new to competitive pokemon would you give advice and rate my team please?

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I've been playing showdown for about a month and i am still very new at this. and i would like some help because i keep getting called " gay " " (BAN ME PLEASE) " or " retarded ". and i would love to show them all wrong. i don't know if its just the community but everyone on it seems to be a jerk. hopefully smogon is better.

anyway this is the team i have so far

first is charizard x
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Charizard (M) @ Charizardite X
Ability: Blaze
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Flare Blitz
- Dragon Claw
- Steel Wing
- Dragon Dance

i love it when dragon dance then dragon claw sweeps a team, but its mostly for either dragon claw stab or dragon dance sweep. the steel wing is to hit a fairy but its either klefki or azumarill i come across and it seems to do little to nothing to them. but in actual game he usualy gets 1 hit ko by some random move even before i mega evolve that is priority, you would think jolly and stupid high speed would make it faster.
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next is the refrigerator of doom
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Rotom-Frost @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 56 HP / 100 Def / 252 SAtk / 100 SDef
Modest Nature
- Blizzard
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Volt Switch

the buff Satk refrigerator who just tanks hits like a boss, also why is this thing stupid fast without any bonuses. its gone first ageist almost everything i fought so far. this is also my ice stab go to guy, but hidden power fire is when charizard dies like he usually does from random 1 hit kos that arnt even super effective.

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stabby stabby
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Aegislash (F) @ Spooky Plate
Ability: Stance Change
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 16 HP / 252 Atk / 120 Def / 120 SDef
Brave Nature
- King's Shield
- Swords Dance
- Sacred Sword
- Shadow Sneak

aegislash is both stupidly tanky, and stupidly powerful. do i even need to say any more im pretty sure you all know this guy by heart.

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merry chrsitmas btw
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Trevenant (M) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Harvest
EVs: 36 HP / 192 Def / 144 SDef / 136 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Toxic
- Leech Seed
- Substitute
- Shadow Claw

again, just like agislash im sure you seen this guy before too. the reason toxic over curse is because i like to keep mine at healthy and toxic does damage over time that it doesn't really matter, does it? also spd is to outspeed other trevenant and it worked out really well that i have killed other ones in 1 hit :D

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im not 100% sure what to do with this guy
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Drapion @ Black Sludge
Ability: Battle Armor
EVs: 4 Atk / 52 Def / 200 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 Def
- Poison Jab
- Crunch
- Earthquake
- Taunt

this guy is a hit and miss on the team, he is tanky enough to survive alot and fast enough to usually go first. but at the same time he doesn't do much else OTHER then that. other then fairy and psy removal and bug people trying to batton pass ( witch seems to be on the rise )


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also i fixed the iv's to go back to 31. i dont know why it keeps doing that. is that a bug?

anyway


belly drum of doooooom
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Azumarill (F) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Aqua Jet
- Play Rough
- Belly Drum
- Waterfall


on paper this should wreck face.. but for some reason it is really slow ._. and even belly drum aqua jet doesn't do that much. and i still haven't sweeped a team yet with this. i just dont know what to do. should i get a new water type?

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anyway this is my team. anything that would help would be nice. but please. don't be an ass
 
Few quick things:

Charizard: neutral Flare Blitz does more then super effective Steel Wing, so make Steel Wing Earthquake.

Rotom, Aegislash, and Trevenant: Make it 252 HP 252 (other stat) because you end up with less bulk otherwise

Trevenant only: lol Jolly. Make it fully defensive

Scrap Drapion.

I have no idea why you have max Speed and Jolly on Azumarill but that just doesn't work. Make it max HP max Attack Adamant.
 
Hello.
Your descriptions are too short to fit the RMT rules requirements.
I encourage you to PM me an updated version of this team with beefed up descriptions, and since you're new, to join the Mentor Program. I'll be unlocking this thread after that.

Have a nice day.
 
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