Monotype Sneasy with a scarf (Sneasler/Posion REVAMP) [QC:1/1] [GP:1/1]

[Pengairxan]

[SET]
Sneasler @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Gunk Shot
- U-turn
- Switcheroo / Throat Chop / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Sneasler is an amazing revenge killer on Poison teams, especially with a Choice Scarf, as it can outspeed the likes of Regieleki, Choice Specs Dragapult, and Roaring Moon with powerful STAB moves, spread poison with Poison Touch, and keep up the momentum with U-turn. Close Combat blasts through Steel- and Dark-types such as Heatran, Iron Treads, and Hydreigon with ease. Dire Claw deals with the Ogerpon formes and Iron Valiant, and it has a 23.33% chance to inflict paralysis or sleep on would-be checks like Torkoal and Galarian Weezing. Gunk Shot may be preferred over Dire Claw for its ability to OHKO threats like Flutter Mane and Primarina while avoiding contact effects from its foe's abilities such as Zapdos's Static. Finally, Switcheroo can shut down physically bulky walls such as Skarmory and Toxapex, which would otherwise beat Sneasler. Alternatively, Throat Chop allows Sneasler to hit Ghost-type threats such as Dragapult, Spectrier, and Hisuian Zoroark, while Rock Slide removes targets like Volcarona and Iron Moth.

With U-turn, Sneasler can easily pivot out to Alolan Muk to take on Psychic-type threats such as Espathra, Galarian Slowking, and Hatterene, which Sneasler cannot handle. Similarly, Overqwil can dispatch physical Psychic-type foes like Gallade and Iron Boulder while also providing Spikes, which can allow Sneasler to OHKO targets like Flutter Mane and Ursaluna. Amoonguss provides a solid check to Ground- and Water-type threats such as Great Tusk, Excadrill in sand, and Urshifu-R, which could otherwise handle Sneasler. Galarian Weezing provides a crucial immunity to Ground- and Dragon-type attacks that allows it to easily deal with foes like Hippowdon and Dragonite, use Defog to remove entry hazards, and enable Sneasler to come in safely. Toxapex can easily come in on priority users like Mimikyu, Scizor, and Hisuian Arcanine attempting to revenge kill Sneasler and handle them thanks to a combination of Rocky Helmet and Surf while also weakening Gouging Fire for an easy cleanup. Pecharunt and Galarian Slowking can provide Sneasler with safe entry by using their pivoting moves like Parting Shot and Chilly Reception, respectively. Pecharunt also provides support by being able to take on opposing physical walls such as Galarian Weezing and Araquanid. Galarian Slowking, meanwhile, can use Future Sight to cripple physical walls attempting to handle Sneasler such as Toxapex and Hippowdon. Glimmora can deal with Flying-types such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos while setting Stealth Rock to help deal with threats such as Latios. Furthermore, Corrosion enables it to use Toxic to wear down targets such as Galarian Weezing and Corviknight, which otherwise wall Sneasler. Iron Moth provides a special attacking complement to Sneasler while being able to deal with physical walls such as Amoonguss and Skarmory. In return, Sneasler deals with special walls that cause Iron Moth trouble such as Blissey and Tyranitar.

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[Neko]

Spoiler

[SET]
Sneasler @ Choice Scarf
Set: Choice Scarf (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Gunk Shot
- U-turn
- Switcheroo / Throat Chop / Rock Slide


[SET COMMENTS]
Sneasler is an amazing revenge killer on Poison teams, especially with a Choice Scarf, thanks to its immense speed outspeeding threats such as Regieleki, Choice Scarf Enamorus (want to mention stinkies like specs pult too?), and Roaring Moon its powerful STABs, Poison Touch to spread Poison, and with U-turn to keep up momentum. Close Combat blasts through Steel and Dark-types such as Heatran, Iron Treads, and Hydreigon with ease. Dire Claw deals with the threats like the Ogerpon formes and Iron Valiant along with providing a 23.33% to inflict Paralysis or Sleep on would checks like Zapdos (I think you wouldnt attempt zappy since Static sucks, maybe Toxapex or Hippo [Poison] instead?) and Galarian Weezing. (Mention Gunk Shot as an option, screwing over Primanyan, Flutter Mane and is even non contact)Finally Switcheroo can shut down physically bulky walls such as Skarmory and Toxapex which would otherwise beat Sneasler. Alternatively Throat Chop can be used to allow Sneasler to hit Ghost-type threats such as Dragapult, Spectrier, and Hisuain Zoroark while Rock Slide deals removes targets such as Volcarona and Iron Moth.

With U-turn Sneasler can easily pivot out to teammates such as Alolan Muk which can take on Psychic-type threats such as Espathra, Galarian Slowking, and Hatterene that Sneasler cannot handle. Overqwil can similarly take on physical Psychic-type threats such as Gallade and Iron Boulder along with providing Spikes which can allow for Sneasler to OHKO targets like Flutter Mane and Ursaluna. Amoonguss provides a solid check to Ground- and Water-type threats such as Great Tusk, Quagsire, (too rare meowadays, want to midground CB Exca instead?) and Urshifu-R that could otherwise handle Sneasler. Galarian Weezing provides a crucial immunity to Ground- and Dragon-type attacks allowing it to easily deal with Hippowdon and Dragonite along with using Defog to remove entry hazards allowing Sneasler to come in safely. Toxapex can easily come in on Priority users like Mimikyu, Scizor, and Hisuian Arcanine attempting to revenge kill Sneasler and handle them thanks to a combination of Rocky Helmet and Surf (mention that it sort of deals with gouger at least). Galarian Slowking can pivot Sneasler with Chilly Reception and use Future Sight to cripple Physical walls attemping to handle Sneasler such as Toxapex and Hippowdon. Glimmora can deal with Flying-types such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos along with providing Stealth Rock to help deal with threats such as Latios and Tentacruel (maybe someone else instead?). Glimmora can also use Corrosion Toxic to wear down targets such as Galarian Weezing and Corviknight which otherwise wall Sneasler. Iron Moth provides a special attacking compliment to Sneasler being able to deal with Physical walls such as Amoonguss and Skarmory while Sneasler deals with Special walls that cause Iron Moth trouble such as Blissey and Tyranitar.
*add mr. Pecharunt

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QC 1/1, thankie Pengairxan

 

[Pengairxan]

GP Team

 

[GraveBee]

Amcheck - Overall, good content, mostly needed some adjustment to ensure that the proper meaning is being conveyed

Copyedit

[SET]
Sneasler @ Choice Scarf
Set: Choice Scarf (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Gunk Shot
- U-turn
- Switcheroo / Throat Chop / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]

Sneasler is an amazing revenge killer on Poison teams, especially with a Choice Scarf, thanks to its immense speed (Redundancy) outspeeding threats such as the likes of (Repetition) Regieleki, Choice Spec Choice Specs Dragapult, and Roaring Moon its with powerful STABs STAB moves (Grammar Convention), Poison Touch to spread Poison poison (Another case of possible redundancy, I'd recommend 'status' instead), and with U-turn to keep up momentum. Close Combat blasts through Steel Steel- and Dark-types such as Heatran, Iron Treads, and Hydreigon with ease. Dire Claw deals with the threats like the Ogerpon formes and Iron Valiant along with providing and has (Clarity) a 23.33% chance (Percentile hanging by itself) to inflict Paralysis paralysis or Sleep sleep on would would-be checks like Torkoal and Galarian Weezing. Gunk Shot may be preferred over Dire Claw for its high damage being able ability (Redundancy. '...high damage and ability to OHKO...' would also make sense, but not the high damage being able to OHKO by itself, as the high damage is why the move is OHKOing) to OHKO threats like Flutter Mane and Primarina along with not triggering contact effects such as Zapdos's Static. Finally, (Comma) Switcheroo can shut down physically bulky walls such as Skarmory and Toxapex, (Comma) which would otherwise beat Sneasler ('...physically bulky walls which otherwise beat Sneasler, such as Skarmory and Toxapex' may prove more varied and natural, but isn't absolutely necessary to avoid repetition here). Alternatively, (Comma) Throat Chop can be used to allow Sneasler to hit Ghost-type threats such as Dragapult, Spectrier, and Hisuain Hisuian Zoroark, (Comma, to separate the two independent ideas) Rock Slide deals removes targets such as like (Repetition) Volcarona and Iron Moth.

With U-turn, (Comma) Sneasler can easily pivot out to teammates such as Alolan Muk which can to (Clarity and Brevity) take on Psychic-type threats such as Espathra, Galarian Slowking, and Hatterene that Sneasler cannot handle ('...Psychic-types that Sneasler cannot handle, such as...' might allow for more varied sentence structure and help prevent repetition. It may also be good to note 'special Psychic-types' in here so as to distinguish it more clearly from the next sentence). Overqwil can similarly Similarly, Overqwil can (Clarity, but possibly not a necessary change) take on dispatch (Repetition) physical Psychic-type threats such as foes like (Repetition) Gallade and Iron Boulder, (Comma) along with providing Spikes which can allow for Sneasler to OHKO targets like Flutter Mane and Ursaluna. Amoonguss provides a solid check to Ground- and Water-type threats such as Great Tusk, Excadrill, and Urshifu-R that could otherwise handle Sneasler. Galarian Weezing provides a crucial immunity to Ground- and Dragon-type attacks, (Comma, to prevent a run-on sentence) allowing it to easily deal with Hippowdon and Dragonite, (Comma) along with using Defog to remove entry hazards allowing and enabling (Repetition) Sneasler to come in safely. Toxapex can easily come in on Priority priority users like Mimikyu, Scizor, and Hisuian Arcanine attempting to revenge kill Sneasler and handle them thanks to a combination of Rocky Helmet and Surf along with being able weaken while also weakening (Clarity) Gouging Fire for an easy cleanup. Pecharunt and Galarian Slowking can provide Sneasler Safe entry with their pivoting moves in Parting Shot and Chilly Reception respectively. Pecharunt also provides support by being able to take on opposing Physical physical walls such as Galarian Weezing and Araquanid. Galarian Slowking, (Comma) meanwhile, (Comma) can use Future Sight to cripple Physical physical walls attempting to handle Sneasler such as Toxapex and Hippowdon. Glimmora can deal with Flying-types such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos along with providing while using (Repetition) Stealth Rock to help deal with threats such as Latios (This sentence is ambiguous; clarify whether this is referring to Latios and similar foes - in which case, feel free to specify them - or if it refers to Latios by itself - in which case, remove 'threats such as'). Glimmora can also use Corrosion Toxic (The phrase 'Corrosion Toxic' may be confusing here, as it's not a coined term of its own; maybe 'Corrosion + Toxic' or 'Toxic with its Corrosion Ability would make more sense?) to wear down targets such as Galarian Weezing and Corviknight which otherwise wall Sneasler. Iron Moth provides a special attacking compliment to Sneasler, (Comma) being able to deal with Physical physical walls such as Amoonguss and Skarmory while Sneasler deals with Special special walls that cause Iron Moth trouble such as Blissey and Tyranitar.

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[Pengairxan]

Amcheck - Overall, good content, mostly needed some adjustment to ensure that the proper meaning is being conveyed
Disclaimer that an amcheck is not the same as the work a GPer, and does not replace the work of the GP team, but may be used to assist in their work and expedite the process.

Implemented.

 

[LUSTRE]

1/1 GP Team done
credit GraveBee as well
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[SET]
Sneasler @ Choice Scarf
Set Name: Choice Scarf (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Gunk Shot
- U-turn
- Switcheroo / Throat Chop / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]

Sneasler is an amazing revenge killer on Poison teams, especially with a Choice Scarf, thanks to outspeeding as it can outspeed the likes of Regieleki, Choice Specs Dragapult, and Roaring Moon with powerful STAB moves, spread poison with Poison Touch to spread poison, and keep up the momentum with U-turn to keep up momentum. Close Combat blasts through Steel- and Dark-types such as Heatran, Iron Treads, and Hydreigon with ease. Dire Claw deals with the Ogerpon formes and Iron Valiant, (AC) and it has a 23.33% chance to inflict paralysis or sleep can it not inflict any status? om on would-be checks like Torkoal and Galarian Weezing. Gunk Shot may be preferred over Dire Claw for its ability to OHKO threats like Flutter Mane and Primarina along with not triggering while avoiding contact effects from its foe's abilities such as Zapdos's Static. Finally, Switcheroo can shut down physically bulky walls such as Skarmory and Toxapex, which would otherwise beat Sneasler. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used to allow allows Sneasler to hit Ghost-type threats such as Dragapult, Spectrier, and Hisuian Zoroark, while Rock Slide deals removes targets like Volcarona and Iron Moth.

With U-turn, Sneasler can easily pivot out to Alolan Muk to take on Psychic-type threats such as Espathra, Galarian Slowking, and Hatterene, (AC) which that Sneasler cannot handle. Similarly, Overqwil can dispatch physical Psychic-type foes like Gallade and Iron Boulder (RC) while also along with providing Spikes, (AC) which can allow Sneasler to OHKO targets like Flutter Mane and Ursaluna. Amoonguss provides a solid check to Ground- and Water-type threats such as Great Tusk, Excadrill in sand sorry this is qc work, but sandless drill is slower than scarf sneasler and loses to cc, and Urshifu-R, (AC) which that could otherwise handle Sneasler. Galarian Weezing provides a crucial immunity to Ground- and Dragon-type attacks (RC) allowing that allows it to easily deal with foes like Hippowdon and Dragonite, using use Defog to remove entry hazards, (AC) and enabling enable Sneasler to come in safely. Toxapex can easily come in on priority users like Mimikyu, Scizor, and Hisuian Arcanine attempting to revenge kill Sneasler and handle them thanks to a combination of Rocky Helmet and Surf while also weakening Gouging Fire for an easy cleanup. Pecharunt and Galarian Slowking can provide Sneasler Safe with safe entry with by using their pivoting moves in like Parting Shot and Chilly Reception, (AC) respectively. Pecharunt also provides support by being able to take on opposing physical walls such as Galarian Weezing and Araquanid. Galarian Slowking, meanwhile, can use Future Sight to cripple physical walls attempting to handle Sneasler such as Toxapex and Hippowdon. Glimmora can deal with Flying-types such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos while using setting Stealth Rock to help deal with threats such as Latios. (AP) Furthermore, Corrosion enables it to use Toxic you seemed to have removed this part in your previous implementation to wear down targets such as Galarian Weezing and Corviknight, (AC) which otherwise wall Sneasler. Iron Moth provides a special attacking compliment complement to Sneasler (RC) while being able to deal with physical walls such as Amoonguss and Skarmory. (AP) In return, (AC) while Sneasler deals with special walls that cause Iron Moth trouble such as Blissey and Tyranitar.

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