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[SET]
Offensive (Azelf) @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
Tera Type: Fairy / Fire
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Psychic / Mystical Power
- Draining Kiss / Dazzling Gleam
- Flamethrower / Shadow Ball
- Nasty Plot / Thunderbolt

[SET COMMENTS]
Azelf's good Special Attack and Speed make it a niche fast special attacker. Mystical Power can let Azelf snowball and punish Pokemon sacrifices, but Psychic offers more immediate power for wallbreaking and securing KOes so Azelf doesn't take retaliatory hits. For example, Psychic notably OHKOes uninvested Slither Wing. Draining Kiss keeps Azelf healthy while offsetting the recoil damage from Life Orb. However, Dazzling Gleam is more immediately powerful against Cyclizar and threatening Dark-types like Krookodile, and it doesn't make Azelf as reliant on Terastallization. Flamethrower dispatches Steel-types like Bisharp, Registeel, and Magnezone that could otherwise wall Azelf. Shadow Ball is an alternative to Flamethrower that nails Armarouge and other Psychic-types like Slowbro and Reuniclus. Azelf can capitalize on switches it forces against Galarian Weezing, Slither Wing, and Choice Scarf users like Galarian Zapdos locked into not very effective moves, setting up Nasty Plot and tearing through defensive cores. At +2, Life Orb Azelf can OHKO Registeel with Flamethrower, Slowbro with Shadow Ball, and Hippowdon with Psychic. Since Azelf's poor bulk limits its actual opportunities to set up, Thunderbolt is a decent alternative that nails Empoleon and other Water-types like Slowbro, Volcanion, and Suicune. Expert Belt emphasizes Azelf's excellent offensive coverage against defensive staples like Galarian Weezing, Jirachi, and Cyclizar, and it gives Azelf enough power to 2HKO Fezandipiti after the latter has gotten a Calm Mind boost. Life Orb improves Azelf's damage output against neutral targets like Mamoswine, secures 2HKOes against Hippowdon and Rhyperior, and powers up coverage moves to better threaten Hisuian Goodra. Tera Fairy and Tera Fire both provide Azelf a helpful resistance to Slither Wing's First Impression and boost one of its coverage moves. Tera Fairy helps against Sucker Punch users like Bisharp, Knock Off users like Cyclizar, and U-turn users like Mienshao, and, with the boost from Tera Fairy, Life Orb Dazzling Gleam 2HKOes Umbreon. Tera Fire gives Azelf a neat resistance to Mamoswine's Ice Shard while carrying over Tera Fairy's Bug resistance to deal with First Impression and U-turn, and it powers up Flamethrower to melt Hisuian Goodra and Registeel.

Azelf primarily fits on fast-paced offensive teams that keep up a fast tempo with pivots like Galarian Zapdos, Fezandipiti, and Magnezone. Azelf's poor bulk means it appreciates these pivots bringing it in safely. Physical wallbreakers like Krookodile, Mamoswine, and Bisharp threaten special walls like Cyclizar and Empoleon, while Azelf can overwhelm physical walls like Hippowdon, Galarian Weezing, and Chesnaught. Similarly, Mimikyu can deal with revenge killers like Cyclizar and Slither Wing, while Azelf pressures problematic Poison-types like Galarian Weezing and Fezandipiti. Galarian Zapdos checks Dark-types like Krookodile and Bisharp and pressures Steel-types like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for Azelf, and Azelf's frailty is mitigated by the free switches Galarian Zapdos provides with U-turn. Moxie sweepers like Salamence, Gyarados, and Choice Scarf Krookodile can more easily get the ball rolling against teams Azelf has weakened. Special attacking cleaners like Oricorio-E, Fezandipiti, and Basculegion-F can more easily sweep thanks to the holes Azelf makes in special walls like Cyclizar and Jirachi during the mid-game. Entry hazard removal from Maushold, Cyclizar, and Empoleon helps Azelf remain healthy enough to stay out of range of revenge killers like Noivern and opposing Cyclizar. Azelf enjoys hazards wearing its foes down, opening it up to OHKO Magnezone with Flamethrower after one layer of Spikes, so hazard setters like Gligar, Chesnaught, and Klefki can enable Azelf. Azelf's frailty leaves it easily revenge killed, so bulky Pokemon that can switch into revenge killers are a big help. (AP) Slowbro and Galarian Weezing handle Galarian Zapdos; Fezandipiti and Hippowdon both take on Slither Wing, the latter of which can also deal with Bisharp; and Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra manage specially offensive revenge killers like Hisuian Zoroark and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

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Offensive (Azelf) @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
Tera Type: Fairy / Fire
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Psychic / Mystical Power
- Draining Kiss / Dazzling Gleam
- Flamethrower / Shadow Ball
- Nasty Plot / Thunderbolt

Azelf's good Special Attack and Speed make it a niche fast special attacker. Mystical Power can let Azelf snowball and punish sacks, but Psychic reliably OHKOes uninvested Slither Wing. this is a good calc info but you have to say more than that for Psychic (more power, more breaking potential then calcs) Draining Kiss synergizes with Tera Fairy and keep that for later keeps Azelf healthier while offsetting the recoil damage of the Life Orb. However, Dazzling Gleam is more immediately powerful against threatening Dark-types like Krookodile, doesn't make Azelf as reliant on Terastallization, and can 2HKO Umbreon with life Orb and the boost from Tera Fairy. add this to the Tera section below and give other calcs here Flamethrower synergizes with Tera Fire and dispatches Steel-types like Bisharp, Registeel, and Magnezone which could otherwise wall Azelf. Shadow Ball is an alternative to Flamethrower that nails Armarouge, and the extra coverage helps against Ghost-weak Pokemon like Mimikyu. Shadow Ball is primarily for the bulky Psychic-types of the tier (Slowbro, Reuniclus...) so add that Azelf can capitalize on switches it forces against weakened Pokemon and Choice Scarf users like Galarian Zapdos locked into not very effective moves to set up Nasty Plot and tear through defensive cores. some +2 calcs? Since Azelf's poor bulk limits its actual opportunities to set up, Thunderbolt is a decent alternative that nails Empoleon and other Water-types like Slowbro, Volcanion, and Suicune. talk about the items Tera Fairy and Tera Fire both provide Azelf a helpful resistance to Slither Wing's First Impression and boost one of its coverage moves. Tera Fairy helps against Sucker Punch users like Bisharp and Dragon-types like Cyclizar, while Tera Fire gives a neat resistance to Mamoswine's Ice Shard. make two sentences here and add the info I removed above

Azelf primarily fits on fast-paced offensive teams that keep up a fast tempo. Bisharp threatens special walls like Cyclizar and Empoleon, while Azelf can overwhelm physical walls like Hippowdon and Chesnaught. Similarly, Mimikyu can deal with revenge killers like Cyclizar and Slither Wing, while Azelf pressures problematic Poison-types like Galarian Weezing and Fezandipiti. Galarian Zapdos checks Dark-types like Krookodile and Bisharp and pressures Steel-types like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for Azelf, and Azelf's frailty is mitigated by the free switches Galarian Zapdos provides with U-turn. Moxie sweepers like Salamence, Gyarados, and Choice Scarf Krookodile can more easily get the ball rolling against teams Azelf has weakened, and Azelf tends to draw in special walls like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for its physically offensive teammates to pressure.
mention special cleaners which can benefit from Azelf weakening every special wall during the midgame
mention hazard support
mention bulky Pokemon that can switch in on the Pokemon who want to revenge kill Azelf


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A few things to add but overall pretty good!
qc 1/2 done
 
Offensive (Azelf) @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
Tera Type: Fairy / Fire
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Psychic / Mystical Power
- Draining Kiss / Dazzling Gleam
- Flamethrower / Shadow Ball
- Nasty Plot / Thunderbolt

Azelf's good Special Attack and Speed make it a niche fast special attacker. Mystical Power can let Azelf snowball and punish sacks, but Psychic offers more immediate power for wallbreaking and securing KOes so Azelf doesn't take retaliatory hits. For example, Psychic notably OHKOes uninvested Slither Wing. Draining Kiss keeps Azelf healthier while offsetting the recoil damage from Life Orb. However, Dazzling Gleam is more immediately powerful against threatening Dark-types like Krookodile also cyclizar, and doesn't make Azelf as reliant on Terastallization. Flamethrower dispatches Steel-types like Bisharp, Registeel, and Magnezone which could otherwise wall Azelf. Shadow Ball is an alternative to Flamethrower that nails Armarouge and other Psychic-types like Slowbro and Reuniclus. Azelf can capitalize on switches it forces against weakened Pokemon rather than weakened pokemon, you can say it forces out pokemon it threatens like slither wing and gweezing since a weakened pokemon might not necessarily switch out and Choice Scarf users like Galarian Zapdos locked into not very effective moves to set up Nasty Plot and tear through defensive cores. At +2, Life Orb Azelf can OHKO Registeel with Flamethrower, Slowbro with Shadow Ball, and Hippowdon with Psychic. Since Azelf's poor bulk limits its actual opportunities to set up, Thunderbolt is a decent alternative that nails Empoleon and other Water-types like Slowbro, Volcanion, and Suicune. EXPERT BELT VS LIFE ORB fix (lo is better against neutral targets, notably guaranteed 2hkoing hippo and rhyp and helping against hoodra} Tera Fairy and Tera Fire both provide Azelf a helpful resistance to Slither Wing's First Impression and boost one of its coverage moves. Tera Fairy helps against Sucker Punch also mention knock and uturn here users like Bisharp and Dragon-types like Cyclizar, and Dazzling Gleam 2HKOes Umbreon with Life Orb and the boost from Tera Fairy. Tera Fire gives Azelf a neat resistance to Mamoswine's Ice Shard while carrying over Tera Fairy's Bug resistance to deal with First Impression and U-turn, and it also powers up Flamethrower to melt through Hisuian Goodra and Registeel.

Azelf primarily fits on fast-paced offensive teams that keep up a fast tempo "fast tempo" is pretty vague, you can expand on this by talking about pivots like gapdos, fez, magnezone etc that can get it in safely since azelf hates taking hits. briefly mention that it appreciates physical wallbreaking teammates here since the following pokemon you mention have that same role Bisharp threatens special walls like Cyclizar and Empoleon, while Azelf can overwhelm physical walls like Hippowdon and Chesnaught. Similarly, Mimikyu can deal with revenge killers like Cyclizar and Slither Wing, while Azelf pressures problematic Poison-types like Galarian Weezing and Fezandipiti. Galarian Zapdos checks Dark-types like Krookodile and Bisharp and pressures Steel-types like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for Azelf, and Azelf's frailty is mitigated by the free switches Galarian Zapdos provides with U-turn. Moxie sweepers like Salamence, Gyarados, and Choice Scarf Krookodile can more easily get the ball rolling against teams Azelf has weakened, and Azelf tends to draw in special walls like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for its physically offensive teammates to pressure this is implied already in the previous sentences and it doesnt only apply for the moxie sweepers - if you want, you can mention this in the "appreciates phys wallbreakers" line instead. Special cleaners like Oricorio-E, Fezandipiti, and Basculegion-F can more easily sweep thanks to the holes Azelf makes in special walls examples during the mid-game. Entry hazard support from Maushold, Cyclizar, and Empoleon helps Azelf remain healthy enough to stay out of revenge killers like Noivern and opposing Cyclizar. azelf likes its own entry hazards (add setter examples) to enable it to wallbreak and clean, notably ohkoing magnezone with flamethrower after 1 layer of spikes Azelf's frailty leaves it easily revenge killed, so bulky Pokemon that can switch in on revenge killers are a big help; Slowbro and Galarian Weezing handle Galarian Zapdos; Fezandipiti and Hippowdon both take on Slither Wing, and the latter can deal with Bisharp; Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra manage specially offenisve revenge killers like Hisuian Zoroark and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

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Great work, implement and ready for GP

(Also you should ideally send a message saying "ready for qc 2" when you're done implementing the first one)
 
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[SET]

Offensive (Azelf) @ Expert Belt / Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
Tera Type: Fairy / Fire
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Psychic / Mystical Power
- Draining Kiss / Dazzling Gleam
- Flamethrower / Shadow Ball
- Nasty Plot / Thunderbolt

[SET COMMENTS]
Azelf's good Special Attack and Speed make it a niche fast special attacker. Mystical Power can let Azelf snowball and punish sacks Pokemon sacrifices, but Psychic offers more immediate power for wallbreaking and securing KOes so Azelf doesn't take retaliatory hits. For example, Psychic notably OHKOes uninvested Slither Wing. Draining Kiss keeps Azelf healthier healthy while offsetting the recoil damage from Life Orb. However, Dazzling Gleam is more immediately powerful against Cyclizar and threatening Dark-types like Krookodile, and it doesn't make Azelf as reliant on Terastallization. Flamethrower dispatches Steel-types like Bisharp, Registeel, and Magnezone which that could otherwise wall Azelf. Shadow Ball is an alternative to Flamethrower that nails Armarouge and other Psychic-types like Slowbro and Reuniclus. Azelf can capitalize on switches it forces against Galarian Weezing, Slither Wing, and Choice Scarf users like Galarian Zapdos locked into not very effective moves, setting up Nasty Plot and tearing through defensive cores. At +2, Life Orb Azelf can OHKO Registeel with Flamethrower, Slowbro with Shadow Ball, and Hippowdon with Psychic. Since Azelf's poor bulk limits its actual opportunities to set up, Thunderbolt is a decent alternative that nails Empoleon and other Water-types like Slowbro, Volcanion, and Suicune. Expert Belt emphasizes Azelf's excellent offensive coverage against defensive staples like Galarian Weezing, Jirachi, and Cyclizar, and it gives Azelf enough power to 2HKO Fezandipiti after the latter has gotten a Calm Mind boost. (Consulted with author in Discord DMs.) Life Orb improves Azelf's damage output against neutral targets like Mamoswine, secures 2HKOes against Hippowdon and Rhyperior, and helps against powers up coverage moves to better threaten Hisuian Goodra. (Consulted with author in Discord DMs.) Tera Fairy and Tera Fire both provide Azelf a helpful resistance to Slither Wing's First Impression and boost one of its coverage moves. Tera Fairy helps against Sucker Punch users like Bisharp, Knock Off users like Cyclizar, and U-turn users like Mienshao. (RP) Dazzling Gleam 2HKOes Umbreon with, (AC) and, with the boost from Tera Fairy, (AC) Life Orb and the boost from Tera Fairy Dazzling Gleam 2HKOes Umbreon. Tera Fire gives Azelf a neat resistance to Mamoswine's Ice Shard while carrying over Tera Fairy's Bug resistance to deal with First Impression and U-turn, and it also powers up Flamethrower to melt through Hisuian Goodra and Registeel.

Azelf primarily fits on fast-paced offensive teams that keep up a fast tempo with pivots like Galarian Zapdos, Fezandipiti, and Magnezone. Azelf's poor bulk means it appreciates these pivots bringing it in safely. Physical wallbreakers like Krookodile, Mamoswine, and Bisharp threaten special walls like Cyclizar and Empoleon, while Azelf can overwhelm physical walls like Hippowdon, Galarian Weezing, and Chesnaught. Similarly, Mimikyu can deal with revenge killers like Cyclizar and Slither Wing, while Azelf pressures problematic Poison-types like Galarian Weezing and Fezandipiti. Galarian Zapdos checks Dark-types like Krookodile and Bisharp and pressures Steel-types like Hisuian Goodra and Empoleon for Azelf, and Azelf's frailty is mitigated by the free switches Galarian Zapdos provides with U-turn. Moxie sweepers like Salamence, Gyarados, and Choice Scarf Krookodile can more easily get the ball rolling against teams Azelf has weakened. Special attacking cleaners like Oricorio-E, Fezandipiti, and Basculegion-F can more easily sweep thanks to the holes Azelf makes in special walls like Cyclizar and Jirachi during the mid-game. Entry hazard support removal (Consulted with author in Discord DMs.) from Maushold, Cyclizar, and Empoleon helps Azelf remain healthy enough to stay out of range of revenge killers like Noivern and opposing Cyclizar. Azelf enjoys hazards wearing its foes down, opening it up to OHKO Magnezone with Flamethrower after one layer of Spikes, so hazard setters like Gligar, Chesnaught, and Klefki can enable Azelf. Azelf's frailty leaves it easily revenge killed, so bulky Pokemon that can switch in on into revenge killers are a big help; (RSC). (AP) Slowbro and Galarian Weezing handle Galarian Zapdos; Fezandipiti and Hippowdon both take on Slither Wing, and the latter of which can also deal with Bisharp; and Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra manage specially offenisve offensive revenge killers like Hisuian Zoroark and Choice Scarf Basculegion-F.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/missangelic.452572/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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