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[SET]
Amoonguss @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Physically Defensive (Poison)
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Giga Drain
- Foul Play
- Spore
- Synthesis

[SET COMMENTS]
Amoonguss stands as a strong defensive piece for Poison teams thanks to its Grass typing enabling it to check many of the dangerous Ground- and Water-types of the tier such as Excadrill, Great Tusk, and Urshifu-R. Giga Drain serves double duty keeping Amoonguss healthy along with checking threats like Sandy Shocks, Hisuian Samurrot, and Swampert. Foul Play punishes setup attempts by the likes of Swords Dance Ogerpon-W and Dragon Dance Dragonite along with pressuring Ghost- and Psychic-types like Dragapult and Iron Boulder. Spore allows Amoonguss to put opposing threats to sleep which can allow for safe entry for its teammates.

Toxapex can serve as an excellent defensive partner for Amoonguss dealing with Fire- and Ice-types that stomp Amoonguss too like Cinderace, Iron Moth, and Weavile while Amoonguss can threaten the Ground- and Electric-types that scare Toxapex such as Iron Treads, Sandy Shocks, and Regieleki. Alolan Muk can support Amoonguss by checking problematic special attackers such as Spectrier, Greninja, and Hatterene. Assault Vest Galarian Slowking is capable of checking problematic special attackers such as Iron Moth, Heatran, Latios, and Zapdos with tools such as Earthquake and Ice Beam. Galarian Weezing provides Defog support in case Amoonguss loses its Heavy-Duty Boots and checking Ground- and Dragon-types Amoonguss struggles against such as Mamoswine, Swords Dance Garchomp, and Roaring Moon. Iron Moth can check Steel- and Ice-types for Amoonguss like Gholdengo, Corviknight, and Alolan Ninetales while greatly apprecating Amoonguss catching Choice Scarf Urshifu-R and Great Tusk. Okidogi and Sneasler can break through problematic special walls that sit on Amoonguss like Hisuian Goodra and Blissey while also being able to beatdown foes such as Heatran, Bisharp and Ursaluna. Choice Scarf Sneasler can also handle targets such as Choice Scarf Hoopa-U and Choice Specs Greninja for Amoonguss and greatly appreciates Spore giving it safe entry.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Poison
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Energy Ball can be used over Giga Drain giving a solid power increase enabling Amoonguss to always getting the OHKO Barraskewda and Great Tusk after a Headlong Rush while also having a favorable roll to break defensive Landorus-T Substitutes. Rocky Helmet is an option to help check foes such as Urshifu-R and Iron Hands more reliably but does give up the safety of Heavy-Duty Boots which can make Amoonguss less reliable against types such as Ground and Dark which rely on hazard stacking to wear down walls.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Grammar checked by:
 
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[SET]
Amoonguss @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Physically Defensive (Poison)
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Giga Drain
- Foul Play
- Spore
- Synthesis

[SET COMMENTS]
Amoonguss stands as a strong defensive piece for Poison teams thanks to its Grass typing enabling it to check many of the dangerous Ground- and Water-types of the tier such as Excadrill, Great Tusk, and Urshifu-R. Giga Drain serves double duty keeping Amoonguss healthy along with checking threats like Sandy Shocks, Hisuian Samurrot, and Swampert. Foul Play punishes setup attempts by the likes of Swords Dance Ogerpon-W and Dragon Dance Dragonite along with pressuring Ghost- and Psychic-types like Dragapult and Iron Boulder. Spore allows Amoonguss to pressure threats like Landorus and Bisharp out and shutdown an opposing threat for its teammates. (reword this, just say it puts one of them to sleep tbh. and be like which allows for easy for one of amoonguss's teammates.)

Toxapex can serve as an excellent defensive partner for Amoonguss dealing with Fire- and Ice-types that stomp Amoonguss too like Cinderace, Iron Moth, and Weavile while Amoonguss can threaten the Ground- and Electric-types that scare Toxapex such as Iron Treads, Sandy Shocks, and Regieleki. Alolan Muk can support Amoonguss by checking problematic special attackers such as Spectrier, Greninja, and Hatterene. Assault Vest Galarian Slowking is capable of checking problematic special attackers such as Iron Moth, Heatran, Latios, and Zapdos with tools such as Earthquake and Ice Beam. Galarian Weezing provides Defog support in case Amoonguss loses its Heavy-Duty Boots and checking Ground- and Dragon-types Amoonguss struggles against such as Mamoswine, Swords Dance Garchomp, and Roaring Moon. Iron Moth can check Steel- and Ice-types for Amoonguss like Gholdengo, Corviknight, and Alolan Ninetales while greatly apprecating Amoonguss catching Choice Scarf Urshifu-R and Great Tusk. Okidogi and Sneasler can break through problematic special walls that sit on Amoonguss like Hisuian Goodra and Blissey while also being able to beatdown foes such as Heatran, Bisharp and Ursaluna. Choice Scarf Sneasler can also handle targets such as Ogerpon-H(for the sake of the flow of the sentence, will just remove firepon as we just naturally outspeed it regardless of scarf or not) Choice Scarf Hoopa-U,(space)and Choice Specs Greninja for Amoonguss and greatly appreciatesapprecaties Spore giving it safe entry.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Poison
-----------
Energy Ball can be used over Giga Drain giving a solid power increase enabling Amoonguss to always getting the OHKO Barraskewda and Great Tusk after a Headlong Rush while also having a favorable roll to breaking defensive Landorus-T Substitutes. Stomping Tantrum can be used over Foul Play, providing a strong physical coverage option that can stomp Poison-types like Alolan Muk, Clodsire, and Glimmora. Stomping Tantrum also pairs well with Amoonguss's status spreading options, as attempting to spread Sleepstatus on a foe twice will boost its power, notably hitting bulkier threats like Toxapex and Gholdengo hard. However, Stomping Tantrum renders Amoonguss unable to hit Flying-types and Bug-types for unresisted damage and makes Amoonguss a worse overall check into Ogerpon-W.(is this ever really a consideration given we really prefer not being passive vs majority setup sweepers and like the dmg output vs gholdengo is still meh + its utilizing amoonguss as setup fodder. you can keep this if you want but i would just trim this down cuz yeah its shit.) Rocky Helmet is an option to help check foes such as Urshifu-R and Iron Hands more reliably but does give up the safety of Heavy-Duty Boots which can make Amoonguss less reliable in the Ground matchup.(but why tho.)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
qc 1/1 after implements
 
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