Its not only the final evolution that has the "Just Bigger" syndrome, the middle mon' also look too like the first form. Even if it is based mainly on a spicy pepper, I think you could add more animalish details (Like some color pattern in hands or paws) to give it more colors, another thing it lack tho, and a little bit of realism. Also even it is not needed at all, I think you could add them a Pokedex description to give even more realism and also, interesting concepts to the Fakemons. Otherwise I think its pretty soild considering it is a spicy pepper, so good job!So I made this spicy boi as an idea I had for a trio of starters who all have typings made up of grass, fire, and water. This one is the fire starter with a secondary grass typing. Then there'd be a grass type with a secondary water typing (I'm thinking something to do with a swamp, maybe a crocodile or alligator of some kind), and a water type with a secondary fire typing (for this one I could only think of something to do with steam, but it seems too much like Volcanion). Anyways, I'm here because I need feedback, like bad. First off, none of them have a name, any input on that would be a great help (and btw the design IS based off of a spicy pepper, so something to do with that would fit very well). I have movesets for them already, and general heights and weights based off of other mons, so I'm good on that front, but again, if you have input I'd like to hear it. Plus the final evolution looks too much like the first evolution imo, it kinda has "it just gets bigger" syndrome, so if anyone has any design input (for any of them) it would be much appreciated. Any and all feedback would be amazing, thanks.
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Thanks, I appreciate the input and I'll take it into consideration when I make changes. Also I've been toying with the idea of changing the mon's colors as it evolves, so if you think that would improve the design I'd like to know.Its not only the final evolution that has the "Just Bigger" syndrome, the middle mon' also look too like the first form. Even if it is based mainly on a spicy pepper, I think you could add more animalish details (Like some color pattern in hands or paws) to give it more colors, another thing it lack tho, and a little bit of realism. Also even it is not needed at all, I think you could add them a Pokedex description to give even more realism and also, interesting concepts to the Fakemons. Otherwise I think its pretty soild considering it is a spicy pepper, so good job!
it's fine but what i would say is that there few to many ice crystals
I rarely do any fakemon, but I did these 2 awhile ago. Sort of inspired by Diancie.
Alrightio, name and HA, you say? Lets see here...So, I'm working on a fan-game and this is the current design for the Grass starter. It doesn't have a name nor a hidden ability and that's what I'd like to ask you guys for...
It's a pure Grass type that evolves into a Grass/Rock type, it's based on red deers, in cernunnos, a god from celtic mythology that represents health, nature and other concepts and in it's last stage it also resembles druids. The only stage of it's evolutionary chain that has a name atm is it's last evo that goes for Forestag... And for it's HA, I only need ideas for it's effects but if you'd like to share a ideas for the ability's name that would also help a lot!
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Alrightio, name and HA, you say? Lets see here...
Name I'm unsure about, but I might be able to pass something for the HA. I'm guessing from your wording you want something like a custom ability, correct? Just in case I'll also throw an idea for one that isn't exclusive
Non-Exclusive: Grass Pelt (Obvious reasoning is obvious)
Exclusive: Healthy (Essentially the item "Big Root" but in the form of an ability. I feel it fits well enough with a grass-type pokemon and the theme around the celtic health god you mentioned.)
Other Non-Exclusive just in case you already have Grass Pelt just in case: Rain Dish (What's that? You say plants like water? Whats that again? You say plants like being rain team counters? Ok.)