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National Dex Ubers Lebernatus James (Meteor Beam + Recover Eternatus) [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Wallbreaker
move 1: Recover
move 2: Meteor Beam
move 3: Dynamax Cannon
move 4: Fire Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Pressure
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

* Wallbreaker Eternatus is an immensely threatening and not only maintains resiliency to passive damage that would wear down other offensive sets against bulkier teams but also lacks the passivity of defensive sets. This amalgamation of offensive and defensive traits provides valuable role compression for many bulky offense and balance teams, which appreciate wallbreaker Eternatus's consistency against both offensive and defensive playstyles.
* Recover provides wallbreaker Eternatus immense flexibility relative to other offensive sets. Eternatus often finds turns to use Recover on the switches it forces or against more passive Pokemon that struggle to meaningfully damage it such as Ho-Oh, Ferrothorn, or Yveltal attempting to KO with Sucker Punch.
* Meteor Beam provides Eternatus with the ability to easily remove Flying-types such as Ho-Oh and Yveltal. Meteor Beam also dissuades Pokemon that would otherwise switch into Eternatus such as Primal Kyogre or Primal Groudon, as they are unable to handle Eternatus's boosted attacks afterwards.
* Fire Blast is used over Flamethrower for increased damage, notably OHKOing Zacian-C at +1 and being able to 2HKO defensive Necrozma-DM. Fire-type coverage is run to easily handle Steel-types and Pokemon that utilize Tera Steel that would wall or set up on Eternatus such as Necrozma-DM, Zacian-C, and Giratina-O.
* Tera Fairy is the primary Tera type used by wallbreaker Eternatus. Tera Fairy enables Eternatus to comfortably switch into specially offensive Yveltal and prevents it from being revenge killed by Ditto. Eternatus can also Terastallize in a pinch to remove its Ground weakness against Pokemon aiming to revenge kill it such as Primal Groudon and Arceus-Ground. Eternatus's newfound Dragon immunity also helps against Giratina-O, Palkia-O, and opposing Eternatus.
* Wallbreaker Eternatus tends to enter the battle mid-game against defensive Pokemon such as Ho-Oh, utility Arceus-Fairy, and Ferrothorn. Eternatus can use these as an opportunity to boost, wallbreak, or both. It does not need to micromanage its health, as it often finds opportunities to use Recover against defensive Pokemon, so it is capable of sponging a hit beyond what is required in order to set up. Eternatus also has a great matchup into stall teams, as Chansey is often left with too little PP to stave off other special attackers such as Primal Kyogre after dealing with Eternatus thanks to Pressure.
* Alomomola is a fantastic teammate for wallbreaker Eternatus thanks to its ability to provide a slow pivot into Pokemon that Eternatus can beat. but is otherwise hesitant to switch directly into, such as Zygarde and defensive Eternatus. Zygarde is also an excellent partner for Eternatus, as it is the tier's best blanket physical wall to handle Pokemon such as Primal Groudon and Tera Blast Ground Zacian-C. Zygarde's paralysis support also enables Eternatus to easily revenge kill Pokemon such as Zacian-C and Ultra Necrozma with minimal risk.
* Choice Band Marshadow can handle the few specially defensive Pokemon that Eternatus struggles with such as Calm Mind Arceus formes and defensive Primal Kyogre. Zacian-C is another option, which handles Calm Mind Arceus formes that can otherwise use Eternatus for setup fodder.


[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by: https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/09-10a.563751/
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bobsican.434487/
Grammar checked by:
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qc 1/2 when implemented
[SET]
name: Wallbreaker
move 1: Recover
move 2: Meteor Beam
move 3: Dynamax Cannon
move 4: Fire Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Pressure
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
tera type: Fairy / Water

[SET COMMENTS]

* Wallbreaker Eternatus is immensely offensively threatening while maintaining resiliancy to passive damage that wears down other offensive sets against bulkier teams and lacks the passivity of defensive sets. This amalgamation of offensive and defensive traits provides valuable role compression for many bulky offense and balance teams which appreciate wallbreaker Eternatus's consistency into all playstyles.
* Recover provides wallbreaker Eternatus immense flexbility relative to other offensive sets. Eternatus often finds turns to recover on the switches it forces or against more passive Pokemon that struggle to meaningfully damage it such as Ho-Oh, Ferrothorn, or Yveltal attempting to KO with Sucker Punch.
* Meteor Beam provides Eternatus with the ability to easily remove Flying-types such as Ho-Oh and Yveltal. Meteor Beam also dissuades Pokemon which would otherwise switch into Eternatus such as Primal Kyogre or Primal Groudon as they are unable to handle Eternatus's boosted coverage attacks etern doesnt use coverage (fblast) against these two but what u said sounds like it does afterwards. Fire Blast is used over Flamethrower for increased damage, notably OHKOing Zacian-C at +1 and being able to 2HKO defensive Necrozma-DM.
* Tera Fairy is the primary Tera used by wallbreaker Eternatus. Tera Fairy enables Eternatus to comfortably switch into specially offensive Yveltal and prevents it from being revenge killed by Ditto. Eternatus can also Tera Fairy in a pinch to remove its Ground-type weakness against Pokemon aiming to revenge kill it such as Primal Groudon and Arceus-Ground. could also mention neutralising its dragon weakness against gira-o and opposing etern Tera Water is an alternative for teams that have significant trouble with Zacian-C as it enables Eternatus to survive any hit and revenge kill with Fire Blast after some chip 2 layers of spikes gives etern a 6.3% chance to ohko with unboosted fblast (in case u wanna add it) while still checking wallbreaker Primal Kyogre.
*Wallbreaker Eternatus tends to enter the battle midgame against defensive Pokemon such as Ho-Oh, utility Arceus-Fairy, and Ferrothorn. Eternatus can use these for an opportunity to boost, wallbreak or both. It does not need to mincromanage spelling its health as it often finds opportunities to Recover against defensive Pokemon so it is capable of sponging a hit beyond what is required to set up. Eternatus also has a great matchup into stall as Chansey is often is left with too little PP to stave off other special attackers such as Primal Kyogre after dealing with Eternatus thanks to Pressure.
* Alomomola is a fantastic teammate for wallbreaker Eternatus thanks to its ability to provide a slow pivot into Pokemon that Eternatus can beat, but is hesitant to switch directly into, such as Zygarde and defensive Eternatus. Zygarde is also an excellent partner for Eternatus as it is the tiers best blanket physical wall and counters Primal Groudon, allowing tera to be used elsewhere in some matchups. Zygarde's paralysis support also enables Eternatus to easily revenge kill Pokemon such as Zacian-C and Ultra Necrozma with minimal risk. Choice Band Marshadow is a synergistic offensive teammate which can handle the few specially defensive Pokemon that Eternatus struggles with such as Calm Mind Arceus formes and defensive Primal Kyogre.


[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by: 09-10a
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bumboclaat.523420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s0a0m0i0.604820/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.103/
Grammar checked by:
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Questions for QC:
  • What is an appropriate level of depth to go into for explaining how Eternatus utilizes Recover in the bullet about the move itself? I.e. Is a CB Marshadow locked into Poltergeist too specific? tbh doesnt have to be too long but it should mostly be there to justify using over standard meteor beam etern. what u wrote is fine IMO. the example given is a bit too specific tho since thats better suited to Shuca Berry Eternatus especially since this set shouldnt really be 1v1ing marshadow to begin with.
  • Is tera water really worth mentioning? After writing it the benefits seem incredibly marginal. I initially included Dragon since there is a free slot but removed it since it doesn't help this Eternatus set signficantly. The damage boost can be nice v Arceus-Ground specifically, but this Eternatus set benefits signficantly more from a defensive tera type. tera water is very mid id say get rid of it, although u should probably ask someone like bobsican abt this too. tera dragon isnt that good either, so just stick with fairy
 
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[SET]
name: Wallbreaker
move 1: Recover
move 2: Meteor Beam
move 3: Dynamax Cannon
move 4: Fire Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Pressure
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

* Wallbreaker Eternatus is immensely threatening while maintaining resiliancy to passive damage that wears down other offensive sets against bulkier teams and lacks the passivity of defensive sets. This amalgamation of offensive and defensive traits provides valuable role compression for many bulky offense and balance teams which appreciate wallbreaker Eternatus's consistency into for, or against? Should clarify all playstyles.
* Recover provides wallbreaker Eternatus immense flexbility relative to other offensive sets. Eternatus often finds turns to recover should use another word if it's not intended to be the move Recover, otherwise capitalize it per grammar standards on the switches it forces or against more passive Pokemon that struggle to meaningfully damage it such as Ho-Oh, Ferrothorn, or Yveltal attempting to KO with Sucker Punch.
* Meteor Beam provides Eternatus with the ability to easily remove Flying-types such as Ho-Oh and Yveltal. Meteor Beam also dissuades Pokemon which would otherwise switch into Eternatus such as Primal Kyogre or Primal Groudon as they are unable to handle Eternatus's boosted attacks afterwards. The following should be a separate bullet point Fire Blast is used over Flamethrower for increased damage, notably OHKOing Zacian-C at +1 and being able to 2HKO defensive Necrozma-DM. Should clarify that it's ran in general to avoid struggling with Steel-types
* Tera Fairy is the primary Tera used by wallbreaker Eternatus. Tera Fairy enables Eternatus to comfortably switch into specially offensive Yveltal and prevents it from being revenge killed by Ditto. Eternatus can also Tera Fairy in a pinch to remove its Ground-type weakness against Pokemon aiming to revenge kill it such as Primal Groudon and Arceus-Ground. Eternatus's newfound Dragon immunity also helps against Giratina-O, Palkia-O, and oposing Eternatus attempting to KO Eternatus. Added space after the " * " of the next bullet point
* Wallbreaker Eternatus tends to enter the battle midgame against defensive Pokemon such as Ho-Oh, utility Arceus-Fairy, and Ferrothorn. Eternatus can use these for an opportunity to boost, wallbreak or both. It does not need to micromanage its health as it often finds opportunities to Recover against defensive Pokemon so it is capable of sponging a hit beyond what is required to set up. Eternatus also has a great matchup into stall as Chansey is often is left with too little PP to stave off other special attackers such as Primal Kyogre after dealing with Eternatus thanks to Pressure.
* Alomomola is a fantastic teammate for wallbreaker Eternatus thanks to its ability to provide a slow pivot into Pokemon that Eternatus can beat, but is hesitant to switch directly into, such as Zygarde and defensive Eternatus. Zygarde is also an excellent partner for Eternatus as it is the tiers best blanket physical wall to handle foes such as? and counters Primal Groudon, allowing tera to be used elsewhere in some matchups with Primal Groudon, or...? bring a example or two. Zygarde's paralysis support also enables Eternatus to easily revenge kill Pokemon such as Zacian-C and Ultra Necrozma with minimal risk. Choice Band Marshadow is a synergistic offensive teammate which can handle the few specially defensive Pokemon that Eternatus struggles with such as Calm Mind Arceus formes and defensive Primal Kyogre. Seems like this set is rather self sufficient and requires minimal support, I'd recommend to highlight that and instead focus more on allies that mitigate its flaws (especially given most current examples here are just solid all around than more directly helping Eternatus), such as the Marshadow bit, could probably elaborate on Arceus-Fairy checks as they seem concerning for this set


[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by: 09-10a
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/09-10a.563751/ Links are required
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bumboclaat.523420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s0a0m0i0.604820/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/
 
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[SET]
name: Wallbreaker
move 1: Recover
move 2: Meteor Beam
move 3: Dynamax Cannon
move 4: Fire Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Pressure
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

* Wallbreaker Eternatus is immensely threatening while maintaining resiliancy to passive damage that wears down other offensive sets against bulkier teams and lacks the passivity of defensive sets. This amalgamation of offensive and defensive traits provides valuable role compression for many bulky offense and balance teams which appreciate wallbreaker Eternatus's consistency into both offensive and defensive all playstyles.
* Recover provides wallbreaker Eternatus immense flexbility relative to other offensive sets. Eternatus often finds turns to Recover on the switches it forces or against more passive Pokemon that struggle to meaningfully damage it such as Ho-Oh, Ferrothorn, or Yveltal attempting to KO with Sucker Punch.
* Meteor Beam provides Eternatus with the ability to easily remove Flying-types such as Ho-Oh and Yveltal. Meteor Beam also dissuades Pokemon which would otherwise switch into Eternatus such as Primal Kyogre or Primal Groudon as they are unable to handle Eternatus's boosted attacks afterwards. Added space after the following " * "
* Fire Blast is used over Flamethrower for increased damage, notably OHKOing Zacian-C at +1 and being able to 2HKO defensive Necrozma-DM. Fire-type coverage is run to enable to easily handle Steel-types that would wall or set up on Eternatus such as Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Could mention Tera Steel foes such as Giratina-O as examples
* Tera Fairy is the primary Tera used by wallbreaker Eternatus. Tera Fairy enables Eternatus to comfortably switch into specially offensive Yveltal and prevents it from being revenge killed by Ditto. Eternatus can also Tera Fairy in a pinch to remove its Ground-type weakness against Pokemon aiming to revenge kill it such as Primal Groudon and Arceus-Ground. Eternatus's newfound Dragon immunity also helps against Giratina-O, Palkia-O, and oposing Eternatus attempting to KO Eternatus.
* Wallbreaker Eternatus tends to enter the battle midgame against defensive Pokemon such as Ho-Oh, utility Arceus-Fairy, and Ferrothorn. Eternatus can use these for an opportunity to boost, wallbreak or both. It does not need to micromanage its health as it often finds opportunities to Recover against defensive Pokemon so it is capable of sponging a hit beyond what is required to set up. Eternatus also has a great matchup into stall as Chansey is often is left with too little PP to stave off other special attackers such as Primal Kyogre after dealing with Eternatus thanks to Pressure.
* Alomomola is a fantastic teammate for wallbreaker Eternatus thanks to its ability to provide a slow pivot into Pokemon that Eternatus can beat, but is hesitant to switch directly into, such as Zygarde and defensive Eternatus. Zygarde is also an excellent partner for Eternatus as it is the tiers best blanket physical wall to handle Pokemon such as Primal Groudon and Tera Blast Ground Zacian-C. Zygarde's paralysis support also enables Eternatus to easily revenge kill Pokemon such as Zacian-C and Ultra Necrozma with minimal risk.
* Choice Band Marshadow is a synergistic offensive teammate which can handle the few specially defensive Pokemon that Eternatus struggles with such as Calm Mind Arceus formes and defensive Primal Kyogre. Zacian-C is another option which handles Calm Mind Arceus formes that can use Eternatus for setup fodder.


[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by: https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/09-10a.563751/
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bumboclaat.523420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s0a0m0i0.604820/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bobsican.434487/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/
 
You removed the [SET] bit at the top, and don't forget to update the label from Quality Control to Copyediting
 
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[SET]
name: Wallbreaker
move 1: Recover
move 2: Meteor Beam
move 3: Dynamax Cannon
move 4: Fire Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Pressure
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

* Wallbreaker Eternatus is immensely threatening while maintaining resiliancy and not only maintains resiliency to passive damage that wears would wear down other offensive sets against bulkier teams and but also lacks the passivity of defensive sets. This amalgamation of offensive and defensive traits provides valuable role compression for many bulky offense and balance teams, (AC) which appreciate wallbreaker Eternatus's consistency into against arguably lateral but I think it improves clarity here both offensive and defensive playstyles.
* Recover provides wallbreaker Eternatus immense flexbility flexibility relative to other offensive sets. Eternatus often finds turns to use Recover on the switches it forces or against more passive Pokemon that struggle to meaningfully damage it such as Ho-Oh, Ferrothorn, or Yveltal attempting to KO with Sucker Punch.
* Meteor Beam provides Eternatus with the ability to easily remove Flying-types such as Ho-Oh and Yveltal. Meteor Beam also dissuades Pokemon which that would otherwise switch into Eternatus such as Primal Kyogre or Primal Groudon, (AC) as they are unable to handle Eternatus's boosted attacks afterwards.
* Fire Blast is used over Flamethrower for increased damage, notably OHKOing Zacian-C at +1 and being able to 2HKO defensive Necrozma-DM. Fire-type coverage is run to enable to easily handle Steel-types and Pokemon that utilize Tera Steel that would wall or set up on Eternatus such as Necrozma-DM, Zacian-C, (AC) and Pokemon which utilize Tera Steel such as Giratina-O. this change is under the assumption that the Tera Steel users you are referring to, like Giratina-O, would wall or set up on Eternatus. If you are mentioning Tera Steel users in their own right, irregardless of what they do against Eternatus, let me know because I will need to tweak this
* Tera Fairy is the primary Tera type used by wallbreaker Eternatus. Tera Fairy enables Eternatus to comfortably switch into specially offensive Yveltal and prevents it from being revenge killed by Ditto. Eternatus can also Tera Fairy Terastallize in a pinch to remove its Ground-type weakness against Pokemon aiming to revenge kill it such as Primal Groudon and Arceus-Ground. Eternatus's newfound Dragon immunity also helps against Giratina-O, Palkia-O, and oposing opposing Eternatus attempting to KO Eternatus. The "attempting to ko" part is already implied imo
* Wallbreaker Eternatus tends to enter the battle midgame mid-game against defensive Pokemon such as Ho-Oh, utility Arceus-Fairy, and Ferrothorn. Eternatus can use these for as an opportunity to boost, wallbreak, (AC) or both. It does not need to micromanage its health, (AC) as it often finds opportunities to use Recover against defensive Pokemon, (AC) so it is capable of sponging a hit beyond what is required in order to set up. Eternatus also has a great matchup into stall teams, as Chansey is often is left with too little PP to stave off other special attackers such as Primal Kyogre after dealing with Eternatus thanks to Pressure.
* Alomomola is a fantastic teammate for wallbreaker Eternatus thanks to its ability to provide a slow pivot into Pokemon that Eternatus can beat, (RC) but is otherwise hesitant to switch directly into, (RC) such as Zygarde and defensive Eternatus. Zygarde is also an excellent partner for Eternatus, (AC) as it is the tiers tier's best blanket physical wall to handle Pokemon such as Primal Groudon and Tera Blast Ground Zacian-C. Zygarde's paralysis support also enables Eternatus to easily revenge kill Pokemon such as Zacian-C and Ultra Necrozma with minimal risk.
* Choice Band Marshadow is a synergistic offensive teammate which can handle the few specially defensive Pokemon that Eternatus struggles with such as Calm Mind Arceus formes and defensive Primal Kyogre. Zacian-C is another option, (AC) which handles Calm Mind Arceus formes that can otherwise use Eternatus for setup fodder.


[SET CREDITS]
Set(s) by: https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/09-10a.563751/
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bumboclaat.523420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/s0a0m0i0.604820/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bobsican.434487/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/
 
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