Everyone still assumes I'm a noob.

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xD. You guys don't know me. I'm not saying I'm good, but, ... It has really good synergy though.

Just rate my team.



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Honchkrow@Focus Sash
Jolly Nature/Insomnia
4 HP/ 252 Atk / 252 Spe

~Taunt
~Sucker Punch
~Pursuit
~Thunder Wave

Thank you FiveKRunner, for this awesome lead Honchkrow set. Taunt stops anything from setting up, and prevents stealth rocks, for a while anyway. I'm pretty sure no one really thinks 'Thunder Wave' when they think Honchkrow, and that's great, because I can cripple a sweeper, and get the surprise factor. Azelf, Gengar, and the Occasional Alakazam get destroyed by Pursuit, and then If they decide to switch, Pursuit knocks them out, or Sucker Punch does if they stay in.

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Salamence@Leftovers
Impish Nature/Intimidate
252 HP / 176 Def / 80 Spe

~Dragon Dance
~Roost
~Earthquake
~Dragon Claw

Credits to Aldaron. This is a Physical Wall/Bulky DD Mence. It's Ev's and Initimidate allow me to come in on Hera/Lucario/and other pysical threats with ease. Then, I DDance up, and attack/roost accordingly. Hopefully Bronzong will be dead either by Honchkrow, or other members of my team. Impish>Jolly for the more defensive boost.

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Registeel@Leftovers
Careful Nature/Clear Body
252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD

~Stealth Rock
~Toxic/Thunder Wave/Thunder Punch
~Ice Punch
~Explosion/Fire Punch?

Special Wall/Works Wonders with Salamence. I'm kinda' clueless on the moveset. I need Stealth Rock Support, but I can't decide. Bolt/Beam punches sounds nice. So does Crippling more opponents, or poisoning walls. Although Explosion can seriously dent something, I don't want to give up my special wall. Fire Punch is also nice for coverage.

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Jirachi@Leftovers
Impish Nature/Scerene Grace
240 HP / 56 Atk / 76 Def / 136 Spe

~Wish
~U-Turn
~Light Screen
~Zen Headbutt/Thunder/Reflect

I'm freaking awesome. xD. Support/Wish Passer. Also Sets up Light Screen for Mence so he can get DDances up. Can't decide on the last move, I want to go offensive, but both moves sound unappealing.

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Gyrados@Leftovers
Adamant Nature/Intimidate
 216 HP / 16 Atk / 176 Def / 100 Spe

~Dragon Dance
~Taunt
~Stone Edge
~Waterfall

Doesn't this thing just make you wanna' scream: "BLEARGH!!!!!!!!!!". DDance Bulky Gyara. Seriously, nothing to say here. Waterfall for STAB, Stone Edge for other Gyras.

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Flygon@Choice Scarf
Naughty Nature/ Levitate
252 AT, 120 SA, 136 SP

~Draco Meteor
~Earthquake
~U-Turn
~Stone Edge/Flamethrower

Flygon. Lategame sweeper/reveng-ish killer, and here to soak up the electric attacks I get. Draco Meteor OHKO's 6Hp Min SpDef Mence/Chomp,respectively. Earthquake for STAB, U-Turn to scout if I have to use him early, and Stone Edge for coverage, but I don't really have a good fire attack on this team.


THINKING about:
HEATRAN REPLACING REGISTEEL
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Heatran@Leftovers
Modest Nature/Flash Fire
252 HP / 56 SpA / 200 SpDef

~Lava Plume
~Earth Power
~Rest
~Sleep Talk
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um if your team gets worn down then deoxys-e or mixnape can really hurt it, you also are kinda weak to SR but then again you also have 3 pokes who resist it. Wow i just realised you don't have a pure special sweeper which is not good, a skarmory or foretress can really stall you if not taunted in time. to kinda improve this you might want to switch either garados or flygon to get a pure special sweeper. a standard gangar can really do well cause it covers EQ while not taking much SR damage and both your steel pokes resist almost all its weaknesses. well hope i helped
 
Flame_Blade said:
um if your team gets worn down then deoxys-e or mixnape can really hurt it, you also are kinda weak to SR but then again you also have 3 pokes who resist it. Wow i just realised you don't have a pure special sweeper which is not good, a skarmory or foretress can really stall you if not taunted in time. to kinda improve this you might want to switch either garados or flygon to get a pure special sweeper. a standard gangar can really do well cause it covers EQ while not taking much SR damage and both your steel pokes resist almost all its weaknesses. well hope i helped
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Seriously, fix your grammar.

Jirachi puts a stop to Deo-e with good prediction. Jirachi/Mence can kinda' wear ape down, and I can always Use Flygon to revenge kill it.

Lol, what's Skarm/Forry gonna' once I taunt it? I can always switch in and taunt. And I can switch to Jirachi for absorbing the explosion.

Seriously. FIX YOUR GRAMMAR.
 
Not at smogon they aren't. Posting an RMT here means you're looking for help, if you aren't there's no point in posting a team as you know it works.

Anyways, the team is fairly solid, but specstran can really be a world of hurt for this team if properly played as Registeel/Jirachi don't want to be switching in on STAB fire attacks, specstran almost always carries dragon pulse which fucks mence and carries HP electric on some variants to deal with Gyarados.

My best suggestion would be a heatran of your own, over Registeel. The sleep talk special wall variant is highly effective and also serves as a superb status absorber. He resists, is immune to, or will take virtually no damage from all but one move that enemy heatrans could potentially be packing. You've also got 4 ground immunes, two of which also resist fighting, so a heatran would lure in all kinds of potential switchins. The only issue with that is restalk heatran needs all four of his moves to be effective so you'd be losing out on SR unless you found another place to put it.
 
Pretty decent team.
Tbh, I'm surprised that I don't see more Registeels.
Nothing is more annoying than a good wall to cripple your pokes.
Honchkrow plays a very dangerous game with trying to sucker punch/pursuit against azelf, gengar and the like. Just because if you predict switch and you're wrong then honchkrow goes down. It's just a tough decision.

You pretty much wall any team lacking fire types.
I like your team because you're using lesser used pokes. That's cool :).
 
Kietharr: Sp Walling Heatran sounds really nice. I just also realized that I don't have a status absorber, so Heatran would be a nice addition. (Heatran's carry HP Elec?)

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Heatran@Leftovers
Modest Nature/Flash Fire
252 HP / 56 SpA / 200 SpDef

~Lava Plume
~Earth Power
~Rest
~Sleep Talk
 
Kietharr said:
Not at smogon they aren't. Posting an RMT here means you're looking for help, if you aren't there's no point in posting a team as you know it works.

Anyways, the team is fairly solid, but specstran can really be a world of hurt for this team if properly played as Registeel/Jirachi don't want to be switching in on STAB fire attacks, specstran almost always carries dragon pulse which fucks mence and carries HP electric on some variants to deal with Gyarados.

My best suggestion would be a heatran of your own, over Registeel. The sleep talk special wall variant is highly effective and also serves as a superb status absorber. He resists, is immune to, or will take virtually no damage from all but one move that enemy heatrans could potentially be packing. You've also got 4 ground immunes, two of which also resist fighting, so a heatran would lure in all kinds of potential switchins. The only issue with that is restalk heatran needs all four of his moves to be effective so you'd be losing out on SR unless you found another place to put it.
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Wait a second Posting and RMT means you are lookign for help... OBJECTION! Rmt stands for rate my team not fix my team.
 
Just on the basis of the team as a whole, if you -were- to replace Registeel with Heatran, it almost definitely needs to be Scarfed. It seems like there's a lack of of a revenge killer which could be annoying, not to mention an extra check against Lucario, since with Stealth Rock highly possibly on the field, and many people trying different variants (such as HPIce for Gliscor or SE for Sala/Gyara) you're going to have a bitch of a time. Flygon just seems a little bit too underpowered to pull this off and having it's main STAB having a popular immunity could be annoying, like giving opposing Salamence to do whatever it wants.

If you do use Heatran, you would almost guarantee need to have Stealth Rock on Jirachi. It would fit perfectly over LS if your last move was also like Body Slam, as 60% paralyze is really nice, however, due to the SUPER HUGE Electric/Ice weakness thing going on here, it appears as if LS is a definite need. I mean, we really don't want to get swept by being able to switch into Lanturns and Lapras do we?

I'd probably also replace the Flygon. With the basis of Honchkrow, Salamence, Gyarados, Jirachi, and Heatran, random Tyranitars could be annoying. The last Poke, although not the best switch-in into Tyranitar but could definitely help is like Heracross, who could also take a few status here and there for you, but a fighter is always nice to have as it's hard as it is to counter them. Suprisingly I might have to say watch out for those random sweeping Gliscors, but that shouldn't be -too- much of a issue (especially if you put HPIce on a Scarf Heatran!!!)
 
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