SV OU Teal mask ogerpon semi-stall!!!!! Pls give me suggestions

[Doguemon]

So yea I built a semistall team using teal mask ogerpon. I’m always looking for any suggestions to improve my team.

The team: https://pokepast.es/89727953f035728a

Team breakdown:
Teal mask ogerpon is my fav one so yea.

Ogerpon (F) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Defiant
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Power Whip
- Knock Off
- U-turn
- Spikes
This oger set is more of a utility set with hazards and u turn for momentum. It provides excellent value for a team because of its speed (which increases further upon Tera) and the number of support moves it has. I almost always use this as a lead to set spikes or get the hell out in a bad matchup. It also semi-walls ogerpon wellspring.


Blissey @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Natural Cure
Tera Type: Dark
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Calm Mind
- Seismic Toss
- Shadow Ball
- Soft-Boiled
Just like any defensive core, we need a good spdef wall, and blissey does the job perfectly. With calm mind and shadow ball it can threaten gholdengo which normally walls it. Seismic toss for good chip and soft boiled for recovery rounds out the set.

Dondozo @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Unaware
Tera Type: Fighting
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Curse
- Sleep Talk
- Rest
- Body Press
Next we have dozo, an insane def wall that shuts down physical setup sweepers. This fat blue blob checks many powerful attackers like roaring moon, gouging fire, basically any sd or did sweeper. Body press and tera fighting for gambit and rest for recovery.

Clefable @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Unaware
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Wish
- Protect
- Moonblast
- Stealth Rock
Clefable is our wish-passer and our unaware user for special setup sweepers. Normally I would use clod for this but I need wish support to keep oger healthy. Max hp and spdef ensure that it can tank hits from mons like iron valiant, darkrai (hopefully no sludge bomb), and many more.

Gholdengo @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Good as Gold
Tera Type: Fighting
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Make It Rain
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast
- Trick
Gholdengo acts as our spin blocker and speed control with choice scarf and trick to cripple opposing walls. It has great synergy with the team overall.

Talonflame @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Flame Body
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 HP / 76 Def / 180 Spe
Bold Nature
- Will-O-Wisp
- Flamethrower
- Roost
- U-turn
Talonflame is used to check phys attackers like meowscarada and great tusk while also spreading burns and keeping momentum with u turn.


Replays:
https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen9ou-2165353201 vs stack

https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen9ou-2165473485-8xposy28vxcbrhanm2qhmbvybml0bdwpw vs fake stall (lol)

https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen9ou-2165479979 vs balance

Keep in mind I’m still in the 1300s but I was testing this team lower on the ladder. This is my first team build and I hope you guys enjoy!!

 

[TheDuckChris]

Hi, interesting team.

Your main problem is this one guy who happens to take very little damage from hazards as well as being able to absorb knock off and generally outlast your whole team, while knocking himself:
A couple suggestions ranging from simple to complex

Hex > Shadow Ball. Since you have burn from talonflame this would not be only for gliscor, but at least it would be mostly for gliscor. Still hits hard on most other things, for example having an 80% chance to OHKO Dragapult.

Air Balloon/Covert Cloak/Boots > Choice Scarf, Thunder Wave > Trick, Recover > Focus Blast. Basically exchange the scarf set for a bulkier set, this would help switch in on some status moves as well as giving another status to spread and help with speed control. Notable that you still have Ogerpon's tera as an additional speed control option.

-> Switching talonflame out for Gliscor would give you a real knock off absorber. On a team like this facade would be a decent call as it matches up decently well into other Gliscors, and can clean up vs weakened opponents while the rest of the team manages the more offensive checks.

Another small change

New spread: 184 HP / 72 Atk / 252 Spe Jolly Nature Basically just save some attack for bulk while still retaining the ability to OHKO samurott, 2hko great tusk, 2hko ogerpon-wellspring, 2hko darkrai, etc.
New paste

 

[Doguemon]

Ty man will try these out

 

[Doguemon]

The reason I added talonflame is bc the team is now weak to meowscarada tho