Milotic (Specially Defensive)

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[SET]
name: Specially defensive Water Specially Defensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Toxic
move 3: Ice Beam / Hidden power grass Hidden Power Grass / Haze
move 4: Recover
item: Leftovers
ability: Marvel scale
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP/192 Def/56 SpD/8 Spe 252 HP / 192 Def / 56 SpD / 8 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Surf is pretty self explanotority explanatory. It gives Milotic something to hit for a reliable STAB move and allows Milotic to do a significant amount of damage to those that don't resist it,thanks to its decent Special Attack stat score significant points of damage to most pokemon that don't resist due to Milotic's decent special attack. Toxic allows Milotic to inflict status on fellow bulky waters Water-types who might be troublesome for the team and forces offensive teams to kep keep switching out, racking up passive damage something that could work when working in a stall based teams. In the The third slot, is debatable and any of the three listed moves are effective depending on Milotic's teamates. For example,(comma) a team lacking a hazer/phazer and no reliable way to get rid of bulky Set up pokemon setup sweepers will certainly benefit from Haze on Milotic. Ice Beam can prove useful if your teammates prefer to play in a field cleared of annoying grass types your team has problems with Grass-types such as Venusaur and Sceptile. With the correct prediction Milotic can inflict great distrought damage to the opponent's grass type Grass-type pokemon. Ice beam Ice Beam can also be used to pick of off weakened Sweepers sweepers that are immune to or resist Surf,(comma) such as Toxicroak and Ludicolo,(comma) or Hidden power grass Hidden Power Grass might can be used if you like to get rid of annoying entry hazard set up pokemon setup Pokemon such as the rock/water Rock-/Water-type brothers, Omastar and Kabutops,(comma) though it is worth noting that this move will be more effective on a more offensive Milotic spread.<p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Milotic can definetly definitely benefit from the use of Hidden power Hidden Power Psychic to hit Toxicroak hard and the Illigeal imigrant illegal immigrant (I have literally no idea what this means...) Heracross, who could prove dangerous if it sets up upon on Milotic's switch if you lack nessacary necessary counters. Although it seems quite unessacry unnecessary, Hypnosis may be used instead of haze Haze to give Milotic double status,(comma) automatically hindering 1/3 of the opponent's team. Mirror coat Mirror Coat can come in extremely handy at times especially in late game late-game scenarios where the last pokemon can threat threaten to sweep your team. Milotic can take almost any unbosted unboosted Super effective hit super effective attack and use mirror coat Mirror Coat for a guranteed guaranteed OHKO. Mirror coat Mirror Coat coupled with toxic Toxic makes a ticking time bomb for the opponent forcing him to attack/switch,(comma) so haze Haze is not necessarily needed.

<p>Milotic can be used as an effective Toxic staller or phazer /Phazer due to it's its sheer natural bulk. This set's primary focus is to allow Milotic with it's bulk to toxic Toxic stall other bulky pokemon Pokemon such as other Milotic, Blastoise, Slowbro, Slowking and even Lanturn. Combined with haze Haze, Milotic can easily win stall wars against other tanks without toxic as well as defeating many of the common UU sweepers such as DD Dragon Dance Feraligatr, Bulk up Bulk Up Hitmontop and DD Dragon Dance Altaria. Milotic's great defenses from on both sides of the spectrum allow it to take all sorts of hits, especially from notorious Special special sweepers, something that Blastoise cannot handle very effectively.<p>

<p>Milotic enjoys having bulky grass type pokemon Grass-type Pokemon on it's its team,(comma) such as Venusaur and Tangrowth,(comma) who can absorb almost all the attacks that threaten Milotic. Weezing and Donphan are great allies a as they can come in on any hard hitting physical sweepers such as Rypherior Rhyperior and Aggron and hit back with Will-o-wisp Will-O-Wisp/Earthquake respectively.

<p>Any Bulky pokemon bulky Pokemon that can has recovery as well as status healing moves such as Rest/Aromatherapy/Heal Bell Heal bell can easily take anything Milotic throws at them. Prime examples of these pokemon Pokemon are the Fairy fairy twins, Chansey and Clefable. Venusaur can deal with Milotic but should try to avoid switching into an Ice beam Ice Beam. Tangrowth and Leafeon can also dominate also provided Milotic lacks Ice beam Ice Beam. Rest talk Milotic and Blastoise with rest Rest + Sleep Talk variants of Milotic and Blastoise can easily stall hence stall out this set, forcing Milotic to switch out.<p>

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SOMALIA said:
[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Toxic
move 3: Ice Beam / Hidden Power Grass / Haze
move 4: Recover
item: Leftovers
ability: Marvel Scale
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 192 Def / 56 SpD / 8 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Surf is pretty self explanatory. It gives Milotic something to hit for a reliable STAB move and allows Milotic to do a significant amount of damage to those that don't resist it,thanks to its Milotic's decent Special Attack stat. Toxic allows Milotic to inflict status on fellow bulky Water-types who might otherwise be troublesome for the team and forces offensive teams to keep switching out, thereby racking up passive damage. In the third slot, any of the three listed moves are effective depending on Milotic's teamates teammates. For example, a team lacking a Hazer/Phazer and no reliable way to get rid of bulky setup sweepers will certainly benefit from Haze on Milotic. Ice Beam can prove useful if your team has problems with Grass-types such as Venusaur and Sceptile; with the correct prediction Milotic can inflict great damage to the opponent's Grass-type pokemon. Ice Beam can also be used to pick off weakened sweepers that are immune to or resist Surf, such as Toxicroak and Ludicolo. , or Hidden Power Grass can be used if you like to get rid of annoying entry hazard setup Pokemon such as the Rock/Water type brothers, Omastar and Kabutops, though it is worth noting that this move will be more effective on a more offensive Milotic spread.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Milotic can definitely benefit from the use of Hidden Power Psychic to hit Toxicroak hard and it's newly introduced cousin Heracross, who could prove dangerous if it sets up on Milotic's switch if and you lack necessary counters. Although it seems quite unnecessary, Hypnosis may be used instead of Haze to give Milotic double status, automatically hindering 1/3 of the opponent's team. Mirror Coat can come in extremely handy at times, especially in late-game scenarios where the last pokemon can threaten to sweep your team. Milotic can take almost any unboosted super effective special attack and use Mirror Coat for a guranteed guaranteed OHKO. Mirror Coat coupled with Toxic makes a ticking time bomb for the opponent puts the opponent's Pokemon on a timer, forcing him it to attack/switch either attack or switch, so Haze is not necessarily needed.</p>

<p>Milotic can be used as an effective Toxic staller/Phazer due to its sheer natural bulk. This set's primary focus is to allow Milotic with it's bulk to Toxic stall other bulky pokemon such as other Milotic, Blastoise, Slowbro, Slowking, and even Lanturn. Combined with Haze, Milotic can easily win stall wars against other tanks without toxic that don't have access to Toxic, as well as defeating many of the common UU sweepers such as DD Dragon Dance Feraligatr, Bulk Up Hitmontop and DD Dragon Dance Altaria. Milotic's great defenses from both sides of the spectrum allow it to take all sorts of hits, especially from notorious special sweepers, something that Blastoise cannot handle very effectively.</p>

<p>Milotic enjoys having bulky Grass-type Pokemon on its team, such as Venusaur and Tangrowth, who can absorb almost all the attacks that threaten Milotic. Weezing and Donphan are great allies as they can come in on hard hitting physical sweepers such as Rypherior Rhyperior and Aggron and hit back with Will-O-Wisp/ and Earthquake respectively.</p>

<p> Any bulky Pokemon that has recovery as well as status healing moves such as Rest/Aromatherapy/Heal Bell can easily take anything Milotic throws at them. Prime examples of these Pokemon are the fairy twins, Chansey and Clefable. Venusaur can deal with Milotic but should try to avoid switching into an Ice Beam. Tangrowth and Leafeon can also dominate provided Milotic lacks Ice Beam. Rest + Sleep Talk variants of Milotic and Blastoise can stall out this set, hence forcing Milotic to switch out.</p>
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I notice that there were some mistakes that bugmaniacbob had caught but you neglected to fix, so I've had to point them out to you again. For this reason I'll be stamping this after I can be sure you've implemented all the changes. PM or VM me when you have done so, I'll be happy to stamp this then.

Also the amount of mistakes bugmaniacbob caught the first time round is sort of ridiculous for this relatively short piece of writing. I sincerely hope you learn from these mistakes when making future contributions.

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Is there any way you can alter the first sentence a bit to sound less awkward? I mean starting with something like "Surf is good." is not the best way to start off an analysis. You should explain what the main focus of the set is within the first few sentences.
 
Neither bmb or I GP checked that paragraph since it WAS exactly the same as the paragraph in the set that mentions Slowbro, Slowking, Lanturn etc. I don't know what's going on there -.-

Also I think SOMALIA altered the wrong 'first sentence'.
 
Uhh... I'm checking the first sentence on request

Might be easiest to just copy and paste this below, since I think this is the layout wanted for the analysis:

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[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Toxic
move 3: Ice Beam / Hidden Power Grass / Haze
move 4: Recover
item: Leftovers
ability: Marvel Scale
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 192 Def / 56 SpD / 8 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>This set is focused to make great use of Milotic's overall bulk, giving it the role of toxic Toxic staller and or hazer Hazer. Surf is pretty self explanatory. It gives Milotic a reliable STAB move and allows Milotic to do a significant amount of damage to those that don't resist it,thanks to Milotic's decent Special Attack stat. Toxic allows Milotic to inflict status on fellow bulky Water-types who might otherwise be troublesome for the team and forces offensive teams to keep switching out, thereby racking up passive damage. In the third slot, any of the three listed moves are effective depending on Milotic's teammates. For example, a team lacking a Hazer/Phazer and no reliable way to get rid of bulky set up sweepers will certainly benefit from Haze on Milotic. Ice Beam can prove useful if your team has problems with Grass-types such as Venusaur and Sceptile; with the correct prediction Milotic can inflict great damage to the opponent's Grass-type pokemon. Ice Beam can also be used to pick off weakened sweepers that are immune to or resist Surf, such as Toxicroak and Ludicolo. Hidden Power Grass can be used if you like to get rid of annoying entry hazard setup Pokemon such as the Rock/Water type brothers, Omastar and Kabutops, though it is worth noting that this move will be more effective on a more offensive Milotic spread.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Milotic can definitely benefit from the use of Hidden Power Psychic to hit Toxicroak and it's newly introduced cousin Heracross, who could prove dangerous if it sets up on Milotic's switch and you lack necessary counters. Although it seems quite unnecessary, Hypnosis may be used instead of Haze to give Milotic double status, automatically hindering 1/3 of the opponent's team. Mirror Coat can come in extremely handy at times, especially in late-game scenarios where the last Pokemon can threaten to sweep your team. Milotic can take almost any unboosted super effective special attack and use Mirror Coat for a guaranteed OHKO. Mirror Coat coupled with Toxic puts the opponent's Pokemon on a timer, forcing it to either switch or attack, so Haze is not necessarily needed.</p>

<p>Milotic can be used as an effective Toxic staller or Phazer due to its sheer natural bulk. This set's primary focus is to allow Milotic to Toxic stall other bulky Pokemon such as Milotic, Blastoise, Slowbro, Slowking and even Lanturn. Combined with Haze Milotic can easily win stall wars against other tanks that don't have access to Toxic, as well as defeating many of the common UU sweepers such as Dragon Dance Feraligatr, Bulk Up Hitmontop and Dragon Dance Altaria. Milotic's great defenses on both sides allow it to take all sorts of hits, especially from notorious special sweepers.</p>

<p>Milotic enjoys having bulky Grass-type Pokemon on its team, such as Venusaur and Tangrowth, who can absorb almost all the attacks that threaten Milotic. Weezing and Donphan are great allies as they can come in on hard hitting physical sweepers such as Rhyperior and Aggron and hit back with Will-O-Wisp and Earthquake respectively.</p>

<p> Any bulky Pokemon that has recovery as well as status healing moves such as Rest/Aromatherapy/Heal Bell can easily take anything Milotic throws at them. Prime examples of these Pokemon are the fairy twins, Chansey and Clefable. Venusaur can deal with Milotic but should try to avoid switching into an Ice Beam. Tangrowth and Leafeon can also dominate provided Milotic lacks Ice Beam. Rest + Sleep Talk variants of Milotic and Blastoise can stall out this set.</p>

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And yeah I don't know what the clone paragraph above the analysis is.

EDIT: change made (ta fatecrashers)
 
That first paragraph was written early on(forgot to delete it) so I deleted it, also made the grammar checks BugmaniacBob told me to. Thanks alot and sorry for this confusion.
 
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