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:sv/Scream-Tail:

[SET]
name: Unaware
move 1: Dazzling Gleam
move 2: Wish
move 3: Protect
move 4: Calm Mind / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Unaware
nature: Bold
evs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail with its good bulk and excellent typing is a great Unaware user that is able to check a variety of threatening physical setup sweepers like Great Tusk, Dragonite, and Kommo-o while also being potential wincon on its own with Calm Mind. Scream Tail also functions as a Wish passer, providing longevity to Pokemon lacking reliable recovery such as Zamazenta-C, Heatran, and Walking Wake. Calm Mind can be used to set up on opposing setup Pokemon like Manaphy and Triage Enamorus-T, while Thunder Wave can be used to cripple incoming switch-ins such as Ceruledge and Heatran. Frail offensive Pokemon such as Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Weavile appreciate Scream Tail being able to take priority moves from Dragonite and Triage Kommo-o. Scream Tail is vulnerable to Ghost-types like Gengar and Ceruledge, so defensive checks to them like Manaphy and Mandibuzz are recommended. Scream Tail is also weak to entry hazard damage, so it is essential to pair it with a reliable hazard remover like Corviknight, Mandibuzz, or Great Tusk.

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:sv/Scream-Tail:

[SET]
name: Unaware
move 1: Dazzling Gleam
move 2: Wish
move 3: Protect
move 4: Calm Mind / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Unaware
nature: Bold
evs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail with its good bulk and excellent typing makes it a great unaware user that is With its good bulk and excellent typing, Scream Tail is a great Unaware user, able to check a variety of physical setup threats like Great Tusk, Dragonite, and Triage Kommo-o while also being a setup threat on its own with Calm Mind. Scream Tail can also function as a Wish passer to teams with its high HP providing longevity to Pokemon lacking reliable recovery such as Zamazenta-C, Heatran, and Walking Wake. Calm Mind can be used to setup on opposing setup Pokemon like Take Heart Manaphy and Triage Enamorus-T, while Thunder Wave can be used to cripple incoming switch-ins such as Ceruledge and Heatran. Frail offensive pokemon such as Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Weavile appreciate Scream Tail being able to check priority moves from Dragonite and Triage Kommo-o. Scream Tail is vulnerable to Ghost-types like Gengar and Ceruledge, so defensive checks to them like Manaphy and Mandibuzz are recommended. Scream Tail is also prone to entry hazard damage, so it is essential to pair it with a reliable hazard remover like Corviknight or Great Tusk. maybe mention Mandibuzz since it was mentioned as a teammate in the sentence before?

[SET CREDITS]
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:sv/Scream-Tail:

[SET]
name: Unaware
move 1: Dazzling Gleam
move 2: Wish
move 3: Protect
move 4: Calm Mind / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Unaware
nature: Bold
evs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail with its good bulk and excellent typing makes it, is a great unaware user that is able to check a variety of physical setup threats like Great Tusk, Dragonite, and Triage Kommo-o while also being a setup threat on its own potential win condition with Calm Mind. Scream Tail can also functionfunctions as a Wish passer to teams with its high HP dex info, people know how wish works providing longevity to pokemon lacking reliable recovery such as Zamazenta-C, Heatran, and Walking Wake. Calm Mind can be used to setup on opposing setup Pokemon like Take Heart Unless they're Mold Breaker, you can set up against Tail Glow as well Manaphy and Triage Enamorus-T, while Thunder Wave can be used to cripple incoming switch-ins such as Ceruledge and Heatran. Frail offensive pokemon such as Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Weavile appreciate Scream Tail being able to check priority moves from Dragonite and Triage Kommo-o. Scream Tail is vulnerable to Ghost-types like Gengar and Ceruledge, so defensive checks to them like Manaphy and Mandibuzz are recommended. Scream Tail is also prone to entry hazard damage, so it is essential to pair it with a reliable hazard remover like Corviknight, Mandibuzz or Great Tusk.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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excellent work as always, QC 1/2!
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Good catch with Mandibuzz, but in general most of your changes were GP stuff. try not to change entire sentences unless they do not make sense at all or the information itself is incorrect. generally, if something isn't right grammar-wise, the GP checker will fix it.
 
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Scream Tail with its good bulk and excellent typing, is a great unaware user that is able to check a variety of physical setup threats like Great Tusk, Dragonite, and Triage tail checks every kommoo variant Kommo-o while also being potential win condition on its own with Calm Mind. Scream Tail also functions as a Wish passer to teams providing longevity to pokemon lacking reliable recovery such as Zamazenta-C, Heatran, and Walking Wake. Calm Mind can be used to setup on opposing setup Pokemon like Manaphy and Triage Enamorus-T, while Thunder Wave can be used to cripple incoming switch-ins such as Ceruledge and Heatran. Frail offensive pokemon such as Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Weavile appreciate Scream Tail being able to check priority moves from Dragonite and Triage Kommo-o. Scream Tail is vulnerable to Ghost-types like Gengar and Ceruledge, so defensive checks to them like Manaphy and Mandibuzz are recommended. Scream Tail is also prone to entry hazard damage, so it is essential to pair it with a reliable hazard remover like Corviknight, Mandibuzz, or Great Tusk.
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great work, QC 2/2
 
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[SET]
name: Unaware
move 1: Dazzling Gleam
move 2: Wish
move 3: Protect
move 4: Calm Mind / Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Unaware
nature: Bold
evs: 236 HP / 252 Def / 20 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Scream Tail with its good bulk and excellent typing,(RC) is a great unaware Unaware user that is able to check a variety of threatening physical setup threats sweepers like Great Tusk, Dragonite, and Kommo-o while also being potential win condition wincon on its own with Calm Mind. Scream Tail also functions as a Wish passer to teams ,(AC) providing longevity to pokemon Pokemon lacking reliable recovery such as Zamazenta-C, Heatran, and Walking Wake. Calm Mind can be used to setup set up on opposing setup Pokemon like Manaphy and Triage Enamorus-T, while Thunder Wave can be used to cripple incoming switch-ins such as Ceruledge and Heatran. Frail offensive pokemon Pokemon such as Barraskewda, Roaring Moon, and Weavile appreciate Scream Tail being able to check take (you can't really check a move, but rather a Pokemon; if you meant to say that Scream Tail also checks these, then just simply add "and check" after "from") priority moves from Dragonite and Triage Kommo-o. Scream Tail is vulnerable to Ghost-types like Gengar and Ceruledge, so defensive checks to them like Manaphy and Mandibuzz are recommended. Scream Tail is also prone weak to entry hazard damage, so it is essential to pair it with a reliable hazard remover like Corviknight, Mandibuzz, or Great Tusk.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/tranquility.475288/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/gimmickyasitgets.540420/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/cat.580765/
Grammar checked by:
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