand more on that point
- You can keep the Tusk mention in, just change the wording to be more informative,
- Potential hazard leads like Glimmora
Some general tips for analysis writing:
- The goal is to be clear, factual, and meta-relevant. You want to explain the set and what teammates fit well with ti as clearly as possible because it's a resource for new players. Sentences should be direct in explaining what the Pokemon does and how it fits into the metagame.
- When writing teammates, think "would I be able to build this as a team and make it work?" Suggesting a screens balance team goes agaisnt that because your bulkier Pokemon just waste screens turns.
- There's no need to explain what the moves do - that's dex info. Dex info is information you can find by just clicking on the mvoe name or doing !dt on PS. What people want to know is "how is this relevant in OU?" For example, dex info is saying screens last 8 turns. Meta-relevant info is saying screens allow Grimmsnarl's teammates to set up against big threats in the meta.
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Implemented! Any other things to fix?
 
Hey, I didn't give this 1/2 yet - I asked you to implement this and let me take another look first. This is QC 1/2 after you've implemented this check; it looks a lot better now.. Also, change "screens" to "dual screens" throughout to match the GP standard.
[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS] - you need to add both these tags so it can be uploaded
Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily due to being bulkier. Taunt also allows it to hinder other leads such as Glimmora from providing utility to their teams with hazards (and it also prevents Pokemon from setting up in fromt of it too). Due to being Prankster boosted as well, (all its status moves are prankster boosted so no need to say every time) Parting Shot essentially (feels too casual) acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. Finally, Spirit Break is chosen as its stab option due to it can be run for give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. (i changed this because spirit break is slashed with parting shot now so there is an option for a set taht doesn't have any attacks at all. spirit break means that you're not shut down by stuff like taunt meowscarada leads + also gives it some offensive presense so stuff like specs valiant can't just spam moonblast and burn screens turns) While Grimmsnarl should not be your tera, as increasing the power or tankiness of one of the sweepers it facilitates is incredibly helpful, if need be, Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel to live more hits while flipping it’s weaknesses, allowing it to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive teams, where it’s screen support is essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk can be incredibly important on sweepers and wall breakers, on hyper offense. (you've already said that) Setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, Bulk Up Great Tusk, or Belly Drum Azumarill enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their sweep. Another great teammate for Grimmsnarl is a suicide hazard lead like Glimmora, who also helps support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through hazards.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
autumn said:
Hey, I didn't give this 1/2 yet - I asked you to implement this and let me take another look first. This is QC 1/2 after you've implemented this check; it looks a lot better now.. Also, change "screens" to "dual screens" throughout to match the GP standard.
[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS] - you need to add both these tags so it can be uploaded
Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily due to being bulkier. Taunt also allows it to hinder other leads such as Glimmora from providing utility to their teams with hazards (and it also prevents Pokemon from setting up in fromt of it too). Due to being Prankster boosted as well, (all its status moves are prankster boosted so no need to say every time) Parting Shot essentially (feels too casual) acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. Finally, Spirit Break is chosen as its stab option due to it can be run for give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. (i changed this because spirit break is slashed with parting shot now so there is an option for a set taht doesn't have any attacks at all. spirit break means that you're not shut down by stuff like taunt meowscarada leads + also gives it some offensive presense so stuff like specs valiant can't just spam moonblast and burn screens turns) While Grimmsnarl should not be your tera, as increasing the power or tankiness of one of the sweepers it facilitates is incredibly helpful, if need be, Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel to live more hits while flipping it’s weaknesses, allowing it to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive teams, where it’s screen support is essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk can be incredibly important on sweepers and wall breakers, on hyper offense. (you've already said that) Setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, Bulk Up Great Tusk, or Belly Drum Azumarill enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their sweep. Another great teammate for Grimmsnarl is a suicide hazard lead like Glimmora, who also helps support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through hazards.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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Implemented, and sorry about the whole QC tag thing, got a bit confused cuz its my first time.
 
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gabeawesome08 said:
[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Dual Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily. Taunt also allows it to hinder other leads such as Glimmora from providing utility to their teams with hazards setting up entry hazards just reads better methinks. Parting Shot acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. Spirit Break can be run to give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. While Grimmsnarl should not be your tera, as increasing the power or tankiness of one of the sweepers it facilitates is incredibly helpful, if need be, you can just say that grimm should only tera in emergency scenarios, something like “grimmsnarl can tera steel in emergency scenarios against…” should be good Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel to live more hits while flipping it’s weaknesses, allowing it to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive teams, where it’s screen support is essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk can be incredibly important on offensive setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, and Bulk Up Great Tusk, or Belly Drum Azumarill, generally stick to up to around four examples for stuff in an analysis as they enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their boosts. Another great teammate for Grimmsnarl is a suicide hazard lead like Glimmora, who also helps support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through hazards.

you can definitely expand on this, mention other dedicated leads (meowscarada immediately comes to mind). also mention orthworm being able to further facilitate these set up sweepers due to shed tail giving them at least one free turn.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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i want to see how these are implemented before i approve, this is some good stuff though!
 
same color code as last time

gabeawesome08 said:
[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Dual Screens Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk due to Prankster immediately setting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily. Taunt also allows it to hinder other leads such as Glimmora and Garchomp from setting up entry hazards. Parting Shot acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. Spirit Break can be run to give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. Grimmsnarl can Tera Steel in emergency scenarios, allowing it to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive teams, where it’s screen support is essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk can be incredibly important on offensive setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, and Bulk Up Great Tusk, as they enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their boosts. Another great teammate for Grimmsnarl is a suicide hazard lead like Suicide leads like Glimmora or and Lead Meowscarada this reads better. after this, explain them setting up hazards and individual benefits, i.e. glim being hazard removal and meow's access to taunt + knock, who also helps support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through hazards. One more good teammate for it is Orthworm, whose Shed Tail can provide teammates utilizing the screen support one or more free turns. awkwardly phrased, just say that orthworm can use screens to more easily pass shed tail to offensive teammates.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [BT89, 487308]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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QC 2/2 after implemented. Good job!
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[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Dual Screens screns Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create creating opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk defense it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk provides—eight turns of defense thanks to Light Clay. Light Screen and Reflect also give Grimmsnarl some protection due to Prankster immediately setting getting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily. Taunt allows it to hinder blocks other leads such as Glimmora and Garchomp from setting up entry hazards. Parting Shot with Prankster acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. help teammates attack or set up. Spirit Break can be run to give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks of damage to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. Grimmsnarl can utilize Tera Steel in emergency scenarios, allowing itself to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning Rapid Spin attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive hyper offense teams, where it’s screen support is its dual screens are essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk defense can be incredibly important on offensive setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, and Bulk Up Great Tusk, as they enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their boosts. Orthworm can also use dual screens to pass a Substitute to a sweeper threat with Shed Tail. Suicide leads like Glimmora and Lead Meowscarada help support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through entry hazards and other utility, like Glimmora's hazard removal or Meowscarda's Taunt and Knock Off. Orthworm can also use the screens set by Grimmsnarl to pass a substitute to a Substitute to a sweeper threat with Shed Tail.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [BT89, 487308]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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GP Team done

especially since this seems to be your first grammar check, lmk if you have any questions! there's lots of stuff on this end that is not obvious to newcomers, and/or it's minor, like why i'd bother replace "setting" with "getting" in first paragraph (technically grimmsnarl is the one 'setting' them & prankster is just 'getting' the set screens up more quickly). i say this because, like, don't worry if you missed or didn't understand something
 
Adeleine said:
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[SET]
Dual Screens (Grimmsnarl) @ Light Clay
Ability: Prankster
Tera Type: Steel / Ghost
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Taunt
- Parting Shot / Spirit Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Dual Screens screns Grimmsnarl is an excellent support Pokemon, able to create creating opportunities for its offensive teammates to sweep with the extra bulk defense it provides. Light Screen and Reflect are boosted by Light Clay in order to allow more survivability on a teammate, while also giving Grimmsnarl some bulk provides—eight turns of defense thanks to Light Clay. Light Screen and Reflect also give Grimmsnarl some protection due to Prankster immediately setting getting the screens up, allowing it to set up the second screen more easily. Taunt allows it to hinder blocks other leads such as Glimmora and Garchomp from setting up entry hazards. Parting Shot with Prankster acts as a fast pivot, either weakening hits or forcing a switch, both of which allow for free attacks or set up for a teammate. help teammates attack or set up. Spirit Break can be run to give Grimmsnarl some offensive presence, doing good chunks of damage to Roaring Moon, Walking Wake, and Great Tusk. Grimmsnarl can utilize Tera Steel in emergency scenarios, allowing itself to set up screens against a Pokemon like Kingambit or Gholdengo. Alternatively, it can use Tera Ghost to block spinning Rapid Spin attempts from Pokemon like Great Tusk or Torkoal.

Grimmsnarl fits best on hyper-offensive hyper offense teams, where it’s screen support is its dual screens are essential in allowing setup sweepers to rip through enemy Pokemon. The extra bulk defense can be incredibly important on offensive setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Roaring Moon and Dragapult, Swords Dance Kingambit, and Bulk Up Great Tusk, as they enjoy extra bulk in order to set up their boosts. Orthworm can also use dual screens to pass a Substitute to a sweeper threat with Shed Tail. Suicide leads like Glimmora and Lead Meowscarada help support setup sweepers alongside Grimmsnarl through entry hazards and other utility, like Glimmora's hazard removal or Meowscarda's Taunt and Knock Off. Orthworm can also use the screens set by Grimmsnarl to pass a substitute to a Substitute to a sweeper threat with Shed Tail.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Gabeawesome08, 560802]]
- Quality checked by: [[autumn, 384270]], [BT89, 487308]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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especially since this seems to be your first grammar check, lmk if you have any questions! there's lots of stuff on this end that is not obvious to newcomers, and/or it's minor, like why i'd bother replace "setting" with "getting" in first paragraph (technically grimmsnarl is the one 'setting' them & prankster is just 'getting' the set screens up more quickly). i say this because, like, don't worry if you missed or didn't understand something
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what is the m dash eight in the first paragraph? I'm assuming it looks different on the article, but what does it do?
 
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