Ubers Mewtwo

[Neko]

Mewtwo @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Nasty Plot
- Psystrike
- Fire Blast
- Ice Beam

This genetically engineered feline differentiates itself from other special wallbreakers by breaking down balance teams with its above average Speed, sheer power, and coverage! Psystrike destroys Eternatus and obliterates special walls like Blissey. Fire Blast and Ice Beam allow Mewtwo to break down its checks in Steel-types, such as Necrozma-DM and Ferrothorn, and Yveltal, the most common Psychic-type check. Mewtwo greatly synergizes with Calyrex-S, as they quickly break down Yveltal and opposing defensive cores generally until one of them can sweep late-game. Choice Scarf Galarian Darmanitan is a great pivot that lures in Necrozma-DM and gets Mewtwo in safely. Mewtwo usually has a hard time setting up due to its frailty and hate for status, so cleric support from Xerneas is greatly appreciated.

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[Neko]

QC pls

 

[Neko]

Minority Fc Aberforth Icemaster QC pls senpais
Thank you :3

 

[Aberforth]

I would cut the TTar mention either for a mention of how well Mewtwo can synergise with Calyrex-S or a mention of how Mewtwo can find setting up difficult. Xerneas can stay as a good teammate mention if you're talking about it clearing status for Mewtwo to help with its longevity issues or hatred of paralysis.

QC 1/1 after those changes above are implemented. I'll give it a glance after too just to make sure.

 

[Neko]

I would cut the TTar mention either for a mention of how well Mewtwo can synergise with Calyrex-S or a mention of how Mewtwo can find setting up difficult. Xerneas can stay as a good teammate mention if you're talking about it clearing status for Mewtwo to help with its longevity issues or hatred of paralysis.

QC 1/1 after those changes above are implemented. I'll give it a glance after too just to make sure.

edited Aberforth-sama
(is it a bit better now?)

 

[Aberforth]

Content is fine, but I'd use some of those spare ~100 characters to link the sentences together a bit. Like linking Fire Blast and Ice Beam, or the point about Ice Beam and Calyrex appreciating it. I dont want to give too much advice in this field given I'm fairly poor when it comes to GP standards, just suggesting it to make it feel more like a Social Media spotlight.

 

[Neko]

Content is fine, but I'd use some of those spare ~100 characters to link the sentences together a bit. Like linking Fire Blast and Ice Beam, or the point about Ice Beam and Calyrex appreciating it. I dont want to give too much advice in this field given I'm fairly poor when it comes to GP standards, just suggesting it to make it feel more like a Social Media spotlight.

I tried to connect the sentences and it became shorter ahaha ;w;
Ig its less stiff now tho...
(Is the bottom one better?)

 

[Adeleine]

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Mewtwo @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Nasty Plot
- Psystrike
- Fire Blast
- Ice Beam

This genetically engineered feline differentiates itself from other special wallbreakers with its ability to break down balanced teams due to by breaking down balance teams with its above average Speed, sheer power, and coverage! Psystrike allows Mewtwo to destroy destroys Eternatus and obliterates special walls like Blissey. Fire Blast and Ice Beam allows Mewtwo to break down its checks in Steel-types, (AC) such as Necrozma-DM and Ferrothorn, and Yveltal, the most common Psychic check, which shrug off its other attacks. Because of this, Psychic-type check. Mewtwo greatly synergizes with Calyrex-S, (AC) as they quickly break down Yveltal and (I imagine this makes sense?) opposing defensive cores for each other generally (imagine this makes sense too?) until one of them can sweep late-game. (added hyphen) Choice Scarf Galarian Darmanitan is a great pivot that lures in Necrozma-DM and gets Mewtwo in safely. Mewtwo usually has a hard time setting up due to its frailty and can get crippled by hate for status, so cleric support from Xerneas is greatly appreciated.

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[Neko]

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Mewtwo @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Nasty Plot
- Psystrike
- Fire Blast
- Ice Beam

This genetically engineered feline differentiates itself from other special wallbreakers with its ability to break down balanced teams due to by breaking down balance teams with its above average Speed, sheer power, and coverage! Psystrike allows Mewtwo to destroy destroys Eternatus and obliterates special walls like Blissey. Fire Blast and Ice Beam allows Mewtwo to break down its checks in Steel-types, (AC) such as Necrozma-DM and Ferrothorn, and Yveltal, the most common Psychic check, which shrug off its other attacks. Because of this, Psychic-type check. Mewtwo greatly synergizes with Calyrex-S, (AC) as they quickly break down Yveltal and (I imagine this makes sense?) opposing defensive cores for each other generally (imagine this makes sense too?) until one of them can sweep late-game. (added hyphen) Choice Scarf Galarian Darmanitan is a great pivot that lures in Necrozma-DM and gets Mewtwo in safely. Mewtwo usually has a hard time setting up due to its frailty and can get crippled by hate for status, so cleric support from Xerneas is greatly appreciated.

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Checks implemented, thank you Finland!

 

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