VGC Commander Tatsugiri [READY FOR UPLOAD]

NoPa311

[SET]
Commander (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest / Timid Nature
- Muddy Water
- Draco Meteor
- Protect
- Helping Hand

[SET COMMENTS]
Tatsugiri-D's main role is to be beside Dondozo and give it a boost thanks to Commander and Order Up boosting Dondozo's Defense stat. When not beside Dondozo, it can support partners with Helping Hand and deal spread damage with Muddy Water, which can swing games by having a chance to lower the foes' accuracy. Draco Meteor is a strong Dragon-type attack that can threaten other Dragon-types like Miraidon and Roaring Moon. Helping Hand can be used to boost the attacks of partners like Calyrex-S and Chi-Yu. With Helping Hand, Calyrex-S can KO Raging Bolt with Astral Barrage, while Chi-Yu can KO Flutter Mane with Heat Wave. Focus Sash allows Tatsugiri-D to survive an attack and fire back or support its partners. With a Modest Nature, Tera Stellar Tatsugiri-D can OHKO both Urshifu formes, Calyrex-S, and most Assault Vest Raging Bolt with Draco Meteor and Chi-Yu with Muddy Water. Tatsugiri-D can run a Timid nature, making it deal less damage but letting it outspeed threats like Modest Terapagos and Regidrago.

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail, so it can be knocked out if it is targeted by both foes on the field. Fairy- and Dragon-types like Flutter Mane, Whimsicott, and Raging Bolt with Thunderclap can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack. Tatsugiri-D is also vulnerable to attacks once Commander activates, as it cannot act if Dondozo gets KOed. Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason; if you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners, they will be on Dondozo's analysis.

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Sorry I forgot to mention this earlier but you don't need a partners section for this. There will just be a sentence that says to check the teammates on dondozos analysis since tatsugiri is basically just used to make dondozos better. This is basically what we did for reg f and reg h which you can see on the dex
 
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[SET]
Commander (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Muddy Water
- Draco Meteor
- Protect
- Helping Hand

[SET COMMENTS]
Tatsugiri-D's main role is to be beside Dondozo and give it a boost thanks to Commander and Order Up boosting Dondozo's defense. When not beside Dondozo it can support partners with Helping Hand and deal spread damage with Muddy Water. Muddy Water can also change swing games by having a chance to lower the foe's accuracy. Draco Meteor is a strong Dragon-Type Dragon-type attack that can threaten other Dragons Dragon-types like Miraidon and Roaring Moon. Protect allows for partners like Dondozo or a powerful restricted to switch in.(you don't need to explain protect) Helping Hand can be used to boost the attacks of partners like Calyrex-S and Chi-Yu. Focus Sash allows for Tatsugiri-D to survive an attack and fire back or support its partners. The EV spread maximizes Tatsugiri-D's damage output and speed.(252/252 doesn't need an explanation) With Stellar Tera Tera Stellar Tatsugiri-D can OHKO both Urshifu formes and Calyrex-S with Draco Meteor. Stellar Tera boosts the power of all of Tatsugiri-D's moves and picks up KO's that it wouldn't normally be able to. (This is dex info, if you have more calcs mention them with draco)

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail so it can be knocked out by any double up. It also struggles when not able to give Dondozo its boosts and support its partners with Helping Hand. Fast(You mention Raging Bolt which isn't fast) Fairy- and Dragon-Types types like Flutter Mane and Raging Bolt can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack. Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason. If you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners they will be on Dondozo's analysis. (mention Tatsugiri being weak to attacks on the turn dozo goes down)

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[SET]
Commander (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest / Timid Nature
- Muddy Water
- Draco Meteor
- Protect
- Helping Hand

[SET COMMENTS]
Tatsugiri-D's main role is to be beside Dondozo and give it a boost thanks to Commander and Order Up boosting Dondozo's defense Defense stat. When not beside Dondozo it can support partners with Helping Hand and deal spread damage with Muddy Water. Muddy Water can also swing games by having a chance to lower the foe's accuracy. Remove this or combine it with the Muddy Water description in the previous sentence, otherwise this is just dex info Draco Meteor is a strong Dragon-type attack that can threaten other Dragon-types like Miraidon and Roaring Moon. Helping Hand can be used to boost the attacks of partners like Calyrex-S and Chi-Yu. Mention any important KOs they can achieve with the boost Focus Sash allows for Tatsugiri-D to survive an attack and fire back or support its partners. Compare Modest and Timid Tatsugiri-D here With Tera Stellar Tatsugiri-D can OHKO both Urshifu formes and Calyrex-S with Draco Meteor. Tera Stellar boosted Draco Meteor can also KO most Raging Bolt. Combine this with the previous sentence and mention any KOs Tera Stellar Muddy Water achieves

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail so it can be knocked out by any double up. It also struggles when not able to give Dondozo its boosts and support its partners with Helping Hand. Fairy- and Dragon-types like Flutter Mane and Raging Bolt can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack by outspeeding or with priority. Tatsugiri-D is also vulnerable to attacks after Dondozo goes down. Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason. If you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners they will be on Dondozo's analysis.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
Commander (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest / Timid Nature
- Muddy Water
- Draco Meteor
- Protect
- Helping Hand

[SET COMMENTS]
Tatsugiri-D's main role is to be beside Dondozo and give it a boost thanks to Commander and Order Up boosting Dondozo's Defense stat. When not beside Dondozo, (AC) it can support partners with Helping Hand and deal spread damage with Muddy Water, (AC) which can swing games by having a chance to lower the foe's foes' accuracy. Draco Meteor is a strong Dragon-type attack that can threaten other Dragon-types like Miraidon and Roaring Moon. Helping Hand can be used to boost the attacks of partners like Calyrex-S and Chi-Yu. With Helping Hand, (AC) Calyrex-S can KO Raging Bolt with Astral Barrage, (AC) and while Chi-Yu can KO Flutter Mane with Heat Wave thanks to Tatsugiri-D's Helping Hand. Focus Sash allows for Tatsugiri-D to survive an attack and fire back or support its partners. With a Modest Nature, Tera Stellar Tatsugiri-D can OHKO both Urshifu formes, Calyrex-S, and most Raging Bolt with Draco Meteor and most Incineroar's Incineroar with Muddy Water. Tatsugiri-D can run a Timid nature, (AC) making it deal dealing less damage so but letting it can outspeed threats like Modest nature Terapagos and Regidrago (RC) and Jolly nature Incineroar.

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail, (AC) so it can be knocked out if its targeted by any double up both foes on the field. It also struggles when not able to it can't give Dondozo its boosts and support its partners with Helping Hand. (This seems like obvious info, can you elaborate on this?) Fairy- and Dragon-types like Flutter Mane and Whimsicott (any Dragon-type example?) can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack. Tatsugiri-D is also vulnerable to attacks after Dondozo goes down. (Can you elaborate on this? I'm assuming this is referring to the situation where Tatsugiri cannot act if Dondozo gets KOed after Commander activates.) Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason; (RP, ASC) (changing punctuation to better emphasize importance of looking at Dondozo's analysis.) If if you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners, (AC) they will be on Dondozo's analysis.

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NoPa311 said:
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No changes needed for the first paragraph, so just a couple sentence alterations on the second one before it's good to go.

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail, so it can be knocked out if it is targeted by both foes on the field. It Fake Out pressure also struggles when makes it can't struggle to give Dondozo its boosts and support its partners with Helping Hand due to Fake Out pressure. (Altered sentence structure to help better emphasize Fake Out as a potential answer to Tatsugiri.) Fairy- and Dragon-types like Flutter Mane, Whimsicott, and Raging Bolt with Thunderclap can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack. Tatsugiri-D is also vulnerable to attacks when once Commander activates, as it cannot act if Dondozo gets KOed after Commander activates. (Reworded for clarity.) Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason; if you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners, they will be on Dondozo's analysis.
 
NoPa311 hi, there are a few things which need changing before this is uploaded.
[SET]
Commander (Tatsugiri-Droopy) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Commander
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest / Timid Nature
- Muddy Water
- Draco Meteor
- Protect
- Helping Hand

[SET COMMENTS]
Tatsugiri-D's main role is to be beside Dondozo and give it a boost thanks to Commander and Order Up boosting Dondozo's Defense stat. When not beside Dondozo, it can support partners with Helping Hand and deal spread damage with Muddy Water, which can swing games by having a chance to lower the foes' accuracy. Draco Meteor is a strong Dragon-type attack that can threaten other Dragon-types like Miraidon and Roaring Moon. Helping Hand can be used to boost the attacks of partners like Calyrex-S and Chi-Yu. With Helping Hand, Calyrex-S can KO Raging Bolt with Astral Barrage, while Chi-Yu can KO Flutter Mane with Heat Wave. Focus Sash allows Tatsugiri-D to survive an attack and fire back or support its partners. With a Modest Nature, Tera Stellar Tatsugiri-D can OHKO both Urshifu formes, Calyrex-S, and most Assault Vest Raging Bolt with Draco Meteor and most Incineroar Chi-Yu with Muddy Water Tera Stellar doesn't allow Tatsugiri to get an OHKO on Incineroar. Tatsugiri-D can run a Timid nature, making it deal less damage but letting it outspeed threats like Modest Terapagos and Regidrago and Jolly Incineroar.

Tatsugiri-D is incredibly frail, so it can be knocked out if it is targeted by both foes on the field. Fake Out pressure also makes it struggle to give Dondozo its boosts and support its partners with Helping Hand. Fairy- and Dragon-types like Flutter Mane, Whimsicott, and Raging Bolt with Thunderclap can also KO Tatsugiri-D before it can attack. Tatsugiri-D is also vulnerable to attacks once Commander activates, as it cannot act if Dondozo gets KOed. Tatsugiri-D is only used with Dondozo and should not be used for any other reason; if you want to see Tatsugiri-D's partners, they will be on Dondozo's analysis.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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