NFE Galarian Linoone

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Linoone-Galar @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Quick Feet
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Knock Off
- Facade
- Protect / Switcheroo
- Parting Shot


Galarian Linoone was made for loving you, and it shows that with its fast-paced gameplay! Thanks to Quick Feet, Galarian Linoone becomes one of the fastest Pokemon in NFE. It takes full advantage of that Speed to become a potent revenge killer and Parting Shot pivot. Between boosted Facade and Knock Off, nothing wants to switch into its attacks. Protect gives Galarian Linoone a safe way to trigger Toxic Orb and absorb Future Sight, and Switcheroo cripples incoming walls such as Tangela, Vullaby, and Wartortle while also potentially stealing away their Eviolites. Golbat and Neutralizing Gas Koffing can answer Fighting-types such as Gurdurr and Machoke and benefit from Galarian Linoone taking down Duosion. Teammates such as Electabuzz and Thwackey form VoltTurn cores and help keep up momentum. Special wallbreakers such as Magmar and Lampent can break through potential roadblocks for Galarian Linoone such as Clefairy and Tangela.

 

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Galarian Linoone was made for loving you, and it shows that with its fast-paced gameplay! Thanks to Quick Feet, Galarian Linoone becomes one of the fastest Pokemon in NFE. It takes full advantage of that Speed to become a potent revenge killer and Parting Shot pivot. (see below) Between boosted Facade and Knock Off, nothing wants to switch into its attacks. Protect gives Galarian Linoone a safe way to trigger both Toxic Orb and Future Sight, (Protect on a Dark-type in NFE is very meta because of FS Duosion) while Switcheroo can cripple incoming walls such as Tangela, Vullaby, (comma) and Wartortle while also potentially stealing away their Eviolite. Parting Shot allows it to pivot away from Fighting-types such as Machoke and Gurdurr and provides momentum. (Not much substance here and you can just mention PS as its means for pivoting; see above. Also, PS on Gurdurr is bad because of Mach Punch OHKOing. With this part gone don’t forget to fix the next sentence) Answers to the aforementioned Fighting-types such as Golbat and Neutralizing Gas Koffing are appreciated, with Galarian Linoone helping take down Galarian Corsola Duosion (gorsola can be very annoying for this mon and outstall it. Best to do Duosion instead) down for them. Teammates such as Electabuzz and Thwackey form VoltTurn cores and help keep up momentum. Special wallbreakers such as Galarian Mr Mime Magmar (gmime is le banned) and Lampent can help break through Galarian Linoone's checks.

QC 1/1, didnt check the character count but as long as thats good then this should be fine after implementing. Great work!

 

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Gnoone

Linoone-Galar @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Quick Feet
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Knock Off
- Facade
- Protect / Switcheroo
- Parting Shot

Galarian Linoone was made for loving you, and it shows that with its fast-paced gameplay! Thanks to Quick Feet, Galarian Linoone becomes one of the fastest Pokemon in NFE. It takes full advantage of that Speed to become a potent revenge killer and Parting Shot pivot. Between boosted Facade and Knock Off, nothing wants to switch into its attacks. Protect gives Galarian Linoone a safe way to trigger both Toxic Orb and absorb Future Sight, while Switcheroo can cripples incoming walls such as Tangela, Vullaby, and Wartortle while also potentially stealing away their Eviolites. Golbat and Neutralizing Gas Koffing can answer Fighting-types such as Gurdurr and Machoke,(RC) with and benefit from Galarian Linoone helping take taking down Duosion down for them. Teammates such as Electabuzz and Thwackey form VoltTurn cores and help keep up momentum. Special wallbreakers such as Magmar and Lampent can help break through Galarian Linoone's checks.(This is pretty vague rn. Might wanna add some examples. Also, you used help in 3 consecutive sentences :()

GP 1/1. LMK if you disagree with some of the changes.

 

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while Switcheroo cripples incoming walls

gonna change this part to "and Switcheroo cripples incoming walls...." to avoid having two "while" in the same sentence.
(swore I changed this

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[Eisenherz]