AAA My beloved (Unaware Scream Tail) [GP 1/1] [Done]

[Hiusi guy]

[SET]
Unaware (Scream Tail) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
Bold Nature
- Dazzling Gleam
- Wish
- Protect
- Calm Mind / Thunder Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail uses its good bulk and great typing to be a superb Unaware wall, taking hits from boosted attackers such as Dragonite, Great Tusk, and Tail Glow Manaphy. It can also act as a Wish passer for teammates without reliable healing such as Roaring Moon, non-Regenerator Great Tusk, and Primarina. Calm Mind can be used in order to take on special threats like Zapdos and Deoxys-S, while Thunder Wave is an option to cripple switch-ins like Iron Moth, Gholdengo, and Ceruledge. Offensive Pokemon like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Chien-Pao appreciate Scream Tail being able to take on Pokemon like Iron Hands, Great Tusk, and Dragonite while also providing them with healing. Scream Tail struggles with Ghost-types such as Gholdengo, Gengar, and Ceruledge, so having checks to them like Manaphy, Mandibuzz, and Roaring Moon can help.Teammates like Corviknight and Great Tusk can aid Scream Tail by removing the entry hazards that can wear it down. Finally, Scream Tail appreciates the presence of defensive checks to Chien-Pao, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Boulder such as Manaphy, Mandibuzz, and Corviknight, as it struggles to take them on repeatedly.

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[Hiusi guy]

I wanna put the gouging fire match up here somewhere but it's being suspected rn so Idk if I should put it

 

[Slither Wing]

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Pixilate clears

[SET]
Unaware (Scream Tail) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe
Bold Nature
- Dazzling Gleam
- Wish
- Protect
- Calm Mind / Thunder Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail uses its good bulk and great typing to be a superb Unaware wall, (AC) taking hits from boosted attackers such as Chien-Pao Dragonite, Great Tusk, and Tail Glow Manaphy. As well as being able to set-up Calm Minds against these threats to act as a wincon. You mention this later, cutting down repetition It can also act as a Wish passer to provide healing to teammates without reliable healing such as Roaring Moon, Non-Regenerator Great Tusk, and Manaphy Primarina. Scream Tail can use Calm Mind to be tougher for special threats Calm Mind can be used in order to take on special threats like Walking Wake Zapdos and Enamorus-T Deoxys-S to take it down. Scream Tail can also use Thunder Wave as a way to cripple switch-ins like Iron Moth and Ceruledge. You forgot to mention EV Spread Offensive Pokemon like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Chien-Pao appreciate the presence of Scream Tail being able to take on Pokemon like Latios, Great Tusk, and Dragonite while also providing them with healing. Scream Tail does struggle with Ghost-types such as Gholdengo, Gengar, and Ceruledge so having checks like Manaphy, Mandibuzz, or Roaring Moon can help. Scream Tail also has trouble dealing with entry hazards so having teammates to remove them like Corviknight and Great Tusk can help it. Also mention that Scream Tail is unable to take on stronger threats such as Iron Boulder, Ogerpon and Chien-Pao, which necessitates a secondary physical wall

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QC 1/2

 

[Hiusi guy]

You forgot to mention EV Spread

Tbh I'm not sure what the evs are for seeing how even the previous analysis doesn't say what they do . Iirc Isaiah said at some point the evs were to outspeed volcan who isn't as prominent anymore so it could prolly be changed, up to you guys

 

[Gimmicky]

deo-d who??

[SET]
Unaware (Scream Tail) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe make this max HP 4 speed, the only relevant thing that 20 speed outpaces is slither (and dnite, i guess, but thats just espeeding anyway)
Bold Nature
- Dazzling Gleam
- Wish
- Protect
- Calm Mind / Thunder Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail uses its good bulk and great typing nitpicking, but i wouldn't call its typing great, only two resists and three weaknesses to be a superb Unaware wall, taking hits from boosted attackers such as Dragonite, Great Tusk, and Tail Glow Manaphy. It can also act as a Wish passer to provide healing to teammates without reliable healing such as Roaring Moon, Non-Regenerator Great Tusk, and Primarina. Calm Mind can be used in order to take on special threats like Zapdos and Deoxys-S. Scream Tail can also use, while Thunder Wave as a way is an option to cripple switch-ins like Iron Moth, Gholdengo, and Ceruledge. Offensive Pokemon like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Chien-Pao appreciate the presence of Scream Tail being able to take on Pokemon like Latios Iron Hands Tinted Latios can win 1v1 with luster purge drops, scream tail isn't a reliable answer, Great Tusk, and Dragonite while also providing them with healing. Scream Tail does struggle with Ghost-types such as Gholdengo, Gengar, and Ceruledge, [ac] so having checks like Manaphy, Mandibuzz, or Roaring Moon can help. Scream Tail also has trouble dealing with can be worn down by entry hazards so having teammates to remove them like Corviknight and Great Tusk can help it. Finally, Scream Tail appreciates the presence of defensive checks like Manaphy, Mandibuzz, and Corviknight to wallbreakers like Chien-Pao, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Boulder this reads pretty clunky; say "checks to [wallbreakers] such as [checks] as it struggles to take them on repeatedly.

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QC 2/2!

 

[Hiusi guy]

GP Team gl

 

[Rose]

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GP Check

[SET]
Unaware (Scream Tail) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spe
Bold Nature
- Dazzling Gleam
- Wish
- Protect
- Calm Mind / Thunder Wave

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail uses its good bulk and great typing to be a superb Unaware wall, taking hits from boosted attackers such as Dragonite, Great Tusk, and Tail Glow Manaphy. It can also act as a Wish passer to provide healing to for teammates without reliable healing such as Roaring Moon, Non-Regenerator non-Regenerator Great Tusk, and Primarina. Calm Mind can be used in order to take on special threats like Zapdos and Deoxys-S, while Thunder Wave is an option to cripple switch-ins like Iron Moth, Gholdengo, and Ceruledge. Offensive Pokemon like Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Chien-Pao appreciate the presence of Scream Tail being able to take on Pokemon like Iron Hands, Great Tusk, and Dragonite while also providing them with healing. Scream Tail does struggle struggles with Ghost-types such as Gholdengo, Gengar, and Ceruledge, so having checks to them like Manaphy, Mandibuzz, or and Roaring Moon can help. Scream Tail can be worn down by entry hazards so having teammates to remove them like Corviknight and Great Tusk can help it. Teammates like Corviknight and Great Tusk can aid Scream Tail by removing the entry hazards that can wear it down. (to avoid using the same sentence structure twice in a row) Finally, Scream Tail appreciates the presence of defensive checks to Chien-Pao, Ogerpon-W, and Iron Boulder such as Manaphy, Mandibuzz, and Corviknight, (comma) as it struggles to take them on repeatedly.

[SET CREDITS]
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Grammar checked by:
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1/1 GP Team done

 

[Hiusi guy]

Implemented, thanks