1v1 Trick + Disable Sableye [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Trick gives the foe Sableye's Choice Scarf, allowing Sableye to use Disable and force it into using Struggle. This allows Sableye to beat threats like Dondozo, Iron Hands, and Donphan.
* Fling gets rid of any unwanted items, such as a given Assault Vest and Sableye's Choice Scarf.
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt while stalling its foe.
* 252 HP and Defense EVs with an Impish nature maximize Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then repeatedly use Recover until the foe faints from Struggle recoil.
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam Recover.
* Sableye struggles to beat Encore and Taunt users, like Annihilape and Skeledirge, and Pokemon that OHKO it, like Iron Valiant and Sylveon. Additionally, Sableye can not defeat Dark-types such as Meowscarada and Ting-Lu, due to its status moves not affecting them.

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[tom1535, 576556], [doc1203, 526135]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sabelette, 583793], [Dawn of Ares, 467437]]
 
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wasn't much to qc so gj
[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling maybe slash night shade for skele? also helps vs some dark types like non taunt ting lu and random scarfers iirc
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Prankster allows Sableye to move before most non-Dark-type Pokemon on its status moves. have priority on its status moves, allowing it to move before most non-Dark-type Pokemon. might just be me but the ending is worded a bit weird, you can keep it if u want tho
* Trick gives the opponent Sableye's Choice Scarf, which locks the opponent into a move, then uses allowing Sableye to use Disable and forces them into using Struggle. makes it sound like trick is locking the opponent into using a move (scarf is tho) and also sounds like trick is using disable. u can reword it to your liking if u want
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt, allowing for more Struggle turns.
* 252 HP and Defense with an Impish nature maximize (typo) Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam Recover until the opponent faints from using Struggle.
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam Recover.

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
sorry that this was like a gp check, if u got questions then dm on cord
 
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wasn't much to qc so gj
[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling maybe slash night shade for skele? also helps vs some dark types like non taunt ting lu and random scarfers iirc
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Prankster allows Sableye to move before most non-Dark-type Pokemon on its status moves. have priority on its status moves, allowing it to move before most non-Dark-type Pokemon. might just be me but the ending is worded a bit weird, you can keep it if u want tho
* Trick gives the opponent Sableye's Choice Scarf, which locks the opponent into a move, then uses allowing Sableye to use Disable and forces them into using Struggle. makes it sound like trick is locking the opponent into using a move (scarf is tho) and also sounds like trick is using disable. u can reword it to your liking if u want
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt, allowing for more Struggle turns.
* 252 HP and Defense with an Impish nature maximize (typo) Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam Recover until the opponent faints from using Struggle.
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam Recover.

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
sorry that this was like a gp check, if u got questions then dm on cord
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gonna stamp this as official, do try to include some more examples if possible. Only thing is that I'd suggest you not try to explain what Prankster is as an ability, as you can click on Prankster on Smogon Dex and it literally tells you what it does. But yeah, add examples if you can that's my big thing-
 
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nothing to say here. if you dont want to slash night shade you dont need to, we can discuss on discord.

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[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling (consider slashing night shade, tom covered some decent reasons for using it)
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Trick gives the opponent Sableye's Choice Scarf, which locks the opponent into a move, allowing Sableye to use Disable and force them into using Struggle.
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt, allowing for more Struggle turns.
* 252 HP and Defense with an Impish nature maximize Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam repeatedly use Recover until the opponent faints from using Struggle recoil. (Mention like 1 or 2 examples)
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then spam repeatedly use Recover.

if night shade is slashed add 1 line on it

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[tom1535, 576556], [doc1203, 526135]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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(AC) (AH) Add Comma/Add Hyphen, (RC) (RH) Remove Comma/Remove Hyphen

[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Trick gives the opponent foe Sableye's Choice Scarf, which locks the opponent foe (can also just say "locks it") into a move, allowing Sableye to use Disable and force them it into using Struggle. This allows Sableye to beat threats like Dondozo, Iron Hands and Donphan.
* Fling gets rid of any unwanted items, such as a tricked Assault Vest, or Sableye's Choice Scarf.
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt, allowing for more Struggle turns. (rephrase so "Struggle" isn't an adjective if possible, like "Recover allows Sableye to heal off the foe's Struggle until it KOes itself.")
* 252 HP and Defense EVs with an Impish nature maximize Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then repeatedly use Recover until the opponent foe faints from Struggle recoil.
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where ("against which" might be better grammatically) Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then repeatedly use Recover.
* Sableye struggles to beat Encore and Taunt users, (AC) like Annihilape and Skeledirge, and Pokemon that OHKO it, like Iron Valiant and Sylveon. Additionally, Sableye can not cannot defeat Dark-types such as Meowscarada and Ting-Lu, as well as Gholdengo (needs a rephrase to "cannot defeat Dark-types nor Gholdengo" or something similar, current phrasing is hard to parse; also, isn't the issue with Gholdengo not Prankster but just immunity to all status moves?) due to Prankster not affecting them.

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[tom1535, 576556], [doc1203, 526135]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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Was kinda already working on this before Sabelette started, but here's my amcheck.
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[SET]
name: Trick + Disable
move 1: Trick
move 2: Disable
move 3: Recover
move 4: Fling
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
* Trick gives the opponent foe Sableye's Choice Scarf, which locks the opponent into a move, (dex info) allowing Sableye to use Disable and force them it into using Struggle. This allows Sableye to beat threats like Dondozo, Iron Hands, (add comma) and Donphan.
* Fling gets rid of any unwanted items, such as a tricked given Assault Vest, (remove comma) and or Sableye's Choice Scarf.
* Recover allows Sableye to heal off damage dealt while stalling its foe. , allowing for more Struggle turns.
* 252 HP and Defense EVs with an Impish nature maximize Sableye's physical bulk.
* Sableye should almost always use Trick turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then repeatedly use Recover until the opponent foe faints from Struggle recoil.
* An exception to this is with Choice item Pokemon like Choice Band Dondozo and Donphan, where Sableye should use Fling turn 1 and Disable turn 2, then repeatedly use spam Recover.(repetitive word choice)
* Sableye struggles to beat Encore and Taunt users, (add comma) like Annihilape and Skeledirge, and Pokemon that OHKO it, like Iron Valiant and Sylveon. Additionally, Sableye can not (remove space) defeat Dark-types such as Meowscarada and Ting-Lu, as well as Gholdengo, (add comma) due to Prankster not affecting them its status moves not affecting them.

[CREDITS]
- Set(s) created by: [[fruan, 536219]]
- Written by: [[bored_glitch, 579035]]
- Quality checked by: [[tom1535, 576556], [doc1203, 526135]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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