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[SET]
Zygarde @ Leftovers
Ability: Power Construct
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 212 Def / 44 SpD
Impish Nature
- Thousand Waves
- Coil
- Scale Shot
- Rest

[SET COMMENTS]

* Trapper Zygarde is an unique set choice that trades the defensive utility of Coil sets to take on a more situational setup sweeper role, often winning games on the spot if it finds a suitable target to trap, such as non-Tera Fairy Zygarde, defensive Primal Groudon, Ferrothorn, and Dondozo lacking a Water-type move. It best fits on balance and offense teams that have other means to deal with Ho-Oh, since this Coil set struggles specifically against Ho-Oh.

* Scale Shot's Speed boost gives Zygarde a means of deterring revenge kill attempts from faster threats such as Spectral Thief Marshadow, Eternatus, and offensive Primal Kyogre after two speed boosts. At +6 Attack, it OHKOes offensive Yveltal and offensive Ho-Oh with 4 hits, and OHKOes defensive Ho-Oh with 5 hits.

* 44 SpD EVs allow Zygarde to survive an unboosted Dynamax Cannon from Eternatus from full, while rest of the EVs are invested so as to maximize physical bulk in order to set up on foes such as Primal Groudon safely.

* Tera Fairy notably prevents phazing attempts from other Zygarde's Dragon Tail. Moreover, Zygarde-Complete's great special bulk with minimal investment lets it trap and set up on Arceus-Dark, and defensive Arceus-Fairy lacking Taunt. In a pinch, it also grants an immunity to Ultra Necrozma's Outrage and Eternatus's Dynamax Cannon.

* The lack of utility moves such as Glare and Dragon Tail renders Zygarde worse into physical attackers such as Swords Dance Primal Groudon, Zacian-C, Mega Salamence, and Dragon Dance Arceus-Ground. It is thus necessary not to rely on Zygarde for checking the aforementioned threats and it should be treated as a setup sweeper, instead of a wall.

* Opposing Tera Fairy Zygarde prevents trapper Zygarde from getting Speed boosts, with Glare and Toxic variants in particular being problematic due to higher PP and depleting Rest quickly, respectively. However, non-Tera Fairy sets are easily trapped. Furthermore, Primal Groudon users that occasionally stay on Zygarde to set up Stealth Rock or use Toxic, are also great targets for trapping with Thousand Waves. Similarly, Calm Mind Arceus-Dark can potentially lose against Tera Fairy Zygarde as Scale Shot lets the latter bypass Taunt.

* Teammates such as Primal Groudon, defensive Kyogre-Primal, and IronPress Garganacl are good partners that can compensate for the lack of defensive capabilities, particularly against threats like Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and Ho-Oh. Revenge killers such as Ditto and Choice Scarf Yveltal also aid Zygarde by stopping setup sweepers like Arceus-Ground and Eternatus from getting out of hand. They are especially valuable for covering the hyper offense matchup in which Zygarde tends to be mostly deadweight, bar niche cases such as trapping lead Ribombee after Terastalizing.

* Zygarde's trapping capabilities work excellently with wallbreakers like Swords Dance Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and Eruption Primal Groudon that appreciate its capability to force Terastallization from opposing Zygarde and weaken the opposing defensive core by eliminating walls such as Zygarde and Primal Groudon.

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[SET]
Zygarde @ Leftovers
Ability: Power Construct
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 212 Def / 44 SpD
Impish Nature
- Thousand Waves
- Coil
- Scale Shot
- Rest

[SET COMMENTS]

* Trapper Zygarde is an unique set choice that trades the defensive utility of Coil other sets to take on a more situational setup sweeper role, often winning games on the spot if it finds a suitable target to trap, such as non-Tera Fairy Zygarde, defensive Primal Groudon, and Dondozo lacking a Water-type move. This set does sacrifice the ability to properly check Ho-Oh which is worth mentioning given Coil Zygarde is going to be the mon tends to be the Ho-Oh switchin. Also what type of teams does this set fit on?

* Scale Shot's Speed boost gives Zygarde a means of deterring revenge kill attempts from faster threats such as Spectral Thief Marshadow, Eternatus, and offensive Primal Kyogre after two speed boosts. At +6 Attack, it OHKOes offensive Yveltal and offensive Ho-Oh with 4 hits, or 2HKO with 2 hits.

* 44 SpD EVs allow Zygarde to survive a Dynamax Cannon from Eternatus without an attack boosting item from full, while rest of the EVs are invested so as to maximize physical bulk.

* Tera Fairy notably prevents phazing attempts from other Zygarde's Dragon Tail. Moreover, Zygarde-Complete's great special bulk with minimal investment lets it trap and set up on defensive Arceus-Fairy and Arceus-Dark lacking Taunt. In a pinch, it also grants an immunity to Ultra Necrozma's Outrage and Eternatus's Dynamax Cannon.

* The lack of utility moves such as Glare and Dragon Tail renders Zygarde worse into physical attackers such as Swords Dance Primal Groudon, Zacian-C, Mega Salamence, and Dragon Dance Arceus-Ground. It is thus necessary not to rely on Zygarde for checking the aforementioned threats and it should be treated as a setup sweeper, instead of a wall.

* Before attempting to set up with Zygarde, it is advised to scout opposing Zygarde's Terastalization and moves. Dragon Tail variants lose the one-on-one if Zygarde has Terastallzed, and even Glare variants can be outlasted if their PP has been slightly depleted and when paralysis is factored. However, opposing Zygarde without Tera Fairy easily loses the matchup. This is a little difficult to follow. It is also worth mentioning that Tera Fairy Zygarde also denies Trapper Zygarde the Speed boost it may need to sweep after a successful trap.

* Primal Groudon users that occasionally stay on Zygarde to set up Stealth Rock or use Toxic, are also great targets for trapping with Thousand Waves. Similarly, Calm Mind Arceus-Dark can potentially lose one against Tera Fairy Zygarde as Scale Shot lets the latter bypass Taunt. This can be merged with the above bullet to make a 'mons that Zygarde can trap' bullet

* Teammates such as Primal Groudon, defensive Kyogre-Primal, and Garganacl either set or both? are good partners that can compensate for the lack of defensive capabilities, particularly against threats like Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and Ho-Oh. Revenge killers such as Ditto and Choice Scarf Yveltal also aid Zygarde by stopping setup sweepers like Arceus-Ground and Eternatus from getting out of hand. It is worth mentioning how Ditto and Yveltal cover the HO matchup where this Zygarde set tends to struggle.

* Zygarde's trapping capabilities work excellently with wallbreakers like Swords Dance Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and mixed Primal Groudonwhich set is this referring to? that appreciate its capability to force Terastallization from opposing Zygarde and weaken the opposing defensive core. Hence, it best fits on balance and offense teams. Would move this last sentence to the first bullet

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qc 2/2, mostly nitpicking
[SET]
Zygarde @ Leftovers
Ability: Power Construct
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 252 HP / 212 Def / 44 SpD
Impish Nature
- Thousand Waves
- Coil
- Scale Shot
- Rest

[SET COMMENTS]

* Trapper Zygarde is an unique set choice that trades the defensive utility of Coil sets to take on a more situational setup sweeper role, often winning games on the spot if it finds a suitable target to trap, such as non-Tera Fairy Zygarde, defensive Primal Groudon, and Dondozo lacking a Water-type move id rather mention ferro instead of dozo since it only wins via pp stall but up to u. It best fits on balance and offense teams that have other means to deal with Ho-Oh, since this Coil set struggles specifically against Ho-Oh.

* Scale Shot's Speed boost gives Zygarde a means of deterring revenge kill attempts from faster threats such as Spectral Thief Marshadow, Eternatus, and offensive Primal Kyogre after two speed boosts. At +6 Attack, it OHKOes offensive Yveltal and offensive Ho-Oh with 4 hits, or 2HKO with 2 hits. kinda filler since the latter could just whirlwind, but mention how it ohkos defensive hooh with 5 hits

* 44 SpD EVs allow Zygarde to survive an unboosted Dynamax Cannon from Eternatus without an attack boosting item from full, while rest of the EVs are invested so as to maximize physical bulk describe how this lets it setup on foes such as pdon easier.

* Tera Fairy notably prevents phazing attempts from other Zygarde's Dragon Tail. Moreover, Zygarde-Complete's great special bulk with minimal investment lets it trap and set up on defensive Arceus-Fairy and Arceus-Dark lacking Taunt Arceus-Dark, and defensive Arceus-Fairy lacking Taunt. In a pinch, it also grants an immunity to Ultra Necrozma's Outrage and Eternatus's Dynamax Cannon.

* The lack of utility moves such as Glare and Dragon Tail renders Zygarde worse into physical attackers such as Swords Dance Primal Groudon, Zacian-C, Mega Salamence, and Dragon Dance Arceus-Ground. It is thus necessary not to rely on Zygarde for checking the aforementioned threats and it should be treated as a setup sweeper, instead of a wall.

* Opposing Tera Fairy Zygarde prevents trapper Zygarde from getting Speed boosts, with Glare and Toxic variants in particular being problematic due to higher PP and depleting Rest quickly, respectively. Trapper Zygarde also needs to Tera Fairy in order to not get phazed by Dragon Tail. u already said that However, non-Tera Fairy sets are easily trapped. Furthermore, Primal Groudon users that occasionally stay on Zygarde to set up Stealth Rock or use Toxic, are also great targets for trapping with Thousand Waves. Similarly, Calm Mind Arceus-Dark can potentially lose against Tera Fairy Zygarde as Scale Shot lets the latter bypass Taunt.

* Teammates such as Primal Groudon, defensive Kyogre-Primal, and IronPress Garganacl are good partners that can compensate for the lack of defensive capabilities, particularly against threats like Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and Ho-Oh. Revenge killers such as Ditto and Choice Scarf Yveltal also aid Zygarde by stopping setup sweepers like Arceus-Ground and Eternatus from getting out of hand. They are especially valuable for covering the hyper offense matchup in which Zygarde tends to be deadweight could mention trapping ribombee but thats a bit niche.

* Zygarde's trapping capabilities work excellently with wallbreakers like Swords Dance Zacian-C, Dragon Dance Necrozma-DM, and Eruption Primal Groudon that appreciate its capability to force Terastallization from opposing Zygarde and weaken the opposing defensive core which mons in particular are getting weakened?.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/swas.487990/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bumboclaat.523420/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sami.604820/
Grammar checked by:
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