My first team, looking for advice! (PEAK 1400 ELO)

Alright, so I have a team that I created. My peak with it so far is around 1400 and I would like some advice. I am quite new to pokemon showdown and my account isn't even 1 week old yet! But I created a team and I'd like to share it. Suggestions on who to change or edit is much appreciated, constructive critiscm is also fine. So here is my team , also to the admin who checks out threads and locks them. I like your shuckle profile picture lol




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Pretty much the lead who sets up sticky webs and then attacks, Bug buzz and Thunder for STAB and infestation to trap opponents.
Not much to say about it, although it has gotten like 2 kills off a team before. Pretty deadly lead if I do say so myself.





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Aegislash, overall pretty good. I might replace Shadow Claw with Shadow Sneak since he is so slow. However with weakness policy, it's insanely strong. Using king's shield to lower their attack and then take a hit before transforming is really powerful. It wipes out teams before dying to the slowness. Just be sure to time the hits right.




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Inteleon is a god dam monster after getting 1 focus energy up, not only does the Sniper ability increase damage of a critical hit by 1.5. Critical hits also ignore stat boost meaning your +6 Sp defense boost aren't gonna do crap. Ice beam for coverage on grass types, surf is better then snipe shot. More damage and the extra critical rate on snipe shot doesn't matter, every hit is a critical with 1 focus energy.
Shadow ball for coverage on ghost/psychic types.



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This is the one I'm looking to replace, it's alright defense and has decent coverage but I already have a ghost type and electric immunity isn't the most needed. But palossand does his job fairly well, bulky enough to take a hit and kills some enemies. Giga Drain for healing, Earth Power and Shadow Ball for STAB and psychic is just coverage I guess, didn't know what to put the move as.




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Weavile is another beast, You could either slap a heavy duty boots or a focus sash on. Swords dance helps a ton although it can sweep teams even without it. This is more of a mid-game sweeper to kill off the remaining with ice shard. Brick break helps with ice types and rock types. Shadow Claw is good too, now I don't have a dark type move unfortunately but I think this set still works pretty well.


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Last but not least, we have the ace of the team. Noivern is EXTREMELY underrated as i have only seen him used once, Boomburst fits well with throat spray as well as being a 140 base power attack! Absolutely insane! Once he gets the 1.5 special attack boost from throat spray, he can demolish enemies that are slower then him. Oh an ice type? Just use heat wave! Another dragon type? Use dragon pulse and blast them into pieces! Hurricane is for coverage and STAB. Infiltrator blast right through the defenses trying to stall time.

That's about it, I am sorry if the images are too big. I am quite new to this website and Pokemon Showdown as a whole, ill be reading alot of the replies and comments! Anyone who post suggestions, thanks so much! I'll try alot of them out. Also golisopod is my favorite bug type pokemon lol

An edit: I actually replaced Palossand with the underrated Lanturn pokemon since alot of my team is weak to electric. Still up for suggestions though!
 
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Hey welcome to smogon
U look pretty new to competitive pokemon and teambuilding can be hard when starting out,so congrats on putting a team together but the pokemons and the sets hinders the team alot from succeding in the metagame.So i will give some resources to speed up the process to learn the metagame,and with these resources u will be able to learn the meta and be able to make good teams that are viable in the metagame.

Getting started
https://www.smogon.com/articles/getting-started

this article highlights basic things in competitive mons that every beginner should look and read.

Viability Ranking
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threa...king-thread-see-post-1720-on-page-69.3674058/

This is the viability rankings list for SS OU. It's a list of common Pokemon in the meta, ranked by how dominant and effective they are in the tier at the time, compared to their drawbackss, while the further down you go, the more drawbacks come with using the Pokemon. you should look to this list to understand which Pokemon are most relevant in the tier at the time, and what to prepare for as you build.

Smog Dex
https://www.smogon.com/dex/ss/pokemon/

This is where u can find analyisis of pokemon of what they do,their sets and evs etc.this is great place for u to know what a specific pokemon does.

Sample teams
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/ss-ou-sample-teams-crown-tundra.3672556/

This the place where u can find teams to use in a metagame generally these teams are made by experienced players who know alot about the metagame.So this is great place for u to use the teams and learn a tier.


And for the team i would just suggest removing galvantula for shuckle as shuckle provides rocks which can be usefull for breaking down teams next i would remove noivern for zapdos galar as zapdos galar is able to punish the most common way of removing hazards that being defog with its defiant ability which allows it to get +2 in atk which can obsenly strong and can ko half the metagame next i would just reove pallosand for landorus as landorus is an overall better pokemon than pallosand as its a great earthquake immuniy and electric immunity it also can sweep with swords dance aswell and next wold just reove inteleon for azumarill as azu has decent bulk and is able to sweep with belly drum and with webs lowering the speed of the oppoisng team then azu can be huge pain for the opponent to handle.I hope u enjoy the metagame and have a great day.(tottaly didnt steal from azure nights)
 
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Hey welcome to smogon
U look pretty new to competitive pokemon and teambuilding can be hard when starting out,so congrats on putting a team together but the pokemons and the sets hinders the team alot from succeding in the metagame.So i will give some resources to speed up the process to learn the metagame,and with these resources u will be able to learn the meta and be able to make good teams that are viable in the metagame.

Getting started
https://www.smogon.com/articles/getting-started

this article highlights basic things in competitive mons that every beginner should look and read.

Viability Ranking
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threa...king-thread-see-post-1720-on-page-69.3674058/

This is the viability rankings list for SS OU. It's a list of common Pokemon in the meta, ranked by how dominant and effective they are in the tier at the time, compared to their drawbackss, while the further down you go, the more drawbacks come with using the Pokemon. you should look to this list to understand which Pokemon are most relevant in the tier at the time, and what to prepare for as you build.

Smog Dex
https://www.smogon.com/dex/ss/pokemon/

This is where u can find analyisis of pokemon of what they do,their sets and evs etc.this is great place for u to know what a specific pokemon does.

Sample teams
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/ss-ou-sample-teams-crown-tundra.3672556/

This the place where u can find teams to use in a metagame generally these teams are made by experienced players who know alot about the metagame.So this is great place for u to use the teams and learn a tier.


And for the team i would just suggest removing galvantula for shuckle as shuckle provides rocks which can be usefull for breaking down teams next i would remove noivern for zapdos galar as zapdos galar is able to punish the most common way of removing hazards that being defog with its defiant ability which allows it to get +2 in atk which can obsenly strong and can ko half the metagame next i would just reove pallosand for landorus as landorus is an overall better pokemon than pallosand as its a great earthquake immuniy and electric immunity it also can sweep with swords dance aswell and next wold just reove inteleon for azumarill as azu has decent bulk and is able to sweep with belly drum and with webs lowering the speed of the oppoisng team then azu can be huge pain for the opponent to handle.I hope u enjoy the metagame and have a great day.(tottaly didnt steal from azure nights)

Thanks so much, I will read the smogon beginner tips and change my team!
 
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