Copyediting Weezmer (Poison/Revamp) [QC:1/1] [GP:0/1]

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[SET]
Weezing-Galar @ Black Sludge
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Def / 12 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Strange Steam
- Defog
- Pain Split
- Will-O-Wisp

[SET COMMENTS]
Galarian Weezing serves a pivotal defensive role for Poison teams due to its solid support movepool alongside its vital immunities to Dragon- and Ground-type attacks courtesy of its Fairy typing and Levitate ability allowing it to wall otherwise problematic threats such as Swords Dance Garchomp, Great Tusk, and Dragonite. Strange Steam pressures Dragon- Fighting- and Dark-types like Roaring Moon, Iron Hands, and Sableye. Defog clears away hazards for teammates like Iron Moth and Alolan Muk preventing them from getting worn down. Pain Split enables Galarian Weezing to stay healthy long term alongside siphoning HP away from bulky walls such as Blissey and Clodsire. Finally Will-O-Wisp cripples physical attackers such as Gallade, Hisuian Goodra, and Azumarill. 12 Speed EVs enables Galarian Weezing to outspeed Tyranitar and burn it.

Galarian Weezing greatly appreciates special walls like Alolan Muk which can handle problematic special attackers such as Flutter Mane, Hatterene, and Greninja. Assault Vest Galarian Slowking can also assist in handling special attackers such as Choice Specs Latios, Heatran, and Zapdos for Galarian Weezing. Toxapex can assist into Steel-, Water-, and Fire-types that Galarian Weezing can like Scizor, Barraskewda, and Cinderace along with being able to more comfortably take Knock Offs from foes like Empoleon and Tornadus-T. Amoonguss can similarly help out against Water-types like Ogerpon-W and Keldeo alongside being able to handle Ground-types Galarian Weezing struggles into like Sandy Shocks and Mold Breaker Excadrill. Iron Moth can break through Steel-types such as Gholdengo, Scizor, and Archaludon for Galarian Weezing while appreciating Defog to prevent it from being worn down. Choice Scarf Sneasler can check threats that can come in on Galarian Weezing freely such as Ogerpon-H, Blissey, and Heatran alongside being able to outspeed and check Dark-types that can handle Galarian Weezing like Choice Specs Greninja and Hoopa-U. Okidogi greatly apprecaites Galarian Weezing's Will-O-Wisp enabling Okidogi to comfortably set up with Bulk Up and in return it can check threats like Garganacl, Bisharp, and Terapagos for Galarian Weezing.


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[SET]
Weezing-Galar @ Black Sludge
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Def / 12 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Strange Steam
- Defog
- Pain Split
- Will-O-Wisp

[SET COMMENTS]
Galarian Weezing serves a pivotal defensive role for Poison teams due to its solid support movepool alongside its vital immunities to Dragon- and Ground-type attacks curtsy courtesy of its Fairy typing and Levitate ability allowing it to wall otherwise problematic threats such as Swords Dance Garchomp, Great Tusk, and Physical (I dont think not physical dragonite gets used enough to warrant this distinction) Dragonite. Strange Steam pressures Dragon- Fighting- and Dark-types like Roaring Moon, Iron Hands, and Sableye. Defog clears away hazards for teammates like Iron Moth and Alolan Muk preventing them from getting worn down. Pain Split enables Galarian Weezing to stay healthy long term alongside siphoning HP away from bulky walls such as Blissey and Clodsire. Finally Will-O-Wisp cripples physical attackers such as Gallade, Kleavor, and Mamoswine (id prefer if we had 2 examples of pokemon that would actually like to attack weezing, gallade was a good one idk about these 2). 12 Speed EVs enables Galarian Weezing to outspeed Tyranitar and burn it.

Galarian Weezing greatly appreciates special walls like Alolan Muk which can handle problematic special attackers such as Flutter Mane, Hatterene, and Greninja for Galarian Weezing (redundant). Assault Vest Galarian (Slowking i assume) can also assist in handle handling special attackers such as Choice Specs Latios, Heatran, and Zapdos for Galarian Weezing. Toxapex can assist into Steel- and Water and Fire-types that Galarian Weezing can struggle into handle (reword this to have it make sense) like Scizor, Barraskewda, and Cinderace along with being able to more comfortably take Knock Offs from foes like Empoleon and Tornadus-T preventing Galarian Weezing from losing its Black Sludge. Amoonguss can similarly help out against Water-types like Ogerpon-W and Keldeo alongside being able to handle Ground-types Galarian Weezing struggles into like Sandy Shocks, Mold Breaker Excadrill, and Iron Treads (usually no steel move). Iron Moth can break through Steel-types such as Gholdengo, Scizor, and Archaludon for Galarian Weezing while apprecating appreciating (typo and capitalize the D in Defog ->) Defog to prevent it from being worn (add a space) down. Choice Scarf Sneasler can check threats that effortlessly can come in on Galarian Weezing freely such as Ogerpon-H, Blissey, and Heatran alongside being able to outspeed and check Dark-types that can handle Galarian Weezing like Choice Specs Greninja and Hoopa-U. Okidogi greatly apprecaites Galarian Weezing's Will-O-Wisp enabling Okidogi to comfortably setup up with Bulk Up and in return it can check threats like Garganacal (true I guess but surely we can pick an example players will actually see if they play 100 games, either way you spelled it wrong), Bisharp, and Terapagos for Galarian Weezing.


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