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[SET]
Defensive (Vaporeon) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Poison/Dark
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Haze / Flip Turn
- Wish
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]

Vaporeon establishes itself as a great defensive Pokemon that is able to take on a variety of foes like Volcanion, Empoleon, and Basculegion-F with its ability, Water Absorb, while also Wish passing to its teammates to heal them up. Haze allows Vaporeon to remove stat boosts from setup sweepers such as Armarouge, Slowbro, and Suicune, while Flip Turn allows Vaporeon to safely bring in its teammates so they can recover through Vaporeon's Wish passing without taking damage. Protect allows Vaporeon to scout Choice-locked attacks from wallbreakers such as Galarian Zapdos and Gengar while allowing it to safely recover using Wish. Leftovers helps Vaporeon to keep itself healthy and can synergize well with Protect to help it stall out burned foes. Tera Poison makes Vaporeon immune to Toxic, allowing it to easily switch into Pokemon such as Umbreon and Fezandipiti. Tera Dark makes Vaporeon immune to Psychic Noise from Slowbro and Reuniclus, which allows it to recover using Wish, while also letting it take Psyshock or Stored Power from Armarouge, as well as allowing it to take Knock Off from Krookodile much more easily.

Vaporeon fits best on bulky offense and balance teams where it can form crucial backbones in order to wall Pokemon such as Suicune and Basculegion-F. Bulky attackers such as Hisuian Goodra, Raikou, and Galarian Zapdos heavily appreciate Vaporeon, as it grants Wish support to them while they pair nicely with it defensively. Special walls such as Registeel and Jirachi synergize with Vaporeon and take powerful special attacks from Pokemon such as Calm Mind Reuniclus and Raikou, while Vaporeon is able to keep them healthy through Wish passing. Dragon-types such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra pair well with Vaporeon, as they can take on the Electric- and Grass-type attacks aimed at it from Raikou, Oricorio-E, and Amoonguss. Entry hazard removers such as Talonflame and Galarian Weezing pair well with Vaporeon, removing hazards that may overwhelm it, while Vaporeon is able to Wish pass to them to keep them healthy. Stealth Rock setters such as Krookodile and Registeel can help wear down foes, while Vaporeon can keep them healthy with Wish, so they can continue to come in and set Stealth Rock up multiple times during the game.

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[SET]
Defensive (Vaporeon) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Poison/Dark
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Haze / Flip Turn
- Wish
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====

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Vaporeon establishes itself as a spectacular spectacular is a bit... optimistic... defensive Pokemon that is able to take on a variety of Pokemon foes like Volcanion by using its ability Water Absorb while also being able to pass Wishes to its teammates to heal them up. Haze allows Vaporeon to remove boosts from setup sweepers such as Armarouge and Suicune, while Flip Turn allows Vaporeon to safely get in its teammates so they can receive its Wishes without taking damage. Protect allows Vapreon to scout Choice-locked attacks from wallbreakers such as Volcanion Galarian Zapdos and Gengar while allowing it to safely receive its own wishes. Leftovers helps Vaporeon to keep itself healthy, and can synergise well with Protect to help it stall out opponents like?. Tera Poison makes Vaporeon immune to Toxic, and can mean Vaporeon can easily switch in to Pokemon such as Umbreon and Fezandipiti. Tera Dark means that Vaporeon can ignore Psychic Noise from Slowbro and Reuniclus, meaning it can receive its own Wishes, while also taking Knock Off from Krookodile much more easily.

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Vaporeon fits best on Bulky Offense and Balance bulky offense and balance teams, where it can form crucial backbones in order to help wall Pokemon such as Suicune and Basculegion-F. Choice item wallbreakers such as Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Zapdos heavily appreciate Vaporeon as it can pass Wishes to them while pairing nicely with it defensively. Special walls such as Registeel and Jirachi pair well with Vaporeon in order to take powerful special attacks from Pokemon such as Calm Mind Reuniclus and Raikou. Dragon-types such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra pair well with Vaporeon, as they can take on the Electric- and Grass-type attacks aimed at it examples?. Entry hazard removers such as Talonflame and Galarian Weezing pair well with Vaporeon in order to remove hazards that may overwhelm it. Could use a bit more about being able to Wish pass and needs mentions of Stealth Rock setters (you mention Registeel and Jirachi but don't talk about them providing hazards to help wear down the foes while you play the long game with Wish).

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Overall good work, just a bit more info would be nice
 
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[SET]
Defensive (Vaporeon) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Poison/Dark
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Haze / Flip Turn
- Wish
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====

Vaporeon establishes itself as a great defensive Pokemon that is able to take on a variety of foes like Volcanion name more mons here. by using its ability Water Absorb while also being able to pass Wishes to its teammates to heal them up. Haze allows Vaporeon to remove boosts from setup sweepers such as Armarouge, Slowbro and Suicune, while Flip Turn allows Vaporeon to safely get in its teammates so they can receive its Wishes without taking damage. Protect allows Vapreon to scout Choice-locked attacks from wallbreakers such as Galarian Zapdos and Gengar while allowing it to safely receive its own wishes. Leftovers helps Vaporeon to keep itself healthy, and can synergise well with Protect to help it stall out opponents such as a burned Salamence or a burned Mimikyu burned opponents. Tera Poison makes Vaporeon immune to Toxic, and can mean Vaporeon can easily switch in to Pokemon such as Umbreon and Fezandipiti. Tera Dark means that Vaporeon can ignore makes Vaporeon immune to Psychic Noise from Slowbro and Reuniclus, meaning it can receive its own Wishes also mention psychic attacks from armarouge, while also taking Knock Off from Krookodile much more easily.

Vaporeon fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, where it can form crucial backbones in order to help wall Pokemon such as Suicune and Basculegion-F. Choice item wallbreakers such as Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Zapdos I think you should specify bulky attackers and remove choice item. Pokemon like Raikou, Entei and Hoodra still benefit even if they aren't choice locked. heavily appreciate Vaporeon as it can pass Wishes to them while pairing nicely with it defensively. Special walls such as Registeel and Jirachi pair well with Vaporeon in order to take powerful special attacks from Pokemon such as Calm Mind Reuniclus and Raikou, while Vaporeon is able to keep them healthy by passing Wishes. Dragon-types such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra pair well with Vaporeon, as they can take on the Electric- and Grass-type attacks aimed at it from Raikou and Oricorio Pom Pom, name a grass type here. Entry hazard removers such as Talonflame and Galarian Weezing pair well with Vaporeon in order to remove hazards that may overwhelm it, while Vaporeon is able to Wish pass to them to keep them healthy. Stealth Rock setters such as Krookodile and Registeel can help wear down foes with Stealth Rock, while Vaporeon can keep them healthy with Wish so they can continue to come in and set Stealth Rock up multiple times during the game.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
Defensive (Vaporeon) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Poison/Dark
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Haze / Flip Turn
- Wish
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====

Vaporeon establishes itself as a great defensive Pokemon that is able to take on a variety of foes like Volcanion, Empoleon, (AC) and Basculegion-F by using with its ability Water Absorb while also being able to pass Wishes to its teammates to heal them up. Haze allows Vaporeon to remove stat boosts from setup sweepers such as Armarouge, Slowbro, (AC) and Suicune, while Flip Turn allows Vaporeon to safely get bring in its teammates so they can receive its Wishes without taking damage. Protect allows Vapreon Vaporeon to scout Choice-locked attacks from wallbreakers such as Galarian Zapdos and Gengar while allowing it to safely receive its own Wishes. Leftovers helps Vaporeon to keep itself healthy, and can synergise synergize well with Protect to help it stall out burned opponents foes. Tera Poison makes Vaporeon immune to Toxic, and can mean Vaporeon can allowing it to (slightly reworded this to prevent repetition of the phrase "...meaning it can...") easily switch in to Pokemon such as Umbreon and Fezandipiti. Tera Dark makes Vaporeon immune to Psychic Noise from Slowbro and Reuniclus, meaning it can receive its own Wishes, lets it take Psyshock or Stored Power from Armarouge, (AC) and allows it to take Knock Off from Krookodile much more easily.

Vaporeon fits best on bulky offense and balance teams, where it can form crucial backbones in order to help wall Pokemon such as Suicune and Basculegion-F. Bulky attackers such as Hisuian Goodra, Raikou, (AC) and Galarian Zapdos heavily appreciate Vaporeon, (AC) as it can pass Wishes to them while pairing they pair nicely with it defensively. Special walls such as Registeel and Jirachi pair well synergize (slight reword to avoid repetition of the phrase "pair well") with Vaporeon in order to and take powerful special attacks from Pokemon such as Calm Mind Reuniclus and Raikou, while Vaporeon is able to keep them healthy by passing Wishes. Dragon-types such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra pair well with Vaporeon, as they can take on the Electric- and Grass-type attacks aimed at it from Raikou, Oricorio Pom Pom Oricorio-E, (AC) and Amoonguss. Entry hazard removers such as Talonflame and Galarian Weezing pair well with Vaporeon, (AC) removing in order to remove hazards that may overwhelm it, while Vaporeon is able to Wish pass to them to keep them healthy. Stealth Rock setters such as Krookodile and Registeel can help wear down foes with Stealth Rock, while Vaporeon can keep them healthy with Wish so they can continue to come in and set Stealth Rock up multiple times during the game.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET]
Defensive (Vaporeon) @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Poison/Dark
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Haze / Flip Turn
- Wish
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
====
Vaporeon establishes itself as a great defensive Pokemon that is able to take on a variety of foes like Volcanion, Empoleon, and Basculegion-F with its ability, (AC) Water Absorb, (AC) while also being able Wish passing to pass Wishes to its teammates to heal them up. Haze allows Vaporeon to remove stat boosts from setup sweepers such as Armarouge, Slowbro, and Suicune, while Flip Turn allows Vaporeon to safely bring in its teammates so they can receive its Wishes recover through Vaporeon's Wish passing ("Wish passing" and "Wish passer are accepted terms, "passing Wishes" is incoherent because the move you're using is Wish, not Wishes and the effect of the move is recovery, which needs to be emphasized) without taking damage. Protect allows Vaporeon to scout Choice-locked attacks from wallbreakers such as Galarian Zapdos and Gengar while allowing it to safely receive its own Wishes recover using Wish. Leftovers helps Vaporeon to keep itself healthy (RC) and can synergize well with Protect to help it stall out burned foes. Tera Poison makes Vaporeon immune to Toxic, allowing it to easily switch in to into Pokemon such as Umbreon and Fezandipiti. Tera Dark makes Vaporeon immune to Psychic Noise from Slowbro and Reuniclus, meaning which allows it can receive its own Wishes to recover using Wish, lets while also letting it take Psyshock or Stored Power from Armarouge, and allows as well as allowing it to take Knock Off from Krookodile much more easily.

Vaporeon fits best on bulky offense and balance teams (RC) where it can form crucial backbones in order to help wall Pokemon such as Suicune and Basculegion-F. Bulky attackers such as Hisuian Goodra, Raikou, and Galarian Zapdos heavily appreciate Vaporeon, as it can pass Wishes grants Wish support to them while they pair nicely with it defensively. Special walls such as Registeel and Jirachi synergize with Vaporeon and take powerful special attacks from Pokemon such as Calm Mind Reuniclus and Raikou, while Vaporeon is able to keep them healthy by through Wish passing Wishes. Dragon-types such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra pair well with Vaporeon, as they can take on the Electric- and Grass-type attacks aimed at it from Raikou, Oricorio-E, and Amoonguss. Entry hazard removers such as Talonflame and Galarian Weezing pair well with Vaporeon, removing remove hazards that may overwhelm it, while Vaporeon is able to Wish pass to them to keep them healthy. Stealth Rock setters such as Krookodile and Registeel can help wear down foes with Stealth Rock, while Vaporeon can keep them healthy with Wish, (AC) so they can continue to come in and set Stealth Rock up multiple times during the game.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/heatranator.647728/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sneakyplanner.598717/
Grammar checked by:
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