Pokémon X / Y OU Team #001 (WIP)

A little background knowledge:

I am new to the generation six meta-game as well as the game itself, however I will hopefully be getting a 3DS for Christmas along with a copy of X or Y. Knowing that, I decided to have a go at making a competitive team which I haven't done since the release of Black and White because I was slowing but surely getting bored with Pokémon as a result of playing far too much of it. Therefore I found it would be a good idea to take a break from it for a while, which ended up being around two years...

So here I am, trying to make a return to the Pokémon community with the release of X and Y!

(This is also my very first Rate My Team)
The team at a glance:
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The team in more detail:
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Smeargle (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Own Tempo
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Defences / 252 Speeds
Jolly Nature (+Speed, -Special Attack)
- Spore
- Magic Coat
- Sticky Web
- Stealth Rock

Smeargle is generally used as my lead as this team is very, very dependent on getting the Sticky Web up because this team is really slow and needs the -1 speed on the opponents side of the field, as a result I send him in, go for the obvious Spore to put something to sleep then go straight for the Sticky Web, with Stealth Rock following straight after, although, most of the time I can go without setting up my Stealth Rock, but it is always nice to have anyway. Lastly, I chose Night Shade as it enables Smeargle to do something even if taunted, but he generally is alive long enough to make any good use of it.
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Aegislash (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Stance Change
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Attacks / 4 Special Defences
Adamant Nature (+Attack, -Special Attack)
- Shadow Sneak
- Sacred Sword
- Swords Dance
- King's Shield

Aegislash boasts an amazing 150 base attack stat along with a 150 base special attack stat, but other than that it lacking in other stats, but that doesn't make Aegislash any less a good Pokémon. Shadow Sneak is there for the STAB priority move that it needs due it's rather bad speed stat, Sacred Sword is there as it is quite powerful and ignores any stat changes the foe may have. Swords Dance is to instantly double it's already high attack stat, and lastly King's Shield is a move similar to Protect, however unlike Protect it will halve the opponents attack stat if Aegislash is hit with a contact move.
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Hydreigon (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 4 Attacks / 252 Special Attacks / 252 Speeds
Mild Nature (+Special Attack, -Defence)
- Draco Meteor
- Fire Blast
- Superpower
- Dark Pulse

Hydreigon is a really good wall breaker / late game cleaner, with plenty of powerful moves ready to be fired upon your opponent in an attempt to deal some heavy damage. Draco Meteor is a hard hitting 150 base move that leaves anything that doesn’t resist it in bad shape. Fire Blast is there for coverage and also packs quite a punch, Superpower is there to break through any specially defensive threat that is lacking in defence. Dark Pulse is there as a second STAB move and is once again there for coverage.
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Blastoise (M) @ Blastoisite
Trait: Torrent / Rain Dish (Mega Launcher)
EVs: 248 HP / 48 Defenses / 212 Special Attacks
Modest Nature (+Special Attack, -Attack)
- Rapid Spin
- Water Pulse
- Roar
- Toxic


Your standard supporting Tentacruel, Rapid Spin is there to get rid of hazards, mainly Stealth Rock as Talonflame doesn’t appreciate losing half its HP right off the bat. Toxic Spikes is there to try getting some residual damage off on the enemy to keep the pressure high, Scald is for mild damage and the chance to Burn an enemy if they are a physical attacker and / or aren’t affected by Toxic Spikes. Substitute is there to set up on Pokémon that aren’t quite powerful enough to break the Substitute or if Tentacruel is able to force a switch, this allows for a second layer of Toxic Spikes to be set up more easily.

Blastoise is there as a bulky Rapid Spin(ner) as well as a phazer, Water Pulse is used over Scald due to an increase in power thanks to Blastoise's Mega-evolution. Roar is to force a switch to scout and get rid of potential threats and lastly Toxic is for Pokémon I might be able to do much to or other walls.
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Excadrill (F) @ Air Balloon
Trait: Mold Breaker
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Attacks / 252 Speeds
Jolly Nature (+Speed, -Special Attack)
- Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Iron Head

My main sweeper, once the Sticky Web is up alongside Stealth Rock very little can stop this guy from sweeping through an entire team, Swords Dance is there to double Excadrill’s already massive attack stat which makes sweeping all the easier. Earthquake, Rock Slide and Iron Head are then to offer a decent amount of coverage to try and keep the sweep going. Iron Head is mainly there to deal with those pesky Fairy type Pokémon that outright counter Hydreigon and threaten my team.
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Talonflame (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Gale Wings
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Attacks / 12 Speeds
Adamant Nature (+Attacks, -Special Attack)
- Brave Bird
- Flare Blitz
- Swords Dance
- Roost

Talonflame, although it doesn’t boast the greatest stats it just however boast a powerful Acrobatics that also gains priority due to the ability Gale Wings. Once Talonflame loses the Flying Gem, it carries a base 110 priority move that also gains STAB making it an amazing revenge killer and once the Sticky Web is down, a good sweeper too. Acrobatics as said before is there for a powerful STAB priority, Flare Blitz is another STAB, Swords Dance is there to double Talonfalme’s average attack stat allowing for a sweep to take place and Roost is to try and maintain Talonflame as it will be taking quite a bit of damage due to recoil from Flare Blitz.
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I think no one is rating this because it is such a generic team and you dont even have a mega on your team. maybe lose tenatcruel for mega venasaur
 
Hello.

Pretty interesting team you have here.Couple of issues I see is your team has a slight weakness to Gliscor so to help remedy the bat thing I recommend you replace Tentacruel with Mega Blastoise so you can still keep Rapid Spin,you do lose Toxic Spikes but you can be able to kill Gliscor with STAB Water Pulse which more than makes up for the fact that you lose the Toxic Spikes and Blastoise is a superior spinner than Tentacruel in my opinion.

A few nitpicks,I recommend you try out Life Orb over Expert Belt on Hydreigon so you can hit a bit harder because I feel that with Expert Belt you miss out on those KO's,although I'm not a very big fan of Life Orb I think it fits a poke like hydreigon perfectly.And run Hasty Nature over your current Mild since Hydreigon is a bit too slow of a sweeper so it benefits more from Hasty.

And run Jolly over Adamant on Excadrill so you can outspeed Sand Rush Excadrill which generally run Adamant and you already have Swords Dance so Jolly would benefit more.

Blastoise set:

Blastoise @ Blastoisinite
Ability:Mega Launcher
EV's: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 Def
IV's: 0 Atk
-Water Pulse
-Rapid Spin
-Dark Pulse
-Aura Sphere

Hope my suggestions were helpful or at least thought-provoking.

It was an honor rating your team :D
 
Thank you for the suggestions XenoBlade911, I shall be sure to try these suggestions out!

Any other suggestions that I can try out? I am open to anything as I am still getting back into the competitive scene again and learning the new mechanics of generation six.
 
Why bother using Night Shade on Smeargle when you can use Magic Coat to bounce Taunts back?

Flying Gem isn't released yet, keep that in mind.

I recommend running a Weakness Policy on Aegislash, since it's a free Sword's Dance when hit by a SE move.
 
Thank you Vengeance417, I shall try using Magic Coat on Smeargle over Night Shade and I will also replace the Flying Gem on Talonflame with Leftovers.
 
Your lack of a Mega is a bit strange, looking at your sets/mons Tentacruel looks like it's doing the least. Excradrill's your main sweeper so I wouldn't recommend dropping a move on him for Rapid Spin. As XenoBlade911 said, there's the Mega-toise set or as an alternative I'd recommend Starmie. It can be a status absorber with Natural Cure, spin, and has good type synergy with Hydregion (psychic, ice - for Hydregion's ghost, dark, electric and grass for Starmie), they do share a U-Turn weakness though. It can switch into fire moves for Aegislash, which Hydregion also already does.

Mainly it supports Excradrill with its fighting, fire and water resistances, Talonflame's water weakness, if Smeragle's lives it's also a fighting resistance for him. This is the Offensive Spinner set I'd recommend for Starmie.

Starmie @ Leftovers
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA/ 252 Spd
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Rapid Spin
- Psyshock
- Ice Beam
- Thunder Bolt / Recover

Leftovers as Starmie will have lots of opportunities to switch in to take damage for your other mons. Max speed/Timid nature so it has as many opportunities as possible to spin, as well as Max special attack so Starmie can abuse its coverage moves, particularly its BoltBeam. Natural Cure, again, so Starmie can absorb status. If you wanted to run Recover on it, which it's optimal as it isn't too bulky,I'd dump Thunder Bolt as you're only loosing out on hitting Water types, as Ice Beam hits most Flying types. You loose out on Skarmory coverage though.

Flying Gem isn't available for Talonflame - except on the Pokebank ladder - so probably run Life Orb on it and swap out Acrobatics for Brave Bird.

That's all I've got for now. Possibly try Choice Specs on Hydregion to really break holes in walls.
 
Thank you for the suggestions you offered Lady Valkyrie, I think I will opt for the Mega-Blastoise set as I quite like the idea of having a Mega-evolution on my team, but I do appreciate the Starmie suggestion and will try it out if the Mega-Blastoise doesn't quite cut it. As for the Talonflame though, I will be using those suggestions and replacing Acrobatics with Brave Bird and replacing the Flying Gem with a Life Orb rather that going with the Leftovers I was going to originally use.
 
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I am very new to competitive play. But maybe use a trevanent over aegislash. If their rapid spinner is excadrill and u send in aegislash as ur ghost, he will OHKO u with earthquake. Plus harvest with sitrus berry will keep healing him. Even more a decently powerful ghost or grass attack can take exca out. I no this only qualifies for excadrill, but he is very popular so u should keep this in account
 
I feel like running sticky web with Aegislash is counter productive. Anyways, since Blastoise lacks a reliable form of recovery, I would not recommend using it as a defensive Pokemon.
 
I really dont care for Life Orb on 3 attack + Roost Talonflame. When you uturn you wear yourself down more than the opponent half the time, and the recoil alongside your two STAB moves natural recoil is far too great. I strngly recommend a Sharp Beak or Choice Band in place of the Life Orb. If running Choice Band then I also recommend Will-o-Wisp > Roost on Talonflame. Neither are very useful but Will-o-Wisp I ahve found to be somewhat useful in checking Mawile.
 
Having a dedicated hazards suicide lead (Smeargle) and no way to punish Defog seems a bit odd. To fix this, I suggest changing Hydregion to Bisharp. Thanks to Bisharp's ability, Defiant, he gets a free +2 in attack everytime your opponent uses Defog while he is on the field. As it stands, nothing stops your opponent from Defogging turn one after Smeargle dies. If anything, Defiant Bisharp will at least make your opponent think twice before immediatly using Defog. As well, consider changing Aegi to the standard CRUMBLER set with Shadow Ball as losing Hydreigon means you have a bit too many physical attackers. Having Aegi go mixed is very beneficial to your team. Solid team overall.
 
Hello there. Pretty solid team here. Though as Cassius YT said, having no one to take advantage of Defog with a dedicated hazard lead wastes the hazards your Smeargle sets. Replace Hydreigon with Bisharp as he can take advantage of Defog with Defiant (as CassiusYT said above) and has access to priority, something Hydreigon lacks. Next, run Scarf on your Excadrill. He'll have a hard time sweeping with all the priority and that base 88 Speed. Scarf allows him to get the jump on most pokes that out speed him like +1 Dragonite. The guys here already covered what I wanted to say about Taloflame and Aegislash lol

Hope I helped and good luck with your team!!
 
If you wanna import the team I did you the favour of putting it into copy/paste form here it is:

Smeargle (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Own Tempo
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Spd / 4 Def
Jolly Nature
- Sticky Web
- Stealth Rock
- Magic Coat
- Spore

Aegislash (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Stance Change
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Sacred Sword
- Shadow Sneak
- Swords Dance
- King's Shield

Hydreigon (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 Spd / 4 Atk / 252 SAtk
Mild Nature
- Superpower
- Draco Meteor
- Fire Blast
- Dark Pulse

Blastoise (M) @ Blastoisinite
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 248 HP / 212 SAtk / 48 Def
Modest Nature
- Water Pulse
- Rapid Spin
- Roar
- Toxic

Excadrill (F) @ Air Balloon
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Rock Slide
- Earthquake
- Iron Head
- Swords Dance

Talonflame (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Brave Bird
- Flare Blitz
- Swords Dance
- Roost
 
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