The fact that you can't think of how to make an extremely vague statement clearer shows that you aren't equipped to handle this analysis. An easy way to say it?
"The ease of walling Celebi means that it often brings in some of the top walls in OU to shut it down. Baton Pass turns that on its head by using opposing walls as setup bait before passing boosts to the most threatening sweepers in OU."
You also showed that you apparently have no sense of reading comprehension. Of my noted exceptions with the original analysis, nearly none of them have been addressed.
- There is STILL no mention of 101 Substitutes. That was a gimme if I ever saw one, and the fact that you couldn't even take an obvious suggestion and work it in anywhere makes it hard to think that you'll be able to effectively address changes. There's also no mention of other spreads, something I really wanted to see.
- Capitalization failures abound. Moves and types (and even Pokemon) are consistently not capitalized, which just shows a lack of care and ability to edit. I know that GP exists for a reason, but we shouldn't have to hold the writer's hand on even the most basic of grammatical issues.
- No addressing of vague filler writing. Words have to mean something, and the words "facilitate a sweep" mean nothing. Everything you do is looking to facilitate a sweep, because that's what the rest of the team does. It says nothing about how to use it. And again, I specifically asked about information about how to actually use the Pokemon in the analysis, and there still is none.
- Team Options is straight up barely changed. Sure, you included Heatran, but you included barely any information about why it's good (hint: it being specially based has barely anything to do with the reason it's good, I specifically mentioned it as a *defensive* teammate). You dropped a few words in there to make it look like there were more words, but again, more words != more content.
While I appreciate your dedication to the analysis, dedication can only take you so far. We don't want someone who is going to constantly update an analysis and "make a lot of changes". We want someone who is going to actually internalize and acknowledge the changes that are needed, and from what you've shown here, that doesn't appear to be you.
Honestly, if you keep up that dedication, you have potential here, but when you're doing an important part of an important analysis in the twilight of a generation (which generally means that the analyses tend to go into semi-stasis, so it's super important that everything going on the site now be of the utmost quality. I suggest that you take some time to work on your analysis skills, and when you return, try to take some time and focus a bit more on accuracy and internalizing all of the requests made.
This analysis will be reassigned in the days to come. I'm going to close this but leave it unmoved until it has been reassigned for reference purposes. Feel free to PM either me or PK Gaming (or preferably both) if you'd like to take up this analysis.