My First Team!

[stewie4gov]

ninetales - DW timid 252 HP / 92 SpD / 164 Spe
HOLD ITEM - leftovers
will-o-wisp
substitute
flamethrower
solarbeam

typhlosion - blaze timid 252 SpA / 36 SpD / 220 Spe
HOLD ITEM - life orb
sunny day
eruption
solarbeam
hidden power rock

espeon - DW timid 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
HOLD ITEM - leftovers
psychic
shadow ball
hidden power fighting
morning sun

drapion - battle armor careful 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
HOLD ITEM - leftovers
toxic spikes
crunch
earthquake
whirlwind

flygon - levitate jolly 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
HOLD ITEM - life orb
earthquake
crunch
u-turn
stone edge

electivire - motor drive jolly 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
HOLD ITEM - expert belt
wild charge
ice punch
cross chop
earthquake

So basically the strategy goes like this: i either lead with ninetales or drapion. If drapion leads i place toxic spikes twice then most likely use whirlwind to drag a pokemon onto the spikes.
If ninetales leads, it will cast drought and then i will will-o-wisp the enemy. its possible that i will sub then use some drought boosted flamethrower and/or solarbeam.
Drought is important for my typhlosion and it makes his eruption super powerful and well as allows him to use solarbeam right off the bat. he also has sunny day just in case the weather condition changes.
Espeon has morning sun because it recovers 2/3 max hp in sunny weather, this combined with the small boost from leftovers, it think, will keep espeon in the battle longer

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.