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[SET]
Choice Band (Hoopa-unbound) @ Choice Band
Ability: Magician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Hyperspace Fury
- Drain Punch
- Zen Headbutt
- Gunk Shot / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

Hoopa-U finds itself a niche as a powerful wallbreaker; it leverages its stab and coverage to decimate defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Gholdengo, and Alomomola. HyperSpace Fury ensures Pokemon like Alomomola and Gliscor cannot scout safely as it bypasses Protect, leaving them unable to properly check Hoopa-U as it becomes a spammable option with Choice Band. Drain Punch targets foes like Kingambit and Heatran while increasing its longevity. Gunk Shot eviscerates Clefable and Tapu Fini, which would otherwise check Hoopa-U. Knock Off another potential option that can remove key items from foes like Landorus-T, Zapdos, and Moltres. Hoopa-U can also run an Adamant nature to get guaranteed OHKOs on Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and Slowbro with Hyperspace Fury. However, an adamant nature means it gets outspeed by foes like Defensive Landorus-T, Offensive Heatran, and Timid Raging Bolt.

Hoopa-U is used on Bulky Offense and Balance teams as these teams value its ability to pressure common defensive cores including Pokemon such as Gliscor, Toxapex, and Heatran. However, Hoopa is very frail and provides little defensive value, so it appreciates teammates like Alomomola, Landorus-T, and Corviknight, that can help Hoopa-U safely pivot into Pokemon it does well against, such as Gholdengo and Gliscor. Hoopa is also vulnerable to faster threats with U-turn like Landorus-T and Mega Lopunny. Therefore it appreciates defensive pieces that can take a hit such and provide slow pivoting such as Corviknight and Alomomola. Hoopa-U also has a very middling speed tier, leaving it outsped by Pokemon like Mega Medicham, Volcarona, and Tapu Lele. Therefore, teammates like Iron Valiant, Garchomp, and Mega Scizor are appreciated to help offensively pressure them. In return, Hoopa-U handles Pecharunt, Slowbro, and Clefable for them. Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to Pursuit-trapping from Pokemon like Kingambit and Mega Tyranitar that target its weaker defense stat, thus Pokemon that can check them, such as Zamazenta, Corviknight, and Great Tusk. The latter two provide the crucial entry hazard removal to maintain Hoopa-U's longevity. Galarian Slowking is another partner that can get Hoopa-U in safely via Chilly Reception and sets Future Fight to assist breaking through bulkier teams, while also being a solid check to foes like Iron valiant and Tapu Koko which force out Hoopa-U.

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qc 1/2
[SET]
Choice Band (Hoopa-unbound) @ Choice Band
Ability: Magician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Hyperspace Fury
- Drain Punch
- Zen Headbutt
- Gunk Shot

[SET COMMENTS]

Hoopa-U finds itself a niche as a balance breaker powerful wallbreaker; it leverages its stab and coverage to decimate defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Gholdengo, Alomomola and Slowbro remove one of these cuz the list is too long. HyperSpace Fury ensures Pokemon like Alomomola and Gliscor cannot scout safely as it bypasses Protect, leaving them unable to properly check Hoopa-U mention how spammable it becomes with choice band. Drain Punch targets foes like Kingambit and Heatran while increasing its longevity. Gunk Shot eviscerates Clefable and Tapu Fini, which would otherwise check Hoopa-U. Choice Band is preferred as it gives it the chance to OHKO foes like Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and a guaranteed OHKO on Clefable with Gunk Shot. kinda odd to point this to cb specifically like what else are we gonna run Hoopa-U can also run an Adamant nature to get guaranteed OHKOs on Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and Slowbro with Hyperspace Fury. However, an adamant nature means it gets outspeed by foes like Defensive Landorus-T, Heatran, and Volcanion.

Hoopa-U is mainly on Bulky Offense and Balance teams as these teams value its ability to pressure common defensive cores like Gliscor + Toxapex and Slowbro + Heatran including Pokemon such as Gliscor, Toxapex, and Heatran. However, Hoopa is very frail and provides little defensive value, so it appreciates teammates like Alomomola, Landorus-T, and Corviknight., (RP) (AC) that can help Hoopa-U safely pivot into Pokemon it does well against, such as Gholdengo and Gliscor. In addition to teleport users such as Slowbro and Galarian Slowbro. The latter two provide Future Sight, which greatly pressures potential switch ins like Toxapex from scouting with Regenerator. double psychic is sus Hoopa-U also has a very middling speed tier, leaving it outsped by Pokemon like Mega Medicham, Volcarona, and Gholdengo Tapu Lele u beat ghold tho. Therefore, teammates like Ogerpon-W, Zamazenta, and Garchomp Iron Valiant, Garchomp, and Mega Scizor are appreciated to help offensively pressure them. In return, Hoopa-U handles Pecharunt, Slowbro, and Clefable for them. Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to priority users Pursuit-trapping from Pokemon like Kingambit and Mega Scizor Tyranitar that target its weaker defense stat, thus Pokemon that can check them, such as Zamazenta, Corviknight, and Great Tusk. The latter two provide the crucial entry hazard removal to maintain Hoopa-U's longevity.


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Would like to check this again before giving the QC 2/2.

[SET]
Choice Band (Hoopa-unbound) @ Choice Band
Ability: Magician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Hyperspace Fury
- Drain Punch
- Zen Headbutt
- Gunk Shot / Knock Off (an Offensive Knock Off provides extremely valuable utility on balance teams and it is especially useful for Hoopa to remove crucial items like Rocky Helmet from Landorus-T, Heavy-Duty Boots from the likes of Zapdos and Moltres.)

[SET COMMENTS]

Hoopa-U finds itself a niche as a powerful wallbreaker; it leverages its stab and coverage to decimate defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Gholdengo, and Alomomola. HyperSpace Fury ensures Pokemon like Alomomola and Gliscor cannot scout safely as it bypasses Protect, leaving them unable to properly check Hoopa-U as it becomes a spammable option with Choice Band. Drain Punch targets foes like Kingambit and Heatran while increasing its longevity. Gunk Shot eviscerates Clefable and Tapu Fini, which would otherwise check Hoopa-U. (Mention about Knock off here) Hoopa-U can also run an Adamant nature to get guaranteed OHKOs on Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and Slowbro with Hyperspace Fury. However, an adamant nature means it gets outspeed by foes like Defensive Landorus-T, Heatran, and Volcanion.

Hoopa-U is mainly (?) on Bulky Offense and Balance teams as these teams value its ability to pressure common defensive cores including Pokemon such as Gliscor, Toxapex, and Heatran. However, Hoopa is very frail and provides little defensive value, so it appreciates teammates like Alomomola, Landorus-T, and Corviknight, that can help Hoopa-U safely pivot into Pokemon it does well against, such as Gholdengo and Gliscor. Hoopa-U also has a very middling speed tier, leaving it outsped by Pokemon like Mega Medicham, Volcarona, and Tapu Lele. Therefore, teammates like Iron Valiant, Garchomp, and Mega Scizor are appreciated to help offensively pressure them. In return, Hoopa-U handles Pecharunt, Slowbro, and Clefable for them. Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to Pursuit-trapping from Pokemon like Kingambit and Mega Tyranitar that target its weaker defense stat, thus Pokemon that can check them, such as Zamazenta, Corviknight, and Great Tusk. The latter two provide the crucial entry hazard removal to maintain Hoopa-U's longevity. (Can also mention about Slowking-G here as it helps with slow pivoting, setting Future sight, and walling common Hoopa answers like Iron Valiant etc.)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/username.XXXXXX/
Quality checked by:
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QC 2/2, Good work

[SET]
Choice Band (Hoopa-unbound) @ Choice Band
Ability: Magician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Hyperspace Fury
- Drain Punch
- Zen Headbutt
- Gunk Shot / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

Hoopa-U finds itself a niche as a powerful wallbreaker; it leverages its stab and coverage to decimate defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Gholdengo, and Alomomola. HyperSpace Fury ensures Pokemon like Alomomola and Gliscor cannot scout safely as it bypasses Protect, leaving them unable to properly check Hoopa-U as it becomes a spammable option with Choice Band. Drain Punch targets foes like Kingambit and Heatran while increasing its longevity. Gunk Shot eviscerates Clefable and Tapu Fini, which would otherwise check Hoopa-U. Knock Off another potential option that can remove key items from foes like Landorus-T, Zapdos, and Moltres. Hoopa-U can also run an Adamant nature to get guaranteed OHKOs on Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and Slowbro with Hyperspace Fury. However, an adamant nature means it gets outspeed by foes like Defensive Landorus-T, Heatran, and Volcanion. (The "Defensive" before the examples kinda give an impression that adamnt Hoopa gets outsped by defensive Heatran. Also volcanion is not a great example here; maybe add something like a Max Speed Bolt)

Hoopa-U is used on Bulky Offense and Balance teams as these teams value its ability to pressure common defensive cores including Pokemon such as Gliscor, Toxapex, and Heatran. However, Hoopa is very frail and provides little defensive value, so it appreciates teammates like Alomomola, Landorus-T, and Corviknight, that can help Hoopa-U safely pivot into Pokemon it does well against, such as Gholdengo and Gliscor. (Can mention about Hoopa's U-Turn weakness and how slow pivots help it too) Hoopa-U also has a very middling speed tier, leaving it outsped by Pokemon like Mega Medicham, Volcarona, and Tapu Lele. Therefore, teammates like Iron Valiant, Garchomp, and Mega Scizor are appreciated to help offensively pressure them. In return, Hoopa-U handles Pecharunt, Slowbro, and Clefable for them. Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to Pursuit-trapping from Pokemon like Kingambit and Mega Tyranitar that target its weaker defense stat, thus Pokemon that can check them, such as Zamazenta, Corviknight, and Great Tusk. The latter two provide the crucial entry hazard removal to maintain Hoopa-U's longevity. Galarian Slowking is another partner that can get Hoopa-U in safely via Chilly Reception and sets Future Fight to assist breaking through bulkier teams, while also being a solid check to foes like Iron valiant and Tapu Koko which forces force out Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]
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I'd like to take a second look after this is implemented

[SET]
Choice Band (Hoopa-unbound Hoopa-Unbound) @ Choice Band
Ability: Magician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Hyperspace Fury
- Drain Punch
- Zen Headbutt
- Gunk Shot / Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

Hoopa-U finds itself a niche as a powerful wallbreaker; (removed semicolon) that it leverages its stab STAB moves and coverage to decimate defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Gholdengo, and Alomomola. HyperSpace Hyperspace Fury is a spammable option with Choice Band that ensures Pokemon like Alomomola and Gliscor cannot scout safely, (AC) as it bypasses Protect, leaving them unable to properly check Hoopa-U as it becomes a spammable option with Choice Band. Drain Punch targets foes like Kingambit and Heatran while increasing its Hoopa-U's longevity. Gunk Shot eviscerates Clefable and Tapu Fini, which would otherwise check Hoopa-U. Knock Off is another potential option that can remove key items from foes like Landorus-T, Zapdos, and Moltres. Hoopa-U can also run an Adamant nature to get guaranteed OHKOs on Toxapex with Zen Headbutt and Slowbro with Hyperspace Fury. However, an adamant nature (repetition) this means it gets outspeed outsped by foes like Defensive defensive Landorus-T, Offensive offensive Heatran, and Timid Raging Bolt.

Hoopa-U is used on Bulky Offense bulky offense and Balance balance teams, (AC) as these teams they (repetition) value its ability to pressure common defensive cores including Pokemon such as Gliscor, Toxapex, and Heatran. However, Hoopa Hoopa-U is very frail and provides little defensive value, so it appreciates teammates like Alomomola, Landorus-T, and Corviknight, (RC) that can help Hoopa-U it safely pivot into Pokemon it does well against, such as Gholdengo and Gliscor. Hoopa Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to faster threats with U-turn like Landorus-T and Mega Lopunny.; (removed period, added semicolon) Therefore therefore, (AC) it appreciates defensive pieces that can take a hit such and provide slow pivoting such as Corviknight and Alomomola. Hoopa-U also has a very middling speed Speed tier, leaving it outsped by Pokemon like Mega Medicham, Volcarona, and Tapu Lele. Therefore, teammates like Iron Valiant, Garchomp, and Mega Scizor are appreciated to help offensively pressure them. In return, Hoopa-U handles Pecharunt, Slowbro, and Clefable for them. Hoopa-U is also vulnerable to Pursuit-trapping Pursuit trapping from Pokemon like Kingambit and Mega Tyranitar that target its weaker defense Defense stat,; (removed comma, added semicolon) thus, (AC) Pokemon that can check them, (RC) such as Zamazenta, Corviknight, and Great Tusk make for good partners. The latter two also provide the crucial entry hazard removal to maintain Hoopa-U's longevity. Galarian Slowking is another partner that can get Hoopa-U in safely via Chilly Reception and sets set Future Fight to assist with breaking through bulkier teams, (RC) while also being a solid check to foes like Iron valiant Valiant and Tapu Koko, (AC) which force out Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/wildfiree.542295/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/username.XXXXXX/
Quality checked by:
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