Copyediting I love it when they run (All out attack Mega Mawile)[QC 2/2][0/1 gp]

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[SET]
All-out attacker (Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor,the former not being a reliable switch in at all as Ice Punch OHKOs even after Intimidate. Thunder Punch hits Defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex attempting to come in on Play Rough. Fire Fang nails Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Melmetal. Knock Off an another option that can be utilized to discourage Gholdengo, as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile.

Mawile is found mostly on Bulky Offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Ting-Lu and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes an effective partner as it provides a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces out Mega-Mawile. In return, Mawile is able to punch holes in its checks like Corvknight and Slowbro. Additionally, Mawile appreciates hazard support from teammates such as the aforementioned Great Tusk and Landorus-T as it makes Mega Mawile more difficult than it already is to switch into. Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos, limiting their ability to click Defog. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos.


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[SET]
All-out attacker (Mawile-mega Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor talk about how it prevents landoT from being a reliable switch in (cuz of intim). Thunder Punch hits Defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex mention how it can punish pex for trying to predict play rough. Fire Fang nails usual switch-ins Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Skarmory Gholdengo too niche. Knock Off an another option that can be be utilized to further discourage Gholdengo, (AC) and as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to doing substantial damage to Melmetal another check. preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile. ig u could say it does more to melmetal and magnezone but thats kinda whatever idt its needed

Mawile is found mostly on Bulky Offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Landorus-T, Gliscor would rather mention ting lu cuz mmaw outspeeds but up to u, and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes an effective partner as it provides a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces out Mega-Mawile talk about mmaw appreciating hazard support too. Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on its switch-ins like Gliscor and Skarmory the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos could mention mmaw stopping them from reliably defogging too. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking Pokemon Mawile takes advantage of. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos.

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qc 1/2
[SET]
All-out attacker (Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]

Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor. The former not being a reliable switch in at all as Ice Punch OHKOs even after Intimidate. Thunder Punch hits Defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex attempting to come in on Play Rough. Fire Fang nails Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Gholdengo. Knock Off an another option that can be utilized to further discourage Gholdengo, as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile.

Mawile is found mostly on Bulky Offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Ting-Lu and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes an effective partner as it provides a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces out Mega-Mawile. Additionally, Mawile appreciates hazard support from teammates such as the aforementioned Great Tusk and Landorus-T as it makes it more difficult than it already is to switch into. Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos, (AC) limiting their ability to click Defog grammar thing, wdym "latter two" u only gave 2 examples. Mega Mawile also limit the latter two ability to click Defog. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos.

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[SET]
All-out attacker (Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor., (AC) Tthe former not being a reliable switch in at all as Ice Punch OHKOs even after Intimidate. gp type change but it didnt make sense Thunder Punch hits Defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex attempting to come in on Play Rough. Fire Fang nails Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Gholdengo Melmetal knock beats dengo better. Knock Off an another option that can be utilized to further discourage Gholdengo, as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile.

Mawile is found mostly on Bulky Offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Ting-Lu and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes an effective partner as it provides a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces out Mega-Mawile. what does maw do in return? Additionally, Mawile appreciates hazard support from teammates such as the aforementioned Great Tusk and Landorus-T as it makes it more difficult than it already is to switch into makes it harder for who to switch in?. Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos, limiting their ability to click Defog. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos. should mention more things that mmaw breaks given that it is a breaker, can talk about stuff like mola


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[SET]
All-Out Attacker (Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite Mawilite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker wallbreaker, (AC) boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice Punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor, with the former not being a reliable switch in switch-in at all, (AC) as Ice Punch OHKOs OHKOes even after Intimidate. Thunder Punch hits defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex attempting to come in on Play Rough. Fire Fang nails Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Melmetal. Knock Off an is another option that can be utilized to discourage Gholdengo, as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile.

Mega Mawile is found mostly on bulky offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's its ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Ting-Lu and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes for an effective partner, (AC) as it provides is a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster switch-in to faster Ground-type foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces force out Mega-Mawile Mega Mawile. (reworded to improve clarity) In return, Mega Mawile is able to punch holes in its checks like Corvknight Corviknight and Slowbro. Additionally, Mega Mawile appreciates entry hazard support from teammates such as the aforementioned Great Tusk and Landorus-T, (AC) as it makes Mega Mawile more difficult than it already is to switch into (could perhaps mention how exactly entry hazard support makes Mega Mawile more difficult to switch into). Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos, limiting their ability to click Defog. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile it in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards, (AC) so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos.


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1/1 GP Team done, credit both of us
[SET]
All-out Attacker (Mawile-Mega) @ Mawillite Mawilite
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 204 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Ice Punch
- Thunder Punch
- Fire Fang / Knock Off / Brick Break

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Mawile is a truly devastating wall breaker wallbreaker, (AC) boasting a wide array of coverage options that makes it a terror for defensive teams to pivot around safely. Ice Punch targets foes like Landorus-T and Gliscor, with the former not being a reliable switch in switch-in at all, (AC) as Ice Punch OHKOs OHKOes it even after Intimidate. Thunder Punch hits defensive Water-type Pokemon like Slowbro, Alomomola, and Toxapex attempting to come in on Play Rough. Fire Fang nails Steel-types like Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, and Melmetal. Knock Off an is another option that can be utilized to discourage Gholdengo, as well as stopping Pecharunt from switching in. Lastly, Brick Break can be used to completely eviscerate Kingambit, in addition to preventing Heatran from otherwise walling Mega Mawile.
The EV spread needs to be explained because it's not 252/252. What does the speed do?

Mega Mawile is found mostly on bulky offense teams. These teams appreciate Mawile's its ability to exert pressure on common defensive staples like Ting-Lu and Ferrothorn. Landorus-T makes an effective partner, (AC) as it provides is a crucial Ground-Type switch in for Mega-Mawile against faster switch-in to faster Ground-type foes like Great Tusk and opposing Landorus-T that forces force out Mega-Mawile Mega Mawile. (reworded to improve clarity) In return, Mega Mawile is able to punch holes in its checks like Corvknight Corviknight and Slowbro. Additionally, Mega Mawile appreciates entry hazard support from teammates such as the aforementioned Great Tusk and Landorus-T as it makes Mega Mawile more difficult than it already is to switch into. (helps with repetition of mega mawile) Mega Mawile in return puts great pressure on the Flying-types that Landorus-T brings in, such as Tornadus-T and Zapdos, limiting their ability to click use Defog. It also values pivot support from allies such as Raging Bolt and Tapu Koko bringing Mega Mawile it in on their checks like Ferrothorn and Galarian Slowking. Mega Mawile is prone to getting worn down fast with hazards, (AC) so it appreciates hazard removal from teammates like Great Tusk and Terapagos.


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