OU Hisuian Lilligant

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:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Lilligant is a dangerous sweeper due to its high Attack, Chlorophyll-boosted Speed in sun, and access to Victory Dance, which allows it to set up on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Hisuian Samurott, and Kingambit. In sun, Hisuian Lilligant can use its Grass-type STAB move Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks that resist both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite for super effective damage. Leftovers in particular works well with Victory Dance, as Hisuian Lilligant is able to heal from some of the damage it takes while it sets up on physical attackers. Life Orb is an option that helps Hisuian Lilligant overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, OHKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. A Jolly nature allows it to Speed tie Unburden-boosted Adamant Sneasler in sun, while an Adamant nature provides extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. Tera Ghost allows Hisuian Lilligant to spinblock and threaten some of its best checks in Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. Tera Ghost also allows Hisuian Lilligant to block Extreme Speed from Dragonite, preventing revenge kills. Tera Fire with Tera Blast is also an option, giving Hisuian Lilligant a strong sun-boosted Fire-type STAB move for coverage to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity to Will-O-Wisp. Hisuian Lilligant requires Torkoal as a partner, as Hisuian Lilligant requires sun support, which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Hisuian Lilligant’s ability to weaken Water-types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late-game sweeper in sun. Hisuian Lilligant is only able to afford to run one coverage move, which can leave it vulnerable to checks it cannot afford to run coverage for, such as Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, Amoonguss, and Moltres. Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake are all great teammates capable of handling some of the aforementioned checks. Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with Draco Meteor, as well as blow past Moltres, which is usually able to wall Hisuian Lilligant.
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:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Lilligant-Hisui is a dangerous sweeper due to its access to Victory Dance which can shatter unprepared teams. This allows it to setup on some physical attackers such as Great Tusk, Samurott-Hisui, and Kingambit. As well as boasting a strong attack stat and a great speed stat boosted by Chlorophyll in Sun, if set-up Lilligant-Hisui can become one of the strongest sweepers. you can probably condense this all into one or two sentences, something among the lines of "thanks to high speed, solid attack, and access to victory dance, hisuian lilligant is a dangerous sweeper that can set up on pokemon like (name the mons)" Lilligant-Hisui appreciates Torkoal as a partner as Lilligant-Hisui synergizes well with Sun which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Lilligant-Hisui appreciates the Chlorophyll speed boost, as well as giving Lilligant-Hisui access to an extremely strong Grass STAB with Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two turn charge. put this after the EV stuff With reliable STAB with both Solar Blade and Close Combat, it appreciates coverage in the form of Ice Spinner or Tera Blast. fluff Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks super-effectively that resist the dual STAB combination such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Dragonite. Tera Blast Fire is also an option, giving a strong fire STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky Grass types like Amoonguss hard. On the flipside, Tera Ghost Blast allows it to spinblock and threaten one of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui in Slowking-Galar with Tera Blast. Jolly nature allows it to speed tie with Unburden activated 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in Sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while Adamant provides that extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm teams are there any targets in specific it overwhelms?. Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Lilligants presence and the presence of Sun. Lilligant’s ability to weaken water types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game sweeper in Sun. Lilligant-Hisui suffers as it is only able to afford to one coverage move, usually leaving it vulnerable to some checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, Lilligant-Hisui has a tough time breaking through fluff mons like Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, and Moltres. name some mons that can help vs these threats (i.e. tusk, moltres, greninja)

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this may seem like a lot, but its mostly just moving stuff and cutting down on fluff, the actual content is mostly good!

i wanna glance this over one more time before approving

edit - QC 1/2 through discord
 
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Hey, wanted to mention several things before doing a regular QC check so they can be implemented.
Let me know when you implement them so I can give it another look before 2/2

jackuzzler said:
Tera Blast Fire is also an option, giving a strong fire STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky Grass types like Amoonguss hard. On the flipside, Tera Ghost allows it to spinblock and threaten one of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui in Slowking-Galar with Tera Blast.
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  • List things in the order they appear in the set. In particular this means you list Tera Ghost before Tera Fire. This also makes sense cause Tera Blast Ghost has overall more targets which is the next part..
  • The targets themselves. Tera Blast Ghost targets are Gholdengo, Galarian Slowking, and you may also add Skeledirge, but Gholdengo is the big one missing. Tera Blast Fire also hits Gholdengo, and though it doesn't directly threaten Galarian Slowking nor Skeledirge, it gets boosted by Sun and hits Amoonguss. Lastly Tera Ghost also hits Dragapult; you can add this mention here and maybe also in the Ice Spinner part.
  • The other benefits of the Teras. This is something you could mention separately. Tera Ghost blocks Dragonite's Extreme Speed. Tera Fire is immune to burns, particularly Wisp.
That's for that part of the analysis, but there are other things missing overall
  • A mention of Leftovers and Life Orb and why they are used. Straightforward Leftovers gives it more chances to set up and works well with Victory Dance as the latter boosts its Defense. Life Orb is just extra power, it lets you for example OHKO Walking Wake after 1 Victory Dance.
  • The teammates section needs some work. Walking Wake is a good one as it blow passes Moltres and Amoonguss,
 
SetsuSetsuna said:
Hey, wanted to mention several things before doing a regular QC check so they can be implemented.
Let me know when you implement them so I can give it another look before 2/2


  • List things in the order they appear in the set. In particular this means you list Tera Ghost before Tera Fire. This also makes sense cause Tera Blast Ghost has overall more targets which is the next part..
  • The targets themselves. Tera Blast Ghost targets are Gholdengo, Galarian Slowking, and you may also add Skeledirge, but Gholdengo is the big one missing. Tera Blast Fire also hits Gholdengo, and though it doesn't directly threaten Galarian Slowking nor Skeledirge, it gets boosted by Sun and hits Amoonguss. Lastly Tera Ghost also hits Dragapult; you can add this mention here and maybe also in the Ice Spinner part.
  • The other benefits of the Teras. This is something you could mention separately. Tera Ghost blocks Dragonite's Extreme Speed. Tera Fire is immune to burns, particularly Wisp.
That's for that part of the analysis, but there are other things missing overall
  • A mention of Leftovers and Life Orb and why they are used. Straightforward Leftovers gives it more chances to set up and works well with Victory Dance as the latter boosts its Defense. Life Orb is just extra power, it lets you for example OHKO Walking Wake after 1 Victory Dance.
  • The teammates section needs some work. Walking Wake is a good one as it blow passes Moltres and Amoonguss,
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I finished these updates. The one comment about the order they appear in the set confused me (I dm'd you about this) so if you need that changed more still I can totally do that. I think everything else is a bit more improved.
 
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2/2 after implemented, ty vm for your hard work

:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Lilligant-Hisui is a dangerous sweeper due to a high attack stat, a high speed stat boosted by Chlorophyll in sun, and access to Victory Dance which allows it to setup on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Samurott-Hisui, and Kingambit. Leftovers in particular work well with Victory Dance as you're able to heal from some of the chip while you setup on physical attackers. If you want to go for extra power, Life Orb is an option that helps you overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, 0HKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. Jolly nature allows it to speed tie with Unburden activated 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in Sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while Adamant provides that extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. Lilligant-Hisui appreciates Torkoal as a partner as Lilligant-Hisui synergizes well with Sun which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Lilligant-Hisui appreciates the Chlorophyll speed boost, as well as giving Lilligant-Hisui access to an extremely strong Grass STAB with Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks super-effectively that resist the dual STAB combination such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite. Tera Ghost allows it to spinblock and threaten some of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui in Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. Tera Ghost also allows Lilligant-Hisui to become immune to Extreme Speeds from Dragonite. (If you could somehow specify you prevent it from revenge killing Lilligant that would be great) Tera Blast Fire is also an option, giving a strong fire STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity from Will-o-Wisp. Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Lilligants presence and the presence of Sun. Lilligant’s ability to weaken water types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game sweeper in Sun. Lilligant-Hisui suffers as it is only able to afford to one coverage move, usually leaving it vulnerable to some checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, Lilligant-Hisui has a tough time breaking through mons like Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, Amoonguss and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate the Sun and is able to blow past those checks listed are appreciated. Pokemon like Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake all are great teammates. Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with strong Draco Meteors, as well as blow pass Moltres which is usually able to wall Moltres Hisuian Lilligant.

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2/2 after implemented, ty vm for your hard work

:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Lilligant-Hisui is a dangerous sweeper due to a high attack stat, a high speed stat boosted by Chlorophyll in sun, and access to Victory Dance which allows it to setup on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Samurott-Hisui, and Kingambit. Leftovers in particular work well with Victory Dance as you're able to heal from some of the chip while you setup on physical attackers. If you want to go for extra power, Life Orb is an option that helps you overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, 0HKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. Jolly nature allows it to speed tie with Unburden activated 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in Sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while Adamant provides that extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. Lilligant-Hisui appreciates Torkoal as a partner as Lilligant-Hisui synergizes well with Sun which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Lilligant-Hisui appreciates the Chlorophyll speed boost, as well as giving Lilligant-Hisui access to an extremely strong Grass STAB with Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks super-effectively that resist the dual STAB combination such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite. Tera Ghost allows it to spinblock and threaten some of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui in Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. Tera Ghost also allows Lilligant-Hisui to become immune to Extreme Speeds from Dragonite. (If you could somehow specify you prevent it from revenge killing Lilligant that would be great) Tera Blast Fire is also an option, giving a strong fire STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity from Will-o-Wisp. Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Lilligants presence and the presence of Sun. Lilligant’s ability to weaken water types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game sweeper in Sun. Lilligant-Hisui suffers as it is only able to afford to one coverage move, usually leaving it vulnerable to some checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, Lilligant-Hisui has a tough time breaking through mons like Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, Amoonguss and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate the Sun and is able to blow past those checks listed are appreciated. Pokemon like Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake all are great teammates. Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Slowking-Galar, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with strong Draco Meteors, as well as blow pass Moltres which is usually able to wall Moltres Hisuian Lilligant.

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implemented lol @ the last one. was late when i wrote this. GP Team
 
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[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant is a dangerous sweeper due to a its high Attack stat, a high Chlorophyll-boosted Speed stat boosted by Chlorophyll in sun, and access to Victory Dance, (ac) which allows it to set up (add space between set and up) on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Samurott-Hisui Hisuian Samurott, and Kingambit. Leftovers in particular works well with Victory Dance, (ac) as you're Hisuian Lilligant is able to heal from some of the chip damage it takes while you it sets up on physical attackers. If you want to go for extra power, Life Orb is an option that helps you Hisuian Lilligant overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, OHKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. A Jolly nature allows it to Speed tie with Unburden-boosted activated 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while an Adamant nature provides that extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, (ac) as Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant synergizes well with sun, (ac) which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant appreciates the Chlorophyll Speed boost, as well as giving Lilligant-Hisui access to an extremely being able to use its strong Grass-type STAB move with Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn (ah) charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks super-effectively that resist the dual STAB combination both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, (ac) and Dragonite for super effective damage. Tera Ghost allows it Hisuian Lilligant to spinblock and threaten some of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui it in Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. (you may want to specify the Tera type used by Skeledirge you're referring to here) Tera Ghost also allows Hisuian Lilligant to block Extreme Speed from Dragonite, (ac) preventing revenge kills. Tera Blast Fire Tera Fire with Tera Blast is also an option, giving Hisuian Lilligant a strong sun-boosted Fire-type STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity from to Will-O-Wisp. Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Hisuian Lilligant's (aa) presence and the presence of sun. Hisuian Lilligant’s ability to weaken Water-types (ah) and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game sweeper in sun. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant suffers as it is only able to afford to run one coverage move, usually leaving which can leave it vulnerable to some checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, Lilligant-Hisui it has a tough time breaking through mons foes like Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, Amoonguss, (ac) and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate the sun and is are able to blow past those these checks listed are appreciated. Pokemon like Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake all are are all great teammates capable of handling some of the aforementioned checks. (adds clarity and helps with transition into next sentence) Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with strong Draco Meteors, as well as blow pass past Moltres, (ac) which is usually able to wall Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant.

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Clouds said:
hi hi, this is a gp amcheck so feel free to implement anything you find useful

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[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant is a dangerous sweeper due to a its high Attack stat, a high Chlorophyll-boosted Speed stat boosted by Chlorophyll in sun, and access to Victory Dance, (ac) which allows it to set up (add space between set and up) on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Samurott-Hisui Hisuian Samurott, and Kingambit. Leftovers in particular works well with Victory Dance, (ac) as you're Hisuian Lilligant is able to heal from some of the chip damage it takes while you it sets up on physical attackers. If you want to go for extra power, Life Orb is an option that helps you Hisuian Lilligant overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, OHKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. A Jolly nature allows it to Speed tie with Unburden-boosted activated 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while an Adamant nature provides that extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, (ac) as Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant synergizes well with sun, (ac) which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant appreciates the Chlorophyll Speed boost, as well as giving Lilligant-Hisui access to an extremely being able to use its strong Grass-type STAB move with Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn (ah) charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks super-effectively that resist the dual STAB combination both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, (ac) and Dragonite for super effective damage. Tera Ghost allows it Hisuian Lilligant to spinblock and threaten some of the best checks for Lilligant-Hisui it in Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. (you may want to specify the Tera type used by Skeledirge you're referring to here) Tera Ghost also allows Hisuian Lilligant to block Extreme Speed from Dragonite, (ac) preventing revenge kills. Tera Blast Fire Tera Fire with Tera Blast is also an option, giving Hisuian Lilligant a strong sun-boosted Fire-type STAB move for coverage boosted by sun to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity from to Will-O-Wisp. Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Hisuian Lilligant's (aa) presence and the presence of sun. Hisuian Lilligant’s ability to weaken Water-types (ah) and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game sweeper in sun. Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant suffers as it is only able to afford to run one coverage move, usually leaving which can leave it vulnerable to some checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, Lilligant-Hisui it has a tough time breaking through mons foes like Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, Amoonguss, (ac) and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate the sun and is are able to blow past those these checks listed are appreciated. Pokemon like Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake all are are all great teammates capable of handling some of the aforementioned checks. (adds clarity and helps with transition into next sentence) Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Slowking-Galar Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with strong Draco Meteors, as well as blow pass past Moltres, (ac) which is usually able to wall Lilligant-Hisui Hisuian Lilligant.

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autumn said:
jackuzzler implement the above amcheck and then i’ll look over it again and give it a stamp

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implemented thanks :3
 
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i'm not really sure what happened with the structure here - your paragraph should follow the order of the set, describing moves first, then ability/items/tera/evs, and then teammates should be last. i moved some sentences around to reflect this but give it a read over just to make sure
:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Lilligant is a dangerous sweeper due to its high Attack, Chlorophyll-boosted Speed in sun, and access to Victory Dance, which allows it to set up on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Hisuian Samurott, and Kingambit. In sun, Hisuian Lilligant can use its Grass-type STAB move Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks that resist both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite for super effective damage. Leftovers in particular works well with Victory Dance, as Hisuian Lilligant is able to heal from some of the damage it takes while it sets up on physical attackers. Life Orb is an option that helps Hisuian Lilligant overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, OHKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. A Jolly nature allows it to Speed tie Unburden-boosted 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while an Adamant nature provides extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. (removed that because it's basically implied, if lilligant needed +1 to outspeed then it would've been stated) Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, as Hisuian Lilligant synergizes well with sun, which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Hisuian Lilligant appreciates the Chlorophyll Speed boost, as well as being able to use its strong Grass-type STAB move Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks that resist both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite for super effective damage. Tera Ghost allows Hisuian Lilligant to spinblock and threaten some of its best checks the best checks for it in Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. Tera Ghost also allows Hisuian Lilligant to block Extreme Speed from Dragonite, preventing revenge kills. Tera Fire with Tera Blast is also an option, giving Hisuian Lilligant a strong sun-boosted Fire-type STAB move for coverage to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity to Will-O-Wisp. Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, as it synergizes well with sun, which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. (this sentence needs to say that torkoal is a mandatory teammate instead of just 'synergises well with sun' because it's only viable on sun) Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Hisuian Lilligant's presence and the presence of sun. (this is redundant bc you say the exact same thing in the next sentence) Hisuian Lilligant’s ability to weaken Water-types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game late-game (add hyphen) sweeper in sun. Hisuian Lilligant is only able to afford to run one coverage move, which can leave it vulnerable to checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, it has a tough time breaking through foes like for, such as Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, Amoonguss, and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate sun and are able to blow past these checks are appreciated. (cut that because you say it again in the next sentence) Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake are all great teammates capable of handling some of the aforementioned checks. Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with Draco Meteor, as well as blow past Moltres, which is usually able to wall Hisuian Lilligant.

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autumn said:
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i'm not really sure what happened with the structure here - your paragraph should follow the order of the set, describing moves first, then ability/items/tera/evs, and then teammates should be last. i moved some sentences around to reflect this but give it a read over just to make sure
:lilligant_hisui:
[SET]
name: Victory Dance
move 1: Victory Dance
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Solar Blade / Tera Blast
move 4: Ice Spinner / Tera Blast
item: Leftovers / Life Orb
tera type: Ghost / Fire
ability: Chlorophyll
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Lilligant is a dangerous sweeper due to its high Attack, Chlorophyll-boosted Speed in sun, and access to Victory Dance, which allows it to set up on physical attackers like Great Tusk, Hisuian Samurott, and Kingambit. In sun, Hisuian Lilligant can use its Grass-type STAB move Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks that resist both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite for super effective damage. Leftovers in particular works well with Victory Dance, as Hisuian Lilligant is able to heal from some of the damage it takes while it sets up on physical attackers. Life Orb is an option that helps Hisuian Lilligant overwhelm some targets with extra power like Walking Wake, OHKOing it with Close Combat after a Victory Dance. A Jolly nature allows it to Speed tie Unburden-boosted 252 Speed Adamant Sneasler in sun with no Victory Dance boosts, while an Adamant nature provides extra power that may be necessary to overwhelm targets like Zapdos, Amoonguss, and Zamazenta. (removed that because it's basically implied, if lilligant needed +1 to outspeed then it would've been stated) Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, as Hisuian Lilligant synergizes well with sun, which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. Hisuian Lilligant appreciates the Chlorophyll Speed boost, as well as being able to use its strong Grass-type STAB move Solar Blade without the drawbacks of the normal two-turn charge. Ice Spinner allows it to hit common checks that resist both of its STAB types such as Zapdos, Amoonguss, Dragapult, and Dragonite for super effective damage. Tera Ghost allows Hisuian Lilligant to spinblock and threaten some of its best checks the best checks for it in Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Skeledirge with Tera Blast. Tera Ghost also allows Hisuian Lilligant to block Extreme Speed from Dragonite, preventing revenge kills. Tera Fire with Tera Blast is also an option, giving Hisuian Lilligant a strong sun-boosted Fire-type STAB move for coverage to hit bulky targets like Amoonguss and Gholdengo hard. Another benefit of Tera Fire is an immunity to Will-O-Wisp. Hisuian Lilligant appreciates Torkoal as a partner, as it synergizes well with sun, which Torkoal is able to set up automatically with Drought. (this sentence needs to say that torkoal is a mandatory teammate instead of just 'synergises well with sun' because it's only viable on sun) Pokemon like Iron Moth heavily benefit from both Hisuian Lilligant's presence and the presence of sun. (this is redundant bc you say the exact same thing in the next sentence) Hisuian Lilligant’s ability to weaken Water-types and opposing team structures makes Iron Moth a dangerous late game late-game (add hyphen) sweeper in sun. Hisuian Lilligant is only able to afford to run one coverage move, which can leave it vulnerable to checks it cannot afford to run coverage for. As a result, it has a tough time breaking through foes like for, such as Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, Amoonguss, and Moltres. Pokemon that appreciate sun and are able to blow past these checks are appreciated. (cut that because you say it again in the next sentence) Great Tusk, Sandy Shocks, and Walking Wake are all great teammates capable of handling some of the aforementioned checks. Great Tusk and Sandy Shocks threaten Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Moltres. Walking Wake is able to break Amoonguss with Draco Meteor, as well as blow past Moltres, which is usually able to wall Hisuian Lilligant.

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