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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Body Press
- Iron Defense
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Crunch

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good Attack, Zamazenta-C is an excellent mid- or late-game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and when combined with Zamazenta-C's brilliant natural bulk, it can quickly clean up weakened teams. Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it Zamazenta-C answer Fairy-types, like Zacian and Tera Fairy Arceus-Dark, and Crunch lets it tackle Psychic- and Ghost-types, like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia, and Deoxys. 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allow it to outspeed Cyclizar, 112 Attack EVs let it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest of the EVs go into Defense to maximize Body Press's damage. Tera Water lets Zamazenta-C stay in on more opponents foes like Arceus-Fire, Palafin, Chi-Yu, and Kyurem-W, and Tera Flying lets you it resist Fighting-type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian, and Deoxys and be immune to Ground-type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna, though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-B, Arceus-Dark, Palafin, and Palkia-O, Zamazenta-C is appreciated by Giratina, Chi-Yu, Palkia-O, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. Zamazenta-C suffers from being worn down by entry hazards, so a hazard remover like Great Tusk or Giratina is needed. It also appreciates hazard support of its own from setters like Magearna and Dialga. Fighting-, Ground-, and Fire-resistant Pokemon like Arceus-Poison, Rillaboom, and Giratina are also a boon to Zamazenta-C, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.

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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned is an excellent mid-to-late game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and with these boosts can beat Magearna, Dialga, and Ursaluna-Bloodmoon. and when combined with its excellent natural bulk, can quickly clean up weakened teams (This isn't incorrect, however you mention its ability to handle these threats later in the analysis, so they can be replaced with something else) Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it answer fairy types, like Zacian-H and Terastalized Arceus-Dark (make sure to add examples, rather than just "fairy types") , and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia, and Deoxys (make sure to add examples, rather than just "Psychic and Ghost types") . 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows it to outspeed Cyclizar. 112 Attack EVs lets it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense to maximize Body Press damage; Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned stay in on more opponents like Arceus-Fire and Palafin (make sure to add examples, rather than just "more opponents") , and Tera Flying lets you resist Fighting type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian-H, and Deoxys (Once again, please add examples of pokemon that use fighting type moves) and be immune to Ground type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna (Add examples of pokemon who usually run ground type moves) though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, Arceus-Dark, Palafin-H, and Palkia-Origin (Though nothing is wrong with your example, you only list 1 pokemon for Zamazenta to check, so expanding the list is a good choice] Zamazenta-Crowned is appreciated by Palkia-Origin, who in turn checks Chi-Yu for Zamazenta-Crowned Pokemon weak to these threats, like Giratina, Chi-yu, Palkia-Origin, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. (Once again, although your example wasn't bad, there was only one, even though Zama-C synergizes with many more.) Zamazenta-Crowned suffers from hazards, so a remover like Cyclizar or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard setters like Magearna or Dialga. Fighting and Ground resists like Arceus-Poison and Rillaboom respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.
 
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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned is an excellent mid-to-late game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and with these boosts can beat Magearna, Dialga, and Ursaluna-Bloodmoon. and when combined with its excellent natural bulk, can quickly clean up weakened teams (This isn't incorrect, however you mention its ability to handle these threats later in the analysis, so they can be replaced with something else) Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it answer fairy types, like Zacian-H and Terastalized Arceus-Dark (make sure to add examples, rather than just "fairy types") , and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia, and Deoxys (make sure to add examples, rather than just "Psychic and Ghost types") . 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows it to outspeed Cyclizar. 112 Attack EVs lets it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense to maximize Body Press damage; Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned stay in on more opponents like Arceus-Fire and Palafin (make sure to add examples, rather than just "more opponents") , and Tera Flying lets you resist Fighting type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian-H, and Deoxys (Once again, please add examples of pokemon that use fighting type moves) and be immune to Ground type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna (Add examples of pokemon who usually run ground type moves) though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, Arceus-Dark, Palafin-H, and Palkia-Origin (Though nothing is wrong with your example, you only list 1 pokemon for Zamazenta to check, so expanding the list is a good choice] Zamazenta-Crowned is appreciated by Palkia-Origin, who in turn checks Chi-Yu for Zamazenta-Crowned Pokemon weak to these threats, like Giratina, Chi-yu, Palkia-Origin, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. (Once again, although your example wasn't bad, there was only one, even though Zama-C synergizes with many more.) Zamazenta-Crowned suffers from hazards, so a remover like Cyclizar or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard setters like Magearna or Dialga. Fighting and Ground resists like Arceus-Poison and Rillaboom respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.
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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned is an excellent mid-to-late game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and when combined with its excellent natural bulk, can quickly clean up weakened teams. Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it answer fairy types, like Zacian and Terastalized Arceus-Dark, and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types, like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia and Deoxys. 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows it to outspeed Cyclizar. 112 Attack EVs lets it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense to maximize Body Press damage; Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned stay in on more opponents like Arceus-Fire and Palafin, Chi-Yu, and Kyurem-White While Kyurem-White does have Freeze-Dry, tera water can give you the one turn you need to dispose of it and Tera Flying lets you resist Fighting type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian, and Deoxys and be immune to Ground type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna, though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, Arceus-Dark, Palafin, and Palkia-Origin, Zamazenta-Crowned is appreciated by Giratina, Chi-Yu, Palkia-Origin, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. Zamazenta-Crowned suffers from hazards, so a remover like Cyclizar Great Tusk Cyclizar has fallen off a lot, and so while it can't hurt to outspeed it, actually using it isn't reccomended. Zama also isn't great at recieving a shed tail due to its lack of resistances to common attacking types. or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard setters like Magearna or Dialga. Fighting and Ground and Fire resists like Arceus-Poison and Rillaboom and Giratina respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.
 
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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned is an excellent mid-to-late game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and when combined with its excellent natural bulk, can quickly clean up weakened teams. Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it answer fairy types, like Zacian and Terastalized Arceus-Dark, and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types, like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia and Deoxys. 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows it to outspeed Cyclizar. 112 Attack EVs lets it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense to maximize Body Press damage; Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned stay in on more opponents like Arceus-Fire and Palafin, Chi-Yu, and Kyurem-White While Kyurem-White does have Freeze-Dry, tera water can give you the one turn you need to dispose of it and Tera Flying lets you resist Fighting type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian, and Deoxys and be immune to Ground type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna, though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, Arceus-Dark, Palafin, and Palkia-Origin, Zamazenta-Crowned is appreciated by Giratina, Chi-Yu, Palkia-Origin, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. Zamazenta-Crowned suffers from hazards, so a remover like Cyclizar Great Tusk Cyclizar has fallen off a lot, and so while it can't hurt to outspeed it, actually using it isn't reccomended. Zama also isn't great at recieving a shed tail due to its lack of resistances to common attacking types. or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard setters like Magearna or Dialga. Fighting and Ground and Fire resists like Arceus-Poison and Rillaboom and Giratina respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.
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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense (the order of the moves on the set should match the order you talk about the moves in the set comments)

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned Attack, Zamazenta-C is an excellent mid-to-late game mid- or late-game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and when combined with its excellent Zamazenta-C's brilliant (or some other synonym, to avoid repetition) natural bulk, it can quickly clean up weakened teams. Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it Zamazenta-C answer fairy types Fairy-types, like Zacian and Terastalized Tera Fairy Arceus-Dark, and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types Psychic- and Ghost-types, like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia, (comma) and Deoxys. 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows nature allow it to outspeed Cyclizar. Cyclizar, 112 Attack EVs lets let it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense of the EVs go into Defense to maximize Body Press damage; Press's damage. Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned lets Zamazenta-C stay in on more opponents foes like Arceus-Fire, Palafin, Chi-Yu, (comma) and Kyurem-White Kyurem-W, and Tera Flying lets you it resist Fighting type Fighting-type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian, and Deoxys and be immune to Ground type Ground-type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna, though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon Ursaluna-B, Arceus-Dark, Palafin, and Palkia-Origin, Zamazenta-Crowned Palkia-O, Zamazenta-C is appreciated by Giratina, Chi-Yu, Palkia-Origin Palkia-O, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. Zamazenta-Crowned Zamazenta-C suffers from being worn down by entry hazards, so a hazard remover like Great Tusk or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard is needed. It also appreciates hazard support of its own from setters like Magearna or and Dialga. Fighting, Ground and Fire resists Fighting-, Ground-, and Fire-resistant Pokemon like Arceus-Poison, Rillaboom, (comma) and Giratina respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned Zamazenta-C, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/go-make-a-sandwitch.275219/ (fixed this link)
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/nap00.610920/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/finchely.642468/
Grammar checked by:

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[SET]
IronPress (Zamazenta-Crowned) @ Rusted Shield
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Water / Flying
EVs: 112 Atk / 196 Def / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Crunch
- Behemoth Bash / Heavy Slam
- Body Press
- Iron Defense (the order of the moves on the set should match the order you talk about the moves in the set comments)

[SET COMMENTS]
With its combination of robust defenses and good attack, Zamazenta-Crowned Attack, Zamazenta-C is an excellent mid-to-late game mid- or late-game sweeper for bulkier teams. Body Press synergizes well with Iron Defense and Dauntless Shield, and when combined with its excellent Zamazenta-C's brilliant (or some other synonym, to avoid repetition) natural bulk, it can quickly clean up weakened teams. Steel STAB in Behemoth Bash or Heavy Slam lets it Zamazenta-C answer fairy types Fairy-types, like Zacian and Terastalized Tera Fairy Arceus-Dark, and Crunch lets it tackle psychic and ghost types Psychic- and Ghost-types, like Mewtwo, Giratina, Lugia, (comma) and Deoxys. 200 Speed EVs with a Jolly Nature allows nature allow it to outspeed Cyclizar. Cyclizar, 112 Attack EVs lets let it have a favorable roll to 2HKO Mewtwo, and the rest goes into defense of the EVs go into Defense to maximize Body Press damage; Press's damage. Tera Water has useful defensive properties letting Zamazenta-Crowned lets Zamazenta-C stay in on more opponents foes like Arceus-Fire, Palafin, Chi-Yu, (comma) and Kyurem-White Kyurem-W, and Tera Flying lets you it resist Fighting type Fighting-type moves from the likes of Mewtwo, Zacian, and Deoxys and be immune to Ground type Ground-type moves from Great Tusk, Landorus, and Ursaluna, though a weakness to Stealth Rock is added. Being able to check Magearna, Zacian, Dialga, Ursaluna-Bloodmoon Ursaluna-B, Arceus-Dark, Palafin, and Palkia-Origin, Zamazenta-Crowned Palkia-O, Zamazenta-C is appreciated by Giratina, Chi-Yu, Palkia-Origin Palkia-O, Arceus-Dark and Mewtwo. Zamazenta-Crowned Zamazenta-C suffers from being worn down by entry hazards, so a hazard remover like Great Tusk or Giratina would be needed, alongside hazard is needed. It also appreciates hazard support of its own from setters like Magearna or and Dialga. Fighting, Ground and Fire resists Fighting-, Ground-, and Fire-resistant Pokemon like Arceus-Poison, Rillaboom, (comma) and Giratina respectively are also a boon to Zamazenta-Crowned Zamazenta-C, as they can stomach whatever hits come at it.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/go-make-a-sandwitch.275219/ (fixed this link)
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/nap00.610920/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/finchely.642468/
Grammar checked by:

1/1 GP Team done
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