Copyediting Fogbound Lake (Goodra Hisui) [GP: 0/1]

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[SET]
Offensive Tank (Goodra-Hisui) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sap Sipper
EVs: 156 HP / 176 SpA / 176 Spe
Modest Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Flash Cannon
- Flamethrower / Earthquake
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its vast coverage, impressive special bulk, and solid defensive typing, Hisuian Goodra is a notable tank on offensive teams for its ability to help check Iron Moth, Hydrapple, Enamorus, and special attacking Aegislash, leveraging its plethora of opportunities against these Pokemon to fire off its disruptive attacks. Flash Cannon is Hisuian Goodra's preferred Steel-type STAB of choice due to its greater effectiveness against common Pokemon that are weak to it, such as Tyranitar and Clefable, notably 2HKOing both. Flamethrower hits opposing Steel-type Pokemon such as Swords Dance Aegislash and Scizor, preventing them from potentially taking advantage of it. However, Earthquake trades the ability to hit some of these Pokemon for the ability to OHKO Iron Moth from full HP, preventing the latter from overwhelming Hisuian Goodra with repeated uses of Fiery Dance in the long-run. Lastly, Knock Off adds vital utility to Hisuian Goodra's toolkit by allowing it to remove Leftovers from common defensive Pokemon such as Hippowdon and Swampert and Heavy-Duty Boots from Amoonguss and Blissey. In particular, thanks to Sap Sipper, Hisuian Goodra is an excellent absorber of Celesteela's Leech Seed and Amoonguss's Spore, which would otherwise be especially irritating for its teammates to handle, in addition to blocking the former’s recovery in conjunction with Knock Off’s removal of Leftovers. 176 Speed EVs allow Hisuian Goodra to outpace Ursaluna and Azumarill, while 176 Special Attack EVs ensure an OHKO on Hydrapple with Draco Meteor. Due to how well its unique defensive properties complement its offensive potential, Hisuian Goodra partners particularly well with other special attacking teammates such as Aegislash, Enamorus, and Alakazam, which appreciate its ability to sponge hits from checks such as Celesteela and Scizor, making it easier for these Pokemon to get past them in the long-run. In return, these Pokemon also assist with patching up Hisuian Goodra's weakness to common physical threats such as Mega Aerodactyl, Life Orb Mienshao, and Swords Dance Rillaboom. Additionally, dedicated physical walls such as Rotom-W, Mega Venusaur, and Buzzwole are similarly efficacious teammates that also appreciate Hisuian Goodra's ability to check problematic special attackers such as Hydrapple and Enamorus that would otherwise take advantage of them. Lastly, due to the value Hisuian Goodra's Knock Off provides, entry hazards from the likes of Skarmory and Swampert synergise especially well with it to help overload opposing defensive staples such as Amoonguss, Hippowdon, and Blissey while benefiting from Hisuian Goodra deterring common Knock Off absorbers such as Clefable and Scizor.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET]
Offensive Tank (Goodra-Hisui) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sap Sipper
EVs: 156 HP / 176 SpA / 176 Spe
Modest Nature
- Draco Meteor
- Flash Cannon
- Flamethrower / Earthquake
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its vast coverage, impressive special bulk, and solid defensive typing, Hisuian Goodra is a notable tank on offensive teams for its ability to help check Iron Moth, Hydrapple, Enamorus, and special attacking Aegislash, leveraging its plethora of opportunities against these Pokemon to fire off its disruptive attacks. Flash Cannon is Hisuian Goodra's preferred Steel-type STAB of choice due to its greater effectiveness against common Pokemon that are weak to it, such as Tyranitar and Clefable, notably 2HKOing both. Flamethrower critically hits opposing Steel-type Pokemon such as Swords Dance Aegislash and Scizor, preventing them from potentially taking advantage of it. However, Earthquake trades the ability to hit some of these Pokemon for the notable ability to OHKO Iron Moth from full HP. Lastly, Knock Off provides vital utility to Hisuian Goodra's toolkit by allowing it to remove Leftovers from common defensive Pokemon such as Hippowdon, Celesteela, and Swampert and Heavy-Duty Boots from Amoonguss and Blissey. In particular, thanks to Sap Sipper, Hisuian Goodra is an excellent absorber of Celesteela's Leech Seed and Amoonguss's Spore. These alignments which would otherwise be especially irritating for its teammates to handle I would emphasize that it blocking Leech Seed in conjunction with Knock Off can reliably cut off Steela's recovery methods, which is its most crucial role. 176 Speed EVs allow Hisuian Goodra to outpace Ursaluna and Azumarill, while 176 Special Attack EVs ensure an OHKO on Hydrapple with Draco Meteor. Due to how well several of its unique defensive properties complement its offenses, Hisuian Goodra partners particularly well with other special attacking teammates such as Aegislash, Enamorus, and Alakazam, which appreciate its ability to sponge hits from checks such as Celesteela and Scizor, making it easier for these Pokemon to get past them in the long-run. In return, these Pokemon also assist with patching up Hisuian Goodra's weakness to common physical threats such as Mega Aerodactyl, Life Orb Mienshao, and Swords Dance Rillaboom. Additionally, dedicated physical walls such as Rotom-W, Mega Venusaur, and Buzzwole are similarly efficacious teammates that also appreciate Hisuian Goodra's ability to check problematic special attackers such as Hydrapple and Enamorus that would otherwise take advantage of them. Lastly, due to the value Hisuian Goodra's Knock Off provides, entry hazards from the likes of Skarmory and Swampert synergise especially well with it to help overload opposing defensive staples such as Amoonguss, Hippowdon, and Blissey while benefiting from Hisuian Goodra deterring common Knock Off absorbers such as Clefable and Scizor.

Lot of buzzwords like "critically", "vital", "notable". Left them in but unsure if they are necessary or add unnecessary wordiness. Your call.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/iride.546157/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/danbear02.589016/
Grammar checked by:
Insert user here

Good work as always, 1/1 when implemented
 
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