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:sv/Ogerpon-Cornerstone:

[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Knock Off / Play Rough / Trailblaze
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C, with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item Cornerstone Mask, is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Zapdos, Great Tusk, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass-type STAB move, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity. Knock Off hits Gholdengo and wears down Corviknight, Play Rough 2HKOes defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is an option to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarda appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to apply constant offensive pressure to help break down Corviknight, Zapdos, and if running Play Rough, Kommo-o, allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip damage or entry hazards, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, which can remove hazards, and Manaphy, on balance or more offensive-oriented dual screens teams, are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely. Ogerpon-C is also vulnerable to faster offensive Pokemon like Chien-Pao, Roaring Moon, and Barraskewda, so speed control like Choice Scarf Azelf and Roaring Moon are also good teammates for it.

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:sv/Ogerpon-Cornerstone:

[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Play Rough / Trailblaze
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item in Cornerstone Mask is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Great Tusk, Zapdos, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass STAB, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity for Ogerpon-C. Play Rough 2HKOs defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, can be used for defensive Kommo-o and Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is also an option on screens teams to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarda appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to break through Corviknight and Kommo-o Kommo-o with Play Rough and Corviknight, allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip entry hazards it shouldn't be taking scald/toxic from anything really, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, who can also remove hazards, or Manaphy on balance teams or screens on more offensively oriented teams are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Play Rough / Trailblaze
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item in Cornerstone Mask is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Great Tusk, Zapdos, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass STAB, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity for Ogerpon-C. Play Rough can be used for 2HKOs defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is also an option on screens teams to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. trailblaze ogerpon-c can sweep outside of screens as well Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarda appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to break through Corviknight, Zapdos, and, if running Play Rough, Kommo-o allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip or entry hazards, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, who can also remove hazards, or Manaphy on balance teams or screens on more offensively oriented teams are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely.

[SET CREDITS]
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in cases like the kommo-o and great tusk sentence, you don't have to rewrite the entire sentence when you can specifically target the particular information you want to change, we want to keep the original writers voice as much as possible. also, "chip" doesn't just include scald or toxic, it can also include hazards, weak volt switches, or other resisted attacks that, while not threatening you much, still wear you down over time. ideally ogerpon-c isn't taking a scald, but it is still vulnerable to chip from other sources. excellent work overall, though!
 
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:sv/Ogerpon-Cornerstone:

[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Knock Off / Play Rough / Trailblaze Knock Off should be added as well as be first priority due to Gholdengo's prominence and also utility in wearing down checks like Intimidate Corviknight
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item in Cornerstone Mask is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Zapdos, Great Tusk, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass STAB, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity. Add Knock Off comment Play Rough 2HKOs defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is also an option to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarada appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to break through Corviknight, Zapdos, and if running Play Rough, Kommo-o, allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C on its own does not break through Corv and this statement seems to imply it, more it works well in tandem with other physical breakers to overload, pressure and break down Corviknight Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip or entry hazards, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, who can remove hazards, or Manaphy on balance teams or screens on more offensively oriented teams are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely. Maybe worth mentioning pairing well with other speed control/special breakers like Azelf to create opportunities for Ogerpon to break + helping with the plethora of faster mons that threaten Ogerpon as 350 is a decent but not great speed tier.

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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Knock Off / Play Rough / Trailblaze
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C, (AC) with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item in Cornerstone Mask, (AC) is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Zapdos, Great Tusk, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass-type STAB move, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity. Knock Off hits Gholdengo and wears down Corviknight, Play Rough 2HKOs defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is also an option to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarda appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to apply constant offensive pressure to help break down Corviknight, Zapdos, and if running Play Rough, Kommo-o, allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip or entry hazards, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, who which can remove hazards, or and Manaphy, (AC) on balance teams or more offensive-oriented dual screens on more offensively oriented teams, (AC) This section with Manaphy is a bit confusing. I made changed assuming your intention was that Manaphy fit on balance teams and more offensively-oriented dual screens teams. Ignore if I am mistaken. are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely. Ogerpon-C is also vulnerable to faster offensive Pokemon like Chien-Pao, Roaring Moon, and Barraskewda, so speed control like Choice Scarf Azelf or and Roaring Moon are also good teammates for it.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Ivy Cudgel
move 3: Power Whip / Horn Leech
move 4: Knock Off / Play Rough / Trailblaze
item: Cornerstone Mask
ability: Rocky Payload
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-C, with the combination of Swords Dance + Ivy Cudgel that is further boosted by Rocky Payload and its signature item Cornerstone Mask, is a devastating physical wallbreaker that is able to threaten common physical walls in Corviknight, Zapdos, Great Tusk, and defensive Quaquaval. Power Whip is a more powerful Grass-type STAB move, while Horn Leech is more reliable and provides better longevity. Knock Off hits Gholdengo and wears down Corviknight, Play Rough 2HKOs 2HKOes defensive Kommo-o and chips Sap Sipper Great Tusk, while Trailblaze is an option to make Ogerpon-C a potential sweeping threat. Fast physical attackers like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Meowscarda appreciate Ogerpon-C being able to apply constant offensive pressure to help break down Corviknight, Zapdos, and if running Play Rough, Kommo-o, allowing them to be more efficient cleaners. Ogerpon-C has a poor defensive typing and can be vulnerable to chip damage or entry hazards, thus slow pivots like Corviknight, which can remove hazards, and Manaphy, on balance or more offensive-oriented dual screens teams, are recommended so that Ogerpon-C can come in safely. Ogerpon-C is also vulnerable to faster offensive Pokemon like Chien-Pao, Roaring Moon, and Barraskewda, so speed control like Choice Scarf Azelf and Roaring Moon are also good teammates for it.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/kinetic1000.552227/
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Grammar checked by:
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