PU Beedrill (mini)

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No, not the bees! NOT THE BEES!!

[OVERVIEW]

While Beedrill has a handful of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind, its poor Speed, pitiful bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to their access to Taunt, better overall stats, better typings, larger support movepools, and more useful abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc have much stronger offenses, larger Speed stats, and provide stronger support, such as two entry hazards with Omastar and access to Taunt with Froslass and Lycanroc. Beedrill also faces competition as a Bug-type from Scyther and Pinsir thanks to their stronger offenses, larger bulk, and more beneficial abilities.

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by taking one hit with a Focus Sash. However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing, which not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Taunt, Spikes, and Will-O-Wisp but also have much stronger stats and abilities overall. Omastar and Lycanroc are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings, access to Taunt, and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelerock.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[JustoonSmitts, 239732]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], [tondas, 442732]]
- Grammar checked by: [[frostration, 447027]]
 
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JustoonSmitts said:
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**artwork by me**
No, not the bees! NOT THE BEES!!

[OVERVIEW]
Beedrill has a handfull (handful)of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind, but its poor Speed, weak bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to thier better overall stats, typings, and abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc-Midday have much stronger offensive presences. (also better speed for froslass and lycanroc and better support for omastar and froslass)All these faults are why Beedrill is a terrible Pokemon.(talk about offensive bug mons that outclass it)

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 252 Spe(just add the extra 4 evs)
ivs: 0 HP / 0 Def / 0 SpD(no need to screw with the ivs, remove)

[SET COMMENTS]
Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by living one hit with a Focus Sash and then attempting to either set up a second layer of Toxic Spikes or weaken the opponent with Endeavor. (no need to say what every move does, just the general goal of the mon)However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing who not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Will-O-Wisp (qwilfish doesnt get WoW. if its meant to be respectively, its in the wrong order)and Taunt, but they have much stronger stats and abilities overall, and Omastar and Lycanroc-Midday are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings, and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelrock.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[<JustoonSmitts>, <239732>]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]
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JustoonSmitts said:
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**artwork by me**
No, not the bees! NOT THE BEES!!

[OVERVIEW]
Beedrill has a handful of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind (nitpicky but I'd probably make this the beginning of the second sentence, beedrill is an especially bad mon so emphasize the negatives first), but its poor Speed, weak bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to thier (their) better overall stats, typings, and abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc-Midday have much stronger offenses, speed, and provide stronger support (specify froslass/lycan having taunt, omastar having dual hazards). Beedrill also faces competition as a Bug-type from Scyther and Pinsir thanks to having stronger Attack, Speed (bulk too, which actually gives them a chance to set up), and more beneficial abilities.

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def/ 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by living one hit with a Focus Sash. However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing who not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Taunt, Spikes, and Will-O-Wisp, but they have much stronger stats and abilities overall, and Omastar and Lycanroc-Midday are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings (taunt mention here as well), and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelrock.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[<JustoonSmitts>, <239732>]]
- Quality checked by: [[UberSkitty, 355061], <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]
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qc 2/2, also i finally got a stamp :]
 
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[OVERVIEW]
While Beedrill has a handful of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind, its poor Speed, weak pitiful bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to having their access to Taunt, better overall stats, better typings, larger support move pools movepools, and more useful abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc-Midday have much stronger offenses, speed larger Speed stats, and provide stronger support, such as dual.hazards two entry hazards with Omastar and access to Taunt with Froslass and Lycanroc. Beedrill also faces competition as a Bug-type from Scyther and Pinsir thanks to having their stronger offenses, larger bulk, and more beneficial abilities.

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe [make sure you have spaces between the slashes]

[SET COMMENTS]
Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by living taking one hit with a Focus Sash. However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing, [AC] who which not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Taunt, Spikes, and Will-O-Wisp [RC] but they also have much stronger stats and abilities overall. [add period] and Omastar and Lycanroc-Midday are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings, access to Taunt, and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelerock.
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[OVERVIEW]
While Beedrill has a handful of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind, its poor Speed, pitiful bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to their access to Taunt, better overall stats, better typings, larger support movepools, and more useful abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc have much stronger offenses, larger Speed stats, and provide stronger support, such as two entry hazards with Omastar and access to Taunt with Froslass and Lycanroc. Beedrill also faces competition as a Bug-type from Scyther and Pinsir thanks to their stronger offenses, larger bulk, and more beneficial abilities.

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by taking one hit with a Focus Sash. However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing, which not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Taunt, Spikes, and Will-O-Wisp but also have much stronger stats and abilities overall. Omastar and Lycanroc are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings, access to Taunt, and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelerock.

GP 1/1
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frostration said:
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[OVERVIEW]
While Beedrill has a handful of good attributes such as a decent Attack and the ability to set up Toxic Spikes and Tailwind, its poor Speed, weak pitiful bulk, and bad offensive and defensive typing leave much to be desired. It is hopelessly outclassed by Weezing and Qwilfish as a Toxic Spikes setter thanks to having their access to Taunt, better overall stats, better typings, larger support move pools movepools, and more useful abilities. As a suicide lead, Froslass, Omastar, and Lycanroc-Midday have much stronger offenses, speed larger Speed stats, and provide stronger support, such as dual.hazards two entry hazards with Omastar and access to Taunt with Froslass and Lycanroc. Beedrill also faces competition as a Bug-type from Scyther and Pinsir thanks to having their stronger offenses, larger bulk, and more beneficial abilities.

[SET]
name: Suicide Lead
move 1: Toxic Spikes
move 2: Endeavor
move 3: Tailwind
move 4: X-Scissor
item: Focus Sash
ability: Swarm
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe [make sure you have spaces between the slashes]

[SET COMMENTS]
Beedrill can attempt to set up either Toxic Spikes or Tailwind for its team by living taking one hit with a Focus Sash. However, setting up Toxic Spikes is best left to Qwilfish and Weezing, [AC] who which not only provide stronger utility with moves such as Taunt, Spikes, and Will-O-Wisp [RC] but they also have much stronger stats and abilities overall. [add period] and Omastar and Lycanroc-Midday are better offensive suicide leads thanks to having stronger offensive stats and typings, access to Taunt, and in Lycanroc's case can pick off faster threats with Accelerock.
GP 1/1
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Thanks, frostration! This is implemented and ready to be uploaded!
 
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