Nat Dex Mega Aerodactyl [QC 0/1]

[Danbear02]

Aerodactyl-Mega @ Aerodactylite
Ability: Tough Claws
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stone Edge
- Dual Wingbeat
- Earthquake
- Roost

Mega Aerodactyl patrols the skies of National Dex UU! A blistering speed tier and Tough Claws-boosted offenses allow Mega Aerodactyl to threaten offensive and defensive foes alike; Dual Wingbeat dices SubGlare Serperior and Buzzwole while Stone Edge and Earthquake drop Iron Moth and Excadrill. Roost allows Mega Aerodactyl to repeatedly enter in the face of Stealth Rock and attacks from the likes of Mega Venusaur and Iron Moth. Mega Aerodactyl enjoys the company of Excadrill and Rotom-W, as they can both remove entry hazards; Excadrill can also set Stealth Rock and wear down opposing Rotom-W, while Rotom-W can remove hazards and pivot Mega Aerodactyl in against the many Grass-types Rotom-W forces in. Teammates like Slowbro and Clefable provide a solid defensive backbone for Mega Aerodactyl alongside pivoting and other utility options and greatly appreciate Mega Aerodactyl tackling faster foes like Iron Moth and Serperior. Aegislash is a notable companion, using its power to break through Celesteela, Scizor, and Hippowdon, leaving Mega Aerodactyl free to rip through the rest of the opposing team.

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[Danbear02]

ready for QC
Iride get to work

 

[Iride]

Excellent work, 1/1 when implemented.

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Aerodactyl-Mega @ Aerodactylite
Ability: Tough Claws
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stone Edge
- Dual Wingbeat
- Earthquake
- Roost

Mega Aerodactyl patrols the skies of National Dex UU! A blistering speed tier and Tough Claws-boosted offenses allow Mega Aerodactyl to threaten offensive and defensive foes alike; its Dual Wingbeat dices SubGlare Serperior and Buzzwole now briefly touches on how its multi-hit nature also provides further benefits (ie: hitting through sub/sash) while its Stone Edge and Earthquake drop Iron Moth and Excadrill. Roost allows Aerodactyl to repeatedly enter in the face of Stealth Rocks non plural and attacks from the likes of Mega Venusaur and Iron Moth. Mega Aerodactyl enjoys the company of Excadrill and Rotom-W; Excadrill can remove and set Stealth Rocks and wear down opposing Rotom-W, while Rotom-W can also remove hazards and redundant pivot Mega Aerodactyl in against the many Grass-types Rotom-W forces in. Teammates like Slowbro and Clefable provide a solid defensive backbone for Mega Aerodactyl alongside pivoting and other utility options and greatly appreciate Aerodactyl tackling faster foes like Iron Moth and Serperior. Aegislash is a notable companion, using its power to break through Celesteela, Scizor, and Hippowdon, leaving Mega Aerodactyl free to rip through the rest of the opposing team.

1045 Characters The word count also does not include spaces, so you basically have 100+ words to work with. As for things worth adding, if not including other moves like pursuit, u could probably expand on other wallbreaker examples besides Aegi that help compensate for its difficulties breaking through anything fat given that almost any slower wallbreaker benefits from Aero's ability to check most things offensively.